Why I Love You So...(Rajeev FF)last part 119(7/5)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18
ye main pehle kehna bhool gayi thi sab ka dekha to yaad aa gaya you know na rk + rajeev mathur effect😆😉😉

he he he...chalo...yaad aaya toh sahi...😆

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#42

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia
Socha ignore karun...par raj ko koi kaise ignore kare...isliye padh liya... sahi kaha...koi chah ker bhi ignore karr nahi sakta...aur vaise bhi hum toh kafi khaash hain uss ke...😉😆

Awesome...dono ki soch to bahut achhe se bayan ki hai tune...ab aage bhi badha do fic ko...kya pata kab mood bane tera update karne ka... chal koi na...will wait for the ud... First part ready hai...bass pakkne ke liye taiyar reh...😆

Luv

Guglu

Thanxxx Guglu...😃

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#43

Originally posted by: nihatri
PRIYANKA BASSI WILL PERFECTLY FIT OPPOSITE RAJEEV KHANDELWAL. SHE HAS ONE CALM AND COMPOSED ATTITUDE WHICH EXACTLY GOES WITH RAJEEV'S ANGRY YOUNG MAN PERSONALITY.

par dear...yeh toh rajeev fic hai na...isiliye maine kisi bhi actress ka naam nahi likha hai...n I can understand what u r trying to say...par abhi jab maine start kar hi diya hai toh change nahi ker sakti na... hope u'll understand what I have tried to say...n Hope ki u'll still read this fic n enjoy...😊

