Why I Love You So...(Rajeev FF)last part 119(7/5) - Page 54

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hayyyeee...😳😳😳 kisss main gud kha ke marjawan...


ohh.. Hi Priya..😳
wow brilliant ud love every part ...👏👏👏


yeh gorilla kabhi nahi sudhrega flash back mein bhi aur present mein bhi 😡🤢😡
present mein Arjun ne aur FB mein Rajeev ne sahi jawab diya...😃


Prisha bechari use toh kuch nahi yaad aa raha 😕 Rajeev ne use kitni asani se budhu bana diya 😆



Rajeev:-"nahi...uss ke baad...maine tumhare sath wo sab kuch kiya...jo ek khubshrat ladki ke nashe me hone par...ek aadmi...jitna faida utha sakta hai...wo sab kiya maine... oh god yeh rajeev bhi na..😆😆😆


nice and brilliant ud 👏👏👏

update soon..
Ayushi..⭐️




Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part 👏👏 & thanks for the bday wish 😃😃...cake is looking tempting enough 😃😃 special chef ne banaya hai shayad 😉😳
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Mohit jee 😆😆😆 dev sirf gaana ga raha tha 😆😆... usse aapki "chain" nahi chaiye 😆😆😆
bhavnao ko samjho 😆😆😆

aww Raj 😆😆 jab chotta bacha tha 😍 badi shararat karta tha 😆😆 really 😲😆...vishawaas nahi hota 😆😆...

ashwin😡😡 Raj ... se panga nahi lene ka 😆😆... else he will kick you out 😆😆😆 he is expert in that ... M I Right Mathur saab 😎😳...

bechara Raj 😆😆 dev dont torture him 😆😆 its first time for him 😆😆😆...

Raj-prisha --😳😳... badi jaldi he realised where he was & what he did 😉😆 ... quite a smart & sensible boy 😳

prisha darling ab kuch yaad nahi hai toh jane do 😆😆😆 now thats a big question if he kissed you or you kissed him 😆😆 does it matter 😆😆 at end poor Rajeev drank whole whisky 😆😆 poor boy 🤗...

ashwin 😡😡😆😆 Rajeev se dushmani lena mehnga padega 😆😆... arjun sirf baat hi karta hai 😆😆 but Raj ke haath pair sab chalte hai 😆😆😆...so good luck 😆😆😆

continue soon 😊😊



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Posted: 13 years ago

hey pri!!!

Awesome update n it was a longer one to parh k aur bhi acha laga...mera to dil kr rha tha bus parhti rahun but phr part end hogya 😆😆😆

oh raj ko cold hogya 🥱🥱🥱 ...kis nai kaha tha raat main bath lainai k liyai 🥱🥱🥱dev is so good..teasing raj..n mohit jee pareshan ho gai k un ki chain p nazar hai..mohit jee dont worry dev ko ap ko pareshan krnaisai iada acha time pass mil gya hai😆😆😆...n whats the probnlem with gorilla cant he just say sorry...beta ab pta chalai ga k kis sai panga liya hai 😆😆😆...n raj is so sweet after seeing prisha he actuallt strt saying alto jalal to aai bala ko taal to 😆...n prisha n nupur unhai to pta bhi nahi k bechara raj aisa kyun behave kr rha hai😛😛😛...n dev good goping man said raj prisha was asking about him n btaya nahi kia 😆😆😆...overall nice flashback...lovely..

now coming to presesnt...woho what dialogues...wo kyun apnai ap ko itni taklef dai rha hai when he loves her alot..i cant see him like this😭😭😭..n prisha was trying to remember wht happened yesterday night...😆😆😆...n love the way when raj answered her k raat main bhi romatuc dreams dekhti ho...ashwin n arjun scene was really nie..raj nai sahi kaha zabani jma kharch sai acha hai he should bash him 😆😆😆...

cont soon dear

take care


Edited by Innocent_eyes - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 11
awesome part...
just enjoyed it a lot...
wow a kiss hai main mar jawaan...
so Raj indeed has his emotions bottled up inside him...
and one jhalak we got to see...
drunk Prisha is too good and too good to make Raj do the things he would have never considered to do when she was fresh...
the past always has me to splits...
Dev really was a stress buster and their jokes always has me to laugh out loud...
that mantar Raj started reciting after seeing Prisha was too good...
oh i just love this one dear...
cont soon hun...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Priya...

