Mein Deewana Fan-Fic(Last Part,Page 73) - Page 45

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Posted: 19 years ago
i really want to know who it is too!!!!!!!!! Plz continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey nice prt yaar!!! plz dont make the guy angad!!! cont soon

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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part! dont u dare make the man be angad!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 67

She puts both her hands on her face hiding her nose and lips in scaredness.Kripa quickly shakes his body.

K:Please get up..Please...Utho!!Get up...

Kripa was so scared that her voice was now shaky.She reaches to the man's pocket and takes out his cell.She dials Angad's number.On the other hand we see everyone really worried about Kripa too.Just then Angad's cell phone rings.

A:Hello..

K:An...Gad..

A:Kripa?

K:An..gad..pl..ease..

A:kripa where are you..we were worried for you...

Kripa start crying.

A(worrily):Kripa where are you?

K:I am.....umm..near our house's cottage..

A:Ok i am coming..just wait there..

He puts off the phone and hurries to his car with Sonia.Kripa just sits back to where she was sitting and hugs her legs.She was really getting scared by seeing the man to whom she stabbed the knife.She just kept looking at the man and thinks.While as soon as Angad reaches there and opens the door of the cottage.Kripa gets scared that may be some else came there to hurt her.Kripa quickly puts her hands on her eyes.Angad calls out her name.

A:Kripa!!!!!!

Kripa looks at Angad and runs to him and hugs him.Angad doesn't hugs her back because he looks at the body of the man on the floor.Angad was shocked.He can't utter a word.

A:Maa...Hesh......

And now we scans his whole body and he is Mahesh,Angad's PA.(To remember all of you he is played by Sabbir Aluwalia).

A:Kripa..Yeh?

K(crying):Angad i did't done that...Angad i was scared at that time...I thought that someone is trying to hurt me..

He explains him everything.ANgad was worried for Mahesh Now.He quickly calls to the Hospital for a Ambulance.Angad goes near to him and checks his heart beat which was still going.

A:He is alive..

Kripa when listens that he is still alive.She falls on the floor because she faints.Soon the Ambulance arrives.They all get Mahesh and Kripa to the hospital.When they reached at the hospital,they took Mahesh to the operation threatre and Kripa to the ward.They dug a pin into Kripa's arm and puts a glucose bottle on the rod.Angad was really worried now.Tina was still lost.After 2 hours,the doctors shifted Mahesh to the ward because he was normal now.Kripa also came in sense now.Angad went to meet Mahesh.

A:Hi Mahesh..are you alright..

M:Yeah much better!!

A:Mahesh what were you doing in that cottage?

M:Woh..Kripa called me and said that to meet at that cottage..

A:But Kripa said that someone called her to take Tina from him..

M:What?Are you joking with me?Kripa called me..and i am sure..

A:I think someone is trying to kidnape her too..

M:But why someone will try to use me..

A:I think..someone is trying to kidnape her and to put all her mystery on you..

M:I will get that man..and will not leave him..

A:Just cool down..and don't come to office until you recover..

On the other hand,Kripa was thinking about the last night.Angad got a call from kidnappers and the kidnappers said him to come home.He quickly leaved.As Angad leaves,Mahesh gets up.He feels pain where he got stabbed.Mahesh then stands up and start to walk hardly.He comes out of his ward when a man comes to him.Kripa sees him by the glass window.Her room was just beside him.She could hear what they were saying.Kripa gets a big shock of his life.

K(scaredly):Is ka matlab ke Anand-------!!!!

To Be Continued..
Preview:What she was trying to say?
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was really good! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
just finished reading ur ff and must say its wonderful.omg! i think this mahesh is helping anand 😡 . neways continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
plz continue soon
love it... 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part but confuessing preview and last line plz do conitnue
Edited by lucky-moon - 19 years ago
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Part 68

She could hear what they were saying.Kripa gets a big shock of his life.

K(scaredly):Is ka matlab ke Anand-------!!!!

She just scratch the pipe of the glucose which was in her skin with a pin.The blood start coming out from where she put off the pipe.She runs out of the hospital.She takes a taxi and tells him where to go.After half an hour,she reaches home.She quickly runs inside.Angad was sitting there with his head in his hands when he sees Kripa.

A(worried):Kripa what are you doing here?Oh God look at your Hand..Sonia...Sonia!!!!

K(breathing heavily):Angad i want to tell you something important!!

A:Wait..

Sonia comes and sees Kripa's hand.

K:Angad Mahesh KIDNAPPED TINA!!!

A:What?

K:Yes Angad..

A:Kripa stop this nonsense..

K:No Angad believe me..

*******Flashback********

When Mahesh came out of his room and a man went to him.

Man:Sir we have shifted Tina to other place..

M:Which place?

He tells him the place.

M:Ok..I'll be there in an hour..

Man:Ok Sir..

