Mein Deewana Fan-Fic(Last Part,Page 73) - Page 42

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow storyline has changed so much! Great part! Cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
continue soon that was too good~~
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey.. Just finished reading your fanfic, and wanted to say that its really a great fan fic. pleazze continue soon... 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 60

S:Ok ok...you just rest..i'll be back..

He leaves from there and calls someone.He gives them the information about Switzerland and puts off the phone.

Few Weeks passes by,Kripa was getting better day by day and at last she got discharged from the hospital.Sameer took her his home.A Girl opened the door.

Girl:Hi..

K:Hi..Who is she Sameer?

S:Oh she..she is my wife..Simone..

K:What..you married and never told me..

S:Oops Sorry..

K:Its ok..

Si:Now you both will stand here or will come in..

They both come in.Simone tells her the room and helps her go in.She makes her lay on the bed.

K:Thanx Simone and Sameer...

S:No Thanx Kripa..

K:No Really..if you wouldn't be there then i was not be here...may be i wasn't alive..

S:Hey don't say that...I'll find out where is Angad..

K:Sameer..kya kya karo ge tum mere liye...aur kitna ahsaan karoge mujh per ke mein chuka hi na paon..

S:Hey tum aisa kyon keh rahi ho..

K:nahi Sameer...tum ne mere liye bohut kuch kiya hai...ab mein sab kuch sambhaal lon gi...tum bas mujhe support karte rehna..

S:But Kripa..tum abhi puri tarah se theek nahi hui ho..

K:Nahi mein bilkul theek hon..

S:Lekin..

K:Please Sameer tumhe meri kasam..

Si:Sameer...ager Kripa itna keh rahi hai to maan jao na..

K:Please!

S:Ok..as u wish..

Kripa smiles and sleeps.The next day,she wakes up and freshen ups.She comes dwonstairs in hurry and leaves.She goes to a World Public Information Office and gives some information to them.But they did not allow them any information.She just leaves the office in disappointment.She then goes some more places and didn't got any bit information.At Evening,she comes home.She haven't ate anything from morning.She just leaves to her room and cries.

K:Why it only happen to me...Why...akhir kya gunaah tha mera....

She just thinks and gets an idea.She takes out a bag and starts packing.She picks up the phone.

K:Hello can you book a ticket for me to Switzerland..

Woman:Yes..Whats Your name Mam?

K:Kripa Khanna..

Woman:Ok..I will book the ticket but you have to fill the form when you will come to the airport..

K:Ok..But book the ticket of today night..

Woman:Sure..Thanx for calling..

Saying that she puts off the phone.

K(Thinks):Sorry Sameer...mujhe tumhe bina baataye hi jana hoga...ager meine tumhe baataya to tum mujhe kabhi jane nahi do ge...Sorry...i really am..

She quietly goes to Sameer's room and opens his closet.She takes out bunch of currency notes and puts them in her purse.She writes a note to him that she is sorry and leaving and taking some money because she don't have any.She also takes a full creadit card of Simone and also says sorry.

Saying the she takes out a rope and tieds it to a close pillar and throws down.Then she climbs up to it and falls down.She runs from there.She stops at a restaurant and orders a coffee and a sandwich.She finishes them and pays the bill.She leaves to the airport and finishes her form filling.Then she goes to duty free shop and buys a mobile from there.She opens the directory and calls at Sameer's home number.Sameer picks up the phone.

S:Hello..

Kripa doesn't answers..

S:Hello...Helloo...Kripa...is it you..

Kripa still doesn't answers.

S:Kripa please come back..this is dangerous for you...please Kripa...tum ne mujhe baata diya hota..mein tumhe waha le jata....you have to come back Kripa...please come back......Please--

Kripa just puts off the phone and takes a deep breath.Then it was time of her flight.She leaves to Switzerland.When she reaches there,she books a room there and puts her luggagage there and leaves.She goes many places but didn't find him.She visits to many Khanna industries but couldn'y find them.Then she visits a Khanna and Rahega's Group of Industries.Kripa goes inside and asks from the receptionist.

K:Please..tell me if this company if of Angad Khanna..

R:Mam...i m saying that no Angad Khanna owns this industry..

Just then a man says Tina.Kripa quickly turns around but sees a Switz Man calling his secretary.Kripa then goes to her honeymoon sweat where they both stayed but no sign of him.

