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Posted: 19 years ago
awwww how sweet but i feel bad for sonia
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Posted: 19 years ago
the last two parts were awesome! cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
That was a mindblowing n touching part!!!!cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 64

Kripa was so happy that she said her MOM!.She just hugs her daughter,Tina.She hugged her like,she was hungry of her daughters laugh.While they both were hugging,Angad was seeing them from the door,smiling.

Angad leaved to his room and Tina also leaves as Sonia was calling her.Angad entered the room and saw Sonia cleaning up the room.Tina also Entered.

T:Yes Aunty!

Sonia looked at her.She came close to her and bend down.

S:What did you said?

T:Yes Aunty!

Sonia feels hurt.Angad comes to her and also bends.

A:Sonia...From today she got her real mother so i told her to call Kripa her mother...i hope you don't mind and is not hurt..

S(pretends like happy):No i am happy..I am happy for her that she finally got her real mother....

She stands up and turns around opposite to Angad.She had tears in her eyes.

S:I was tired of taking care of Tina..now i'll be free that i don't have any responsibility of her..i am relived now....

Angad also stands up and sadly taps her shoulder and makes her turn around to face her.

A:I am Sorry..I hurted you...i think i shouldn't done this....i am sorry...i never gave you any happiness after you married..

S:Its ok..i don't mind..

A:But i know you are hurted and you hurtness is coming out by your eyes..

He wipes Sonia's tears and hugs her.While Kripa was going downstairs when she saw Angad's room door open.She sees Sonia hugging Angad and she gets lil jealous but controls herself because Sonia is married to Angad and now she don't have any right on him.She just leaves downstairs.Tina sees Kripa and runs out of the room to her.Kripa picks her up in her arms.They played for most of the time.Angad went to his office.

We see the same man in black suit but can't see his face.

Man:Oh to woh wapis aa gayi hai..

Person:Yes Sir!

Man:How she came here?

Person:We don't know sir!

Man:mera badla abhi tak pura nahi hua hai...mujhe oun ki sari property chahiye...Just Kidnap Angad's daughter..

And he start laughing really loud.At Office,Angad enters and calls Mahesh in his office.

A:Mahesh..please cancel all my meetings..

M:Ok as you wish..!!

Mahesh leaves while Kripa and Tina were playing with water in the House Lawn.Kripa falls on the floor and tina laughs.Kripa was covered in mud and her clothes were dirty now.

K:Tina what you did to my clothes..

T:sorry Mom!

K:Its ok..i'll be back after changing..just wait ok..

T:Ok..

Kripa leaves to her room and changes.Tina was again playing with water when we see a Man coming towards Tina.He comes and takes out a tissue.He puts the tissue slowly on her mouth and picks her up.He quickly runs from there after picking her up.Kripa comes back and sees That Tina wasn't there.She calls out her name but she didn't replied.She entered the house and again called her name but she didn't replied.Kripa asked dadi but Dadi said that she didn't saw Tina from whole day.She asked Sonia but she said the last time she saw her was when she was with her in her room.

Kripa was all worried now.She told everyone that Tina is missing.Kripa called ANgad that Angad might took her with him.But all in vain,Angad also got worried.He came home and was told that Tina is no where in the house.Angad saw in the streets and asked from the neighbours but there was no sign of her.

To Be Continued..
Preview:Angad is worried about Tina.WHat will Happen now,Now Angad will get Tina or not.Or else he will loose her for his entire life like once he loosed Kripa?
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Posted: 19 years ago
its great I am sure he will find her
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Posted: 19 years ago
i must say that those were some fab parts!! n my prediction is that he will find tina!!! take care n cont.soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 65

Angad saw in the streets and asked from the neighbours but there was no sign of her.Angad comes home and throws his head in his hands in desperate.

D:Beta kuch pata chala..

A:Nahi dadi...Mujhe Police mein inform karna chahiye..

He gets up and calls to Police Station.After an hour,The poclice inspector reach at their house.

PI:Mr Khanna..Kya aap ki kisi ke sath koi dushmani thi ya hai?

A:Jee nahi Inspector..mujhe to bilkul samajh nahi aa rahi ke woh hai kon..

PI:Zayada ter to Kidnapers hote hain woh paison ke liye karte hain...to i am sure ke woh zaroor phone karen ge...is liye mein aap logon la phone trace karna chahon ga...yehi aik raasta hai..

A:Ok..

The Police Inspectore goes where the phone was.The all wait for the call teribly.Angad was dying minute by minute to just listen and to talk her daughter.Sonia hands him a glass of water but he doesn't takes the water.

A:I don't know who kidnapped her Sonia..She didn't done someone's bad...she is a kid..i don't know that she even ate something or not then how can i drink a glass of water.....

Finally after half an hour,the phone bell rings.Angad runs to the phone and the PI traces the phone call.

A:Hello..

Kidnappers:Hello..Kya mein Angad Khanna se baat kar sakta hon?

A:Haan mien bol raha hon..

Kidnappers:Tumhari beti humare gabze mein hai..ager os ko zinda pana chahte ho to apni sari property humare naam ker do..

A:Who are you..and why are you doing this?

Kidnappers:I think you forgot your father's dead..

Angad was shocked.

A:What..What did you said?

Kidnappers:Angad..Your father was not passed away but we killed him...we murdered him because we told him to do as we say..but he ignored and now he is no more...

A:Shut Up!

Kidnappers:Angad..We can do anything..He was your father and we killed him and now the tarhet is your daughter..if you love your daughter then do as i say...

A:If i will not then what?

Kidnappers:I think you like dead..Oh your daughter wants to talk to you..

The Kidnapper gives the phone to Tina and Tina yells in pain.Angad's eyes turned red and teary.