*********End Of Flashback********

A:That means he also killed my father!!!!!!!!

He started crying.

A:But why he did that!!!!

K:Angad i know where they will be..we have to hurry....

A:I will get that Mahesh...

He runs to his car while Sonia also runs to him.Kripa sees this and stands there for sometime.Then she also runs and goes in a car.Angad was following Kripa because Kripa knew where they are.Kripa's hand was still bleeding.The blood was continuously coming out.Finally they reached at the spot.They all comes out.

A:Kripa You just stay here..it can be dangerous inside..

K:No Angad i will come..

A:Kripa Please..Sonia will be here with you..

K:No Angad...i can't let you go inside alone..

They both looks at each other's eyes.Sonia looks at them and feels really bad.Angad comes out of his trance.

A:ok then lets go..

The three of them enters that unconstructed building.The three of them start walking on stairs.All of a sudden,Kripa's eyes falls on Tina but the mistake she did was,she took Tina's name loud.

K:TINA!!!!

Angad and Sonia looks to where she was seeing.All boys which was standing there looks at the three.

A:RUN!!!!!!!!

Kripa and Sonia runs to Tina while Angad handles the boys.Sonia and Kripa were opening the ropes which was all around Tina and Tina was fainted.While they were opening when a man comes from behind.He takes out a pistal and puts that pistal on Kripa's forehead.Sonia and Kripa stops opening.

Man:Stop Angad or else i will shoot at Kripa!!

Angad looks at the man and the man was Mahesh.

M:Boys..Hold him..

The boys holds him from his arms and some holds Sonia.

M:Wow..Finally we came across each other..right!!!

A:WHat do you want damn it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

M:Well i told you before too..your all property..

A:But why?

M:You are asking why!!Haven't you asked your father...

Then some people takes Dilip out.Dilip was all wounded and his head was lowered.Angad was shocked after seeing him.

A:DAD!!!!

M:Yeah..

A:Then who was he..who died at our place...

M:Well the man who was died at your house was dead before we putted him in your house...we send that body to have a plastic surgery of your father...and the day when we putted him in your house..we kidnapped your father..

Angad was all crying now.

A(Yells):Why did you done that and who are you???????

M:Tch Tch..Calm down..Well i hate you..i really hate you...i didn't hated you before when you hated your father...but when you both patched up i started hating you..

Angad was confused now.

M:Don't be confused..i'll explain you...The reason of your father when you hated him..you always thought that your father was away from your mother when she borned you and then you was growing up and your father was not with you...and your father also told you the reason..

He Laughs really loud.

M:am i right or wrong?

A:Just come to your point!!!

M:My Father Yash Sinha was your father's good friend...and he just wanted you father's help and your father send him to jail...He suffered alot At Jail and finally he died...then i came to take revenge of my father's dead..

A:You are wrong Mahesh...My father gave him 50 percent shares but he was not a right person to trust...he took advantage of that and said to my father that he wants 20 crores if he will not give him then you father will kill me and my brother..

M:SHut Up!!!!!!!!!

A:Truth is always bitter..

M:i can kill you just like once i killed ANAND!!!!!!!

Angad was more shocked now.

A(shocked and shaky tone):Why..Did...you..ki.lled him?

M:well i used him so many times that he was no use of mine now so i killed him..

A:Leave me!!!!

M:Well if i had killed your father before then what would you do..!!!!!!

Angad frees himself from the boys and runs to Mahesh.He holds his collar and they both start fighting.All the boys were coming to them when Sonia sees a rod beside her.She quickly picks that and started hitting them from the rod.Kripa was also free now.She took a wood thick stick and started hitting them on all boys head.Kripa quickly also frees Tina and picks her up in her arms.Tina comes in sense and hugs Kripa.Kripa was about to go when Mahesh again calls some men.This time the men were holding guns.

A:Sonia,Kripa run......

Sonia runs but Kripa just stands there.

A:Kripa RUN!!!!!!!!!!

Kripa was scared at the same time worried for Angad.

A:RUN!!!!

K:Angad You--

A:Kripa don't worry about me just Run!!!

The men start firing everywhere.Kripa takes Tina and started to run but not outside.She was running to where Dilip was tied.She quickly untie him and makes him come in sense.The men also start firing there.The three runs from there too.Angad was busy in hitting Mahesh.Mahesh was all bloody now but he was still laughing and his laugh was making Angad more Angry so he kept hitting him.Kripa was running when a bullet hit Kripa's back.She just stops and his eyes opens wider.Angad looks at her.

A:KRIPAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

T:Mom..

She starts crying.Dilip holds Tina and holds Kripa from her arm.

D:Kripa..Kripa!!!

Kripa just falls on the floor.

To Be Continued..
If someone is confused about Mahesh's revenge then read this,Part 43.Read the Flashback of this link.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=172374&TPN=5 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part plz do continue soon love it

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