To Be Continued..
Keep Reading..

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Posted: 19 years ago
Ok..

Now This was my 60th Part..And now i m thinking of it to end in next 40 parts.Hopefully..Thanx for your all love for this Fan Fiction.

Sweetz Gurl
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetz_gurl

Thanx for the compliment....but you hurted me by saying Jaadoo of Ekta😭

I thought this when i started the fanfic....i didn't even knew that ekta will steal my idea

i am soo sorry i didnt mean to hurt ur feelings! ur ideas are way better jaan! both parts were rocking! please cont soon! who is sameer played by again!? i hope she finds angad soon!

Edited by muqualp - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg awesome part!! continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: muqualp

i am soo sorry i didnt mean to hurt ur feelings! ur ideas are way better jaan! both parts were rocking! please cont soon! who is sameer played by again!? i hope she finds angad soon!

Sameer is played by Akshat of Kahin To Hoga or Vayu of Kavyanjali(His real name Chaitanya Choudhary)

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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 61

Just then a man says Tina.Kripa quickly turns around but sees a Switz Man calling his secretary.Kripa then goes to her honeymoon sweat where they both stayed but no sign of him.Few days passes by but Kripa didn't found any single sign of him.One day,she was walking back to her hotel when someone was passing by her.He was talking with a man.

Man:Yes Mr Angad...Yeah..The meeting is done over here..No No Don't worry...Yeah..You just stayr over in Mauritious..Yeah..Another meeting..

He reached close to Kripa..

Man:Ok Bye Mr Angad..

Just then Kripa stopped and turned around.The man was walking fast.Kripa quickly ran to her and turned him around really hard that his cell fell on the road.

Man:Oh God..

K:Ohh Sorry..sorry..you was talking to Angad right..

Man:But you...God..there were many important numbers in my mobile and now...now nothing is remained in it..

K:Look..i m so sorry...i just want to know that you was talking to Angad right..Angad Khanna..

Man:Mam..i don't know who the hell are you but i m leaving...

K:No..No you can't go until you tell me..

Man:God..You are crazy..

K(Crazily):Yes...Yes..i m crazy...i m crazy in his love...the same person whom you were talking with...he is my life..

Kripa holds her head with her both hands and tears start rolling down.

K(Calmly):Look..Whatever your name is....That Angad...Whats his full name..

Man(hesitately):uh..ah..Angad Khanna..

K(shocked):He is my Husband..and i don't know where is he...please help me..and tell me where he is?

Man:Well i don't know where he lives but i only know that he is in Mauritious attending a meeting and he'll be leaving tomorrow morning..

K:Do you have number?

Man:The number was in my mobile which is broken now..

K:Sorry but Thanx...

Saying that she runs to her hotel way.Soon she reaches there and takes out a number and dials that.Simone picks up the phone.

K(Breathing heavily):Hello..

S:Hi...Kripa..is that you..

K:Yes..Simone..we don't have time...don't ask question just listen...

Just then we see a man taking a wire at Simone's house while Kripa continue telling.

K:Where is Sameer?

S:Well he is out for some work...

K:Simone..please just do a work for me...Angad is in Mauritious..

S:What?

K:Yes..he is there...tell Sameer to come home..God i forgot to ask which company is he attending meeting but..

Just then the man comes nearer and slowly without being noticed he rolls the wire around Simone's neck and then he pulls hard that wire towards him while Simone holds her neck.

S:Aaahhh..

She screams.

K:Hello...Simone..Simone...

Simone falls on the floor while the man pulls her by the wire towards him.He was wearing a mask.Blood starts coming out of Simone's neck and soon Simone's eyes started closing.While Kripa closes the phone in shock.She don't know what to do and she also don't know what happened to Simone.Why she closed the phone.

K:I lost you again Angad...i lost you again..

She start crying again.Next Morning,Kripa wakes up and was thinking about her previous life.She remembers her days with Angad,His family,Dadi And Bauji.Just then her mind stops.

K:Yes..Africa....Angad would be there.....

She remembers that one day Angad told her that Dadi and Bauji lives in Africa with Jagdish.Kripa quickly calls to airport and books a ticket to Africa in next 2 hours.She gets ready and packs her luggage and leaves.

To Be Continued..

Sweetz Gurl
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part plz do conti.......

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