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#44

Originally posted by: nainaahsingh
~~~CONGRATULATIONS~~~

waise abhi tak padha nahi hai padhne ke baad main

comment donge!!!😉

Thanxxx Esha...😃

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#45

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory
Hi Hiii
Its great that you have started a new FF...and the best part is that it is on Rajeev.👏 iss baar kuch alag likhne ki try karr rahi hun...aur iss baat se darr bhi baht lagg raha hai...😆

You are such a fabulous writer that you will have no problems in writing this story. thanxxx...par iss baar sach me baht badi prob hai...😆

Thanks for sending the PM. arey nahi...main toh aap ko pakkane ke liye PM karti hi na...😛

Rajeev Mathur love mein vishawas nahi karta...par zindagi hamari soch ko bahut si baar galat sabit karti hain. On the other hand Prisha belives in love...and its purity. aur shayad wohi Rajeev ki soch ko badlegi. rajeev ki soch sirf vohi badal sakta hai...koi aur nahi...😉

waiting for you to continue. abhi bass thodi hi der me kar lungi sayad...😃

Nisha.

Thanxxx Nisha...😃

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#46

Originally posted by: bakula_gandhi

Interesting Intoduction...

Waiting to see what happens next. please continue soon

Thanxxx dear...😃

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#47

Originally posted by: nisha1984
awesome intro
looking forward to read more...

update soon

Thanxxx Nisha...😃

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#49

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heelllooo guys...

kuch batain batani thi...aur voh ye ke...iss fic ko maine sirf RAJEEV FIC banaya hai...na hi SK aur na hi RN...!!! isiliye Rajeev ke opposite...maine kisi bhi perticular actress ko cast nahi kiya hai...!!! aur mujhe SK aur RN dono readers mile hain...!!! isiliye Plzzz...ise sirf RAJEEV fic hi rehne dijiye...!!! chahe toh Rajeev ke opposite khud ko imagine ker lijiye...ya phir jaise maine pahle kaha tha ke...ya mujhe imagine kijiye...😆

agar kuch galat likha ho...ya mere kisi bhi acts se aap ko bura laga ho...then SORRY...😊

Love

Priya...😊

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#50

Episode:-1

Rajeev baitha hua tha...apne cabin me hi chup chap...pura kamra ciggrate ke dhuye se bhara hua...

na us ke ankhon me anshun the aur na hi us ke honthon par koi lafz...

us ke aas paas ke sare mahual jaise samajh rahe the...us ke dil ki baton ko...voh bhi khamosh hi the...

khidki se bahar jhankti hui us ki ankhen...na toh kisi ko talash karr rahi thi...aur na hi kuch soch rahi thi...

ek khalipan tha uss ankhon me...koi xpression nahi...koi jazbat nahi...

koi bina knock kiye...us ke cabin ke ander aaya...us ke piche khada voh dekhne laga use...

sayad samajh raha tha voh shaksh...is ke anbole jazbaton ko...

aage badhte hue...us ne us ke kandhe par hath rakha...

phir bhi Rajeev ne turn kar ke us ki taraf dekha hi nahi...us ki nazar ab bhi khidki se bahar un lambi lambi ashmano ko chuti hui buildings ke bich me dikh rahe ashmaan k chote se us hisse ko dekh rahi thi...

:-"chal Raj...voh aa gaya hai...ab sirf tera intezaar hai...akhir baar uss se nahi milega...!!!"

kafi mushkil se Rajeev ke honth khule...sirf itna kaha:-"main nahi jayunga...bade papa...aap jayo...!!!"

:-"aisa kaisa ho sakta hai beta...voh...

Rajeev ne kafi rudely kaha:-"voh marr chuka hai bade papa...ab mere jane ya na jane se use koi farq nahi padta...aur na hi mujhe us ke jane se koi farq pada hai...!!! aap jayiye yahan se...mujhe yahan kaam karna hai...

Mohit jee jante the...Rajeev aayega...par apni marzi se...!!! us par kisi ki marzi nahi chalti...!!! voh vohi karega...jo use karna hai...voh vohi sochega jo use sochna hai...voh vohi chahega...jise use chahna hai...!!! us ke sath koi zabardasti nahi kar sakta...koi nahi...

Mohit jee chale gaye...

us khule se lawn me kafi log bhare hue the...ek baht hi dardnaak khamoshi chayi hui thi uss jagah par...

lawn ke bicho-bich safed chadar me lipta hua Dev so raha tha...apni akhiri neend me...

thodi hi der me uss ki arthi uthi...char kandhon ke sahare...!!! aas paas khade logon ka chehra udasai se bhara hua tha...

Mohit jee ne dekha...achnak Rajeev aaya vahan par...ek kandha us ka bhi tha...Dev ko le jate hue...

Rajeev ki ankhen achanak chali gayi...us taraf...!!! jahan kuch aurtain khadi thi...ek safed salwar suit pahne...Mitali khadi thi...zameen ko dekh rahi thi...kuch soch rahi thi sayad...ankhen anshuyon se bhari hui...chehre par jaise koi expression hi nahi tha uss ka...!!! uss ke chehre se aisa lagg raha tha jaise ab uss me jeene ki chah hi na ho...

samshan me Dev ko aag bhi Rajeev ne hi diya...!!! us ka aur koi tha bhi toh nahi...!!! apna paraya...sab kuch us ke liye Rajeev hi toh tha...

us ne ek baar kaha bhi tha...

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Dev:-"dekh Raj...bhale hi office me tu mera boss hai...apne real life me toh tu mera sab kuch hai yaar...!!! ek sath padhe...likhe...bade hue...bahat ehsaan kiye hain tune mujh par...!!! aaj agar padh likh kar yahan tak pahuncha toh teri hi wajah se...!!! varna is anath ko koun puchta...!!! mujh se vaada kar ke agar kal ko mujhe kuch ho jata hai toh mujhe aag bhi tu hi dega...!!! jab itna ehsaan kar hi diya hai toh yeh ek aur ehsaan kar dena yaar...

Rajveer ne as usall glass ko apne muh se lagate hue...ek ghoont peete hue kaha:- "pravachan dena bandh kar...kafi irritate ho jata hun main...aur aaj koi friendship day nahi hai jo tu mujhe emotional baat kar ke...pakana kyoun chahta hai...??? agar jyada iss tarah se irritate kiya na...toh puri ki puri bottol zabardasti tere muh par khali kar dunga..."

Dev ne us ka hath thaam kar kaha:- "peena kyoun nahi chod deta...??? itni baat toh maan le meri...phir kabhi kuch nahi kahunga..."

Rajeev hassa aur bola:-"jaan maang le...voh de dun...par peena nahi chod sakta..."