A:Leave her You!!!

Kidnappers:I think you understood now what to do..

A:Please don't do anything to her..Please..

Kidnappers:Sure..Be Alert that you haven't informed Police..i will call you again to where you have to come and give your property papers..

Saying that he puts off the call.

A:Hello...Hello!!

The phone falls from Angad's hand.All runs to him.The PI comes and tells him.

PI:Angad we got the address from where he was talking..h ewas talking from a PCO and its better we should be there as early as we can..

A:Then lets go..

They all runs to their cars and they goes where the PI gave the address.When they reached there,they see some people running from there.The PI officers run behind them but they ran so fast that they vanished in the dark.

A:Inspector..what happened?

PI:Sorry Mr Khanna..we are late..

A:Damn!!

He says angrily and leaves to his home again.He comes home and sits on the sofa.He looks at the Telephone and then at Kripa who was standing in front of him.

K:I am Sorry Angad..It is happening all because of me..If i haven't left Tina alone in the lawn..

She starts crying while Angad gets more shocked.He stands up and turns his face to other side opposite from Kripa.He also start crying very much.

A:Its ok..

K:No Angad its not ok..i am one in all behind of this..

They both cried at their places again.

A:Kripa once i lost you and i was dead inside me..but this time i can't loose Tina..she had been with me and is became my power...If i didn't found her then i will seriously be dead...i can't live without her a single day....

He turns around and looks at Kripa.

A:Kripa There was a pain in my heart which was never there in my heart but when you were gone i found the pain filling your absence but this time this heart doesn't have that much power nor it is strong now...

Sonia comes from behind.

S:We miss her too Angad..

D:Yes Angad..and we all are with you...we will how ever find her..

Angad hugs Dadi and start crying like crazy.

To Be Continued..
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part!! It was sad. Continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwww how cute!!! i feel so bad for angad...where's tina? continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 66

Angad hugs Dadi and start crying like crazy.Kripa runs to her room.Angad aparts from dadi and dadi calms him down.

D:Don't worry beta..Everything will be alright..

A:Dadi..i don't want to loose Tina...Dadi i can't--

He breaks down again and again hugs her.

D:We will do anything to find her.

At Night,Kripa comes down.The Police Inspector also comes there.

PI:Mr Khanna..I think the kidnappers know you..and they knew that who they kidnapped is your loved one..

A:What do you mean PI?

PI:Well Nothing..But i want to know all your family members..

A:Ok

Angad introduces everyone,Atlast Sonia and Kripa were left.

A:PI She is Sonia my Wife..

PI:I See..And who is she?

Angad was quiet for a while.

A:She is..

Angad hesitates while saying.

A:Umm..She is..

K:I am his Friend..

PI:Mr Khanna..why were you hesitating?

A:Uhh Nothing just like that..

PI:Ok as you say..Now we have to investigate--

A:Please Inspector!I don't want your any help..

PI:What?

A:Yes!!

D:What are you saying Angad?

A:Dadi Please..I'll explain you afterwards but Inspector you should leaves and i don't want your help..i will see that who is he..and i myself can find her..

PI:But its our owner to do it..

A:Sorry but now its my owner to say you to leave!!

PI:Ok..C'mon Officers..

And they leave.

D:Angad what was that?Why you said them to leave..they were helping us.

A:Dadi i don't want to loose my daughter..They said to not inform into Police Station and i don't want to create any other trouble.I juts want my Tina back..

D:But what they want from us?

A:Our all Property!

D:What?

A:Yes!And Dadi..Dad was not passed away but they murdered him..and for that i will not leave them..Just once i get my daughter back then i'll not leave them Dadi and thats my Promise to you..

Saying that he leaves to his room.Sonia also follows him.Kripa was now more desperate.She also moved to her room.She sat at her bed and started thinking about who can do it.Just then,She gets a call.Kripa picks up the phone.

K:Hello!

Other Man:Hello..You don't know me but i kno wyou very well..I am the one who kidnapped your daughter..

K:What do you want..?

Kidnapper:If you want your daughter than just come to your house's near old cottage.

K:Ok..

Kidnapper:But don't try to inform someone else..Come alone!

K:Ok..

Kripa quickly gets up and goes by her own.She reaches there after half an hour.Kripa sees that the cottage was open.Kripa didn't understood why it was open.Just then she hears a voice of someone yelling.Kripa get frightened and quickly gets into the cottage.It was pitch dark in the cottage.Kripa was really scared now and was shivering.

K:Anyone There?

But her voice came back to her.Then she feels that someone is running on the stairs.

K:Who's There?

Kripa gets more and more frightened every minute.Then she passes by a table.On the table,there was a bowl of apples and in the apples there was a knife.Kripa takes the knife for her security.Kripa walks through the kitchen.

K:Hello!!Anybody Here?

Just then someone taps on her shoulder and Kripa frightenedly turns around and drag the knife into the other person's stomach.Then Kripa's knife falls on the floor.She gets more scared and now started moving back with closed eyes.But after a while,when she feels that after attacking at him ,he didn't attacked her back then she opens her eyes.She couldn't see the man's face and the man falls on the floor.

K:Ahh..

She screams but no one was there to hear her.She bends down and shakes the man but the man was unconcious.She sat beside,leaning towards the wall and falls asleep.Next Morning,She wakes up and sees that the man was still there unconcious.But his back was facing her.His face was on the floor so she couldn't see his face.Kripa puts her hand on his shoulder to see who is he.Kripa finally pulls him back and takes her hand back.She gets really really shocked at seeing the man's face.She puts both her hands on her face hiding her nose and lips in scaredness.

To Be Continued..
Preview:Who the man is?
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Sweetz Gurl
Edited by sweetz_gurl - 19 years ago

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