Awesome update...!!! 👏👏👏👏👏

Dev bhi mast banda hai... Raj ko kitna ched raha hai... Gana mast choose kiya hai Dev ne... 😆😆😆... "O mere dil ke chain..." Raj ko chain ayega hi nahi... Prisha ne uska chain chinn hi liya hai...

Rajeev aur Ashwin me shart to lag hi gayi hai... ab dekhna ye hai ki Raj ye shart puri kaise karta hai... Bechara Ashwin...kya padi thi usko Raj se jhagda karne ki... kutte ki dum tedhi ki tedhi...😆😆😆😆😆

Aur ye Dev aur uska mantra... 😆😆😆... bechara Raj...iss maamle me wo dev se bewakuf bann hi gaya...😆😆😆 Yaar unka bachpan bada mazedar tha...


COMING BACK TO PRESENT:


Prisha ne kitni pi li hai... Aur rajeev ko usko sambhalna pada... PAr nashe me hi sahi Prisha ne baat to sahi ki... Aur Prisha ki baat Raj sunna bhi nahi chahta... aur jitni zabardasti se wo ye declare kar raha hai na ki wo Prisha ko nahi chahta wo yahi darshata hai ki wo Prisha ko kitna chahta hai...

Prisha ne bahut hi achhe tarike se Raj ka jhuth pakda diya... Aur Raj ne usse kiss bhi kiya... haiii... kya baat hai... Arey ab sharab se kahan sukun milega...😆

Bechari Prisha...kitni confused hai... Aur itna drink karne ke baad usse kuch thik se yaad nahi aa rha... Aur Raj bhi usse kuch batane ke bajaye aur confuse kar raha hai...😆


Aur MI me jo kuch bhi Arjun aur Prisha ne Ashwin ke sath kiya wo kabile tarif tha...👏👏👏👏... Aur Raj ne chup rehkar hi sahi jo support diya wo bhi bahut achha tha...👏👏👏.. Jhagda to mast hi hua par last me Raj ne jo dialogue mara wo mast tha...😆... "Tum baten bahut karte ho...tumhara hath jyada nahi chalta kya..." WO pehla aisa employer hai jo apne employee ko ladhne ki permission de raha hai...😆😆😆

Ab continue soon... MAine res ka board hata diya hai...

Luv
Guglu



Edited by PrincessFlavia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Update was very good

Raj and Dev enjoy teasing Mohitji. Raj ne sahi kaha – jab who chota bacha tha who aur Dev milkar badi shararat karte the.😆

Ashwin ne Raj ke saath panga le kar acha nahi kiya. Raj ab usse ,aafi mangva kar hi rahe ga.😡

Dev cannot control his laughter as he sees Raj chanting mantra on seeing Prisha and Nupur😆

Coming to the present, both Prisha and Raj have suffered a lot. Prisha wants Raj to share his sorrows with her so that he can once again live his life to the fullest. She also wants to live and enjoy her life with him because she knows that they both love each other. She knows that he is hiding his feelings from her. But he is not willing to let go of his sorrow and hatred because he believes that they drive his life.

Both of them are not able to control their feelings and get carried away by their emotions and passion. but Raj realises that he should not be doing this jab Prisha ne itni pee rakhi thi.

Dusre din Prisha ko yeh strong feeling hot hain ki usne Raj ko kiss kiya tha but she is not able to recall properly. Raj knew that Prisha would ask her about the previous night and so he was prepared with the perfect answer. Kehte hain na ki the best way of defense is offense. Aur Raj ne bhi yahi kiya kyun ki who janta tha ki Prisha uss par pura bharosa kart hai.