Dev:-"her kisi ke lyf me kuch na kuch haadsha hota hai yaar...par is ka matlab yeh toh nahi ki hum sharab peena suru kar de...!!! mujhe hi dekh le...iss duniya me mera koi nahi hai...akela hun...papa aur maa ki shaqal yaad bhi nahi hai mujhe...sab kuch tu aur Mohit uncle hain..."

Rajeev utha vahan se aur dhire se kaha:- "par main nahi bhula ke...tere father ka khoon bhi mere baap ne kiya tha...vaise Mitali ka naam lena tu bhul gaya...!!!

Dev:- toh tu nahi manega meri baat...

Rajeev:-"jaan maang le...abhi de dun...par ise nahi de sakta...

us ne us ki taraf sharab ki bottle dikhate hue kaha...

Dev:-"mujhe teri jaan nahi chahiye...!!! bhagwan kare...tujhe meri bhi umar lag jaye... bhagwan kare...teri maut mujhe mil jaye..."

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Rajeev ne apna hath badhaya...us safed chadar ko hataya...!!! akhiri baar voh Dev ko dekh raha tha...aaj ke baad voh iss chehre ko kabhi nahi dekh payega...

Dev ka chehra...kafi murjhaya hua...massom sa...aise jaise baht kuch khoya hua lagg raha tha...!!! Rajeev samajh nahi pa raha tha...Dev ke chehre ke iss xpressions ko...!!! kyoun...kyoun us ke chehre par aise bhav hain...jaise use kisi ne dhoka diya ho...kisi ne uss ka bharosa toda ho...kisi ne usse kafi dard diya ho...???

"maine use kuch nahi kaha...voh toh khush tha...uss ki toh shadi honewali thi...phir us ne suiside kyoun kiya...!!! aaj tak apne her faishle me mujhe samil karnewala...aaj kyoun itna swarthi ho gaya ke...ek baar bhi us ne mere bare me nahi socha...us inshan ke bare me nahi socha...jiss ka voh ek lauta dost hai...

kyoun aaj chah kar bhi mere ankhon me anshun nahi aa pa rahe hain...aisa lagta hai jaise gale me kuch atka hua hai...saansh thik se nahi le pa raha hun...ghutan si hone lagi hai...

Rajeev ne aage aur kuch bina soche...aag lagayi...

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pehli barshat thi...!!! july ka mahina chal raha tha...!!! aur pahli barshat me bheegne ka maza hi kuch aur hai...!!! mujhe koi farq nahi padta ke bheegne ke baad mujhe bukhar hoga ya phir cheenk aayegi...par mujhe toh bheegna hai...

chajje (terrace) par main khadi bheeg rahi thi...!!! sham ka waqt tha...aur suraj puri tarah se duba hua bhi nahi tha...!!! halki si hawa beh rahi thi...aur jab voh mere bheege sarir ko chu rahi thi...toh kisi ka ehsaas jaga raha tha...

haan...voh ehsaas hi toh hai...!!! ek anokha...aur khaash ehsaas...!!! baht pyara aur apna sa...!!! pata nahi voh kahan hai...par kehte hain na ke dil se kisi ko chaho...dil se kisi ko maango toh puri hoti hai...

main maangun kya use...uparwale se...??? par itne salon baad...!!! pata nahi main use yaad hungi bhi ya nahi...!!! 5 saal se jyada toh ho hi gaya hoga...!!! ab toh uss ki shaqal bhi badal gayi hogi...!!! dadhi...muchain bhi aa gayi hogi...ya phir clean shaved hoga...

(smiling)...pata nahi...par clean shave me voh jyada achha lagta hoga...!!! sayad uss ke life me ab tak koi aur bhi gayi hogi...ya phir nahi bhi aayi hogi...

i m sure...koi nahi aaya hoga...voh itna khadoosh hai ke...kisi ko apne kareeb aane nahi deta...(smiling)...par kuch toh khashiyat thi uss me...uss ke kareeb aa kar main chup hi ho jati thi...!!! pata nahi kyoun mere seene ki dhadkan baht tez ho jati thi... zuban haklane lagta tha...aur ankhen...ankhen basss...use dekhti rehti...

kabhi uss se darr lagta...toh kabhi pyar aata...!!! par pata nahi kyoun...main her baat jaan bujh kar use xplane karti...aise jaise...voh mujh se mere her ek herkat ka xplanation maang raha ho...

maine phir se dil se pucha..."maang lun kya use...????"

sach hai ke...dil aur dimag kabhi kabhi hi ek jaisa bolte hain...!!! aaj mera dil...mere dimag par bhari padd raha tha...!!! maine hath jode...vohin barish me baithi...ghutno par...aur dil hi dil me kaha...

"main nahi janti...koi meri baat sunn raha hai ya nahi...!!! bhagwan...khuda...Jesus... koun sunn raha hai mere dil ki baat...main nahi janti...!!! par chaha hai kisi ko... baht... khud se bhi jyada...aap use phir se meri zindagi me le aana plz...!!! par iss bar hum bichdain nahi...mile...ek dushre se...aur ek dushre ke ho jayain hamesha ke liye...!!!!"

tabhi mere piche se koi bhaag kar aaya...maine trun kar ke dekha...!!! Nakul tha...hamara padoshi...

Nakul:-"didi...uncle ko kuch ho gaya hai...!!! fone par baat karr rahe the...aur achanak hi gir pade...zameen par...

main bhaag kar gayi...!!! mama jee...zameen par pade hue the...mami...un ke paas hi baithi hui thi...ro rahi thi...!!! meri samajh me kuch bhi nahi aa raha tha...

main bhag kar gayi un ke paas:- "kya hua mami...mama jee ko kya hua...???"

mami jee:-"pata nahi beta...achanak kisi ka fone aaya...usi se baat karr rahe the...aur gir pade...!!!"

maine nakul se kaha:-"Nakul...doctor ko bulaya...???"

Nakul:-"nahi...doctor ne kaha...hospital le aane ke liye...!!! maine ambulance ko fone kiya hai...aata hi hoga...!!!"

thodi hi der me ambulance aayi...!!! maine mami aur mama jee ko ambulance me Nakul ke sath bhej diya...!!! main khud nahi gayi...!!! sath me kuch paise le kar jana padega...yehi soch kar main...almari ki taraf gayi...paise lane ke liye...

achanak nazar padi fone par...reciever niche gira hua tha...!!! maine socha...'Nakul ne fone aise kaise rakha hai...???"

yeh sochte hue maine fone utha kar sahi jagah par rakha...almari se paise nikale aur ja hi rahi thi ke fone phir se bajj utha...

maine fone uthaya...reciver mere hath se bhi chutt gaya...'nahi...maine galat suna...

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pata hai ke yeh ud thoda nahi bal ke...baht chota hai...par...mujhe first part me sirf itna hi likhna tha...isiliye ise hi post kar diya...!!! kabhi toh meri baat sunn liye karo yaar...😆

chalo...abhi comments karo...galiyaan do...ya silence reader agar aap ko yeh paki pakayi fic achhi lagg rahi hai toh LIKE button press karo...😛

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