Arjun is excited that their planned work and Ashwin is losing all his clients and business. Ashwin ko gusse mein dekh kar Arjun usse kafi khari-khoti suna deta hai. Raj was enjoying all this quietly, he does not interfere even once. Prisha aur Arjun milkar Ashwin ko sabak sikhana chahte hain. 😉

Please continue soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Heeelllooo pri 😃 😃

Super awesome and wonderful update👏 👍🏼 👏

Dev to wo song ga kar mohit jee ki chain aur dil ka chain to nai udana chahiye yaar gaane se mohit jee apni chain ke liye darne lage aur baad me raj ke liye jo dev ne kaha usse unka asli chain udne laga 😆 😆

Waise bahana bohot achcha banaya dev ne raj ke liye ji aadha hi samajh mein aaya meri to 😆 😆 sachchi mein bada mast tha ye aapka gadha ek gadhi ke bare mein soch raha hai 🤣 🤣

Prisha ko hug karne per to uski raat ki neend udd gayi aura b raj keh raha hai ki uski shaadi karwa do 😆 😆apni setting pehle se hi karne ki koshish kar raha hai raj to 😉 😉 😆

But raj sachchi me jala tha kya dev se jab usne prisha ke liye kaha to 😕 😉 😆 lekin ye gadha ashwin sachchi mein raj se kisi na kisi din to zaroor pitega aur jab usne dev se sorry kehne ko mana kiya aur uske liye galat kaha tha tab to I am sure ki ye ashwin ki to ab khair nai reh gayi hai 😡 😡 🤢

Lekin ye prisha ko dekhkar achanak raj ko kya sujha jo altu jalltu padhne laga wo koi harry potter ki jhaadoo per thodi na baithi hai jo dusri side udd jaayegi 😆 😆 ground se to bhaag aaya raj badbadaate hue lekin class mein pahunchte hi usko bachaini hone lagi ki prisha ne kya kaha uske liye😈 😈 😉

ye raj kyon itna ziddi hai prisha se pyaar karta hai lekin maanta nahi hai aur prisha ne bhi achchi chori pakdi uski wo har bar manaa karega lekin wo uski aankhon se samajh hi legi ki wo jhuth keh raha hai😳 😉 😉

raj aur prisha ka first kiss aise hoga ye nahi pata tha😳 😳 😛lekin raj se wo bhi bardaasht nai hua aur phir se drink karne laga 😒 😒 jab raj ko jhuth bolna nai aata to prisha se kyun jhuth keh raha tha jab ki prisha samajh gayi thi ki wo dono apne kiss se aage badhe hi nai😆 😉 😛

ashwin to ab raj ke saath saath arjun aur prisha se bhi pitega aur agar in teeno mein se kisi ek ne agar nai peeta na to use mere paas bhejne apni taraf se bhi aur jisne nai peeta uski taraf se bhi hum hi ye shubh karya kar denge 😡 😡 😃

chalo ab jaldi se meri badbad chhodke update karna shuru karo😉 😆 😆

take care😊

shreya😊

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for a wonderful update just loved it...

The flashback between Raj, Dev and mohitjee was too good...

Ab Ashwin ka kya hoga... He will definitely have it from Raj wont leave him...

Best was Dev making a movie and dinosaur being named Ashwin...

Raj's avoiding Prisha and saying
'aaltu jallal tu...aai bala ko taal tu'... This was too hilarious...

Priya u r just too good itne interesting dialogues use karti ho i just love them...

Coming to the present...

So Prisha is drunk... and Raj gets her home...

Good she tried to drill some sense into Raj's mind... Trying to tell him not to live with so much pain in heart...

Whr she say
'khud ko dard me dekh kar tumhe maza aata hai Raj...par kyoun...kyoun' was really touchy...

Prisha is right Raj loves her but not ready to accept it... Perhaps wat all that happened in the past has made him like this... He himself says he doesnt want to let go of his pains...
Prisha will definitely help him get rid of the pain...

So they kissed... and Raj is upset abt it... Rajeev drinking doesnt helps at all...

prisha is confused in the morning as to wat happened last night... Raj has confused her further...

Office part was the best... Ashwin ka toh kaam tamam kar diya Prisha ne...

Waiting for more pls cont soon...

One more request pls start another fic on Raj... U r a wonderful writer and we enjoy reading ur fics...

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Posted: 13 years ago
pri dear pls cont soon, waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
pri dear whr r u??? Wen r u planning to cont...

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