Why I Love You So...(Rajeev FF)last part 119(7/5) - Page 52

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very good Thank you...

Prisha is annoyed to see Mitali and Ashwin at the party. All of them are trying to taunt each other through their shayri. Prisha cannot stand Ashwin's flirting, agar usse chance mile toh who Ashwin ka chehra hi bhigad de. par use chance nahi mil raha...iss baat se wo baht dukhi hai...😛

Mitali prisha ko dara na chahti thi by telling her that she knows of Prisha's true identity. Par Prisha bhi darne walon mein se nahi hai aur usne ulta Mitali ko hi open challenge de diya. haan...kyoun ke use darr kisi baat ka nahi tha...

Prisha ne aaj Raj ko peene hi nahi diya aur khud itna pi liya ki apne hosh kho bethi. Rajeev gets annoyed because prisha ko sambhal ne ke chakar mein who khud aaj drink nahi kar paya tha. While Ashhwin and Mitali feel jealous to see Prisha and Rajeev dancing together.

Prisha tells Rajveev that she is actually his school friend. Raj is surprised to see that aaj bhi Prisha utni ki gaaliyan deti hain, but this time he enjoyes hearing them because they are for mitali and ashwin. Prisha abhi tak nahi janti ki...wo jo ab bata rahi hai...wo rajeev already janta hai...

Coming to the flashback, Raj had fallen in love with Prisha but he himself could not figure it out and so he tries to speak with Dev about his confusion. The conversation between both of them was superb. Dev ki philosophy, ladkiyon ke liye kamal ki hain. ha ha ha...Dev actually raj ko ched raha tha...😆

Dev knows that Raj has already fallen in love with Prisha. wo sirf itna janta hai ke...raj suddenly Prisha ki taraf attract hua hai...

Waiting for the next part

Please continue soon

Thanksss Nisha...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanksss Monika...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Innocent_eyes

hey pri...update was fab👏👏👏parh kl mza agya.. Thank you...😃

although commenting bit late as i'm bit busy now a days...n ab to mje naam btanai ki zarorat nahi hai na😆 haan...mujhe ab pata hai tumhara naam...SUGHRA...😃
wah jee kia baat hai...shairi main haal-e-dil bayan ho rha hai...maza agya...n yes nice choice os shair...or agr khud likhain hain to us k liyai 👏👏👏... arey nahi maine khud nahi likhe...padosh se chori ki thi...😆...by d way...thank you dear...😃
sb sai acha to mje prisha ka shair laga...us gorilla ko acha jawab diya prisha nai 😆... inn dono namuno ko samne dekh kar wo khud par control nahi rakh payi...😆
arey ye kia prisha raj ko roknai k bajai khud shru hogai...but its a nice way of preventing him from drinking😆...haan...taki wo Prisha ko sambhalne me busy rahe...😆
nice convo between prisha n raj n especially the song wali n the last scene aur haan wo dance wala bhi acha tha k i dont know how to dance i've seen the step in tv😆😆😆... ha ha ha...thanks dear...😛😆😃

now coming to flashback...is bar pora krdia thank u jee...aray ye prisha to abhi sai start hogai k usai eariong pehna doTongueTongueTongue ...good going dear😆😆😆 arey nahi...Prisha ne nahi kaha...yeh toh Raj ne kaha ki...wo use uss ka ear ring pehna na chahta hai...kyou ki usi ne zabardast nikali thi na... isi liye...😉

oh poor raj he is so confused with his feelings...n dev usai help krnai k bajai he is teasing him...way to go dev... dev ko pata hai ki raj ke sath kya ho raha hai...toh wo raj ko chedne me lagg gaya hai...😛

cont soon n take care

Thanksss Sugh...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

lagta hai emergency word me teri duty lagi hai...tabhi RES ke aage kuch nahi likha tune...😆 Thanksss Mana...kamm se kamm tune darshan toh diye...RES ke bahane se hi sahi...😆

kya yaar...taunt maar rahi hai tu...aaj hi update kar rahi hai kya? am commenting...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

Mast part tha...😃...Loved the club scene...specially the shero-shayri mahaul...👏👏...Rajeev...😳😳😳...😍...Rajeev kuch bhi kare...wo toh achha hota hi hai...nahi...😛😆

And well..Prisha was also awesum...she got drunk...and did full on awesomeness...😆😆...wonder if she drunk to prevent Raj from drinking further or wat..😆😆...well if not intentionally...even then she succeeded...😉... nahi re...wo to avayin pee gayi...uss ka koi intention nahi tha...bass Mitali par bhadak gayi thi...n drnik par utar diya...!!! kya kare...ajeeb fic...ajeeb writer aur uss ke characters bhi bade hi ajeeb...😆

I just loved the Rajeev-Prisha scenes...the intensity was perfect...😳👏...of course..provided by Rajeev...☺️...and yes...I will be w8ing for that meeting wid that girl...huh!! 😡 lo jee...sabhi gusse me hain ki Raj kyoun milne ja raha hai Mitali se...😆

Coming to RP again...love the way Prisha swears...😆😆...Rajeev chahe kuch bhi kahein...mujhe to gaaliyan badi achhi lagi...😆😆...its a gud way actually...ab wo apne dil ki bhadas kahan nikale...jab Raj ke bahon ka sahara mila toh Prisha ne socha hoga ki...kyoun na apna dil saaf karrte hue sari bhadash nikal hi de...😆Rajeev apne actions se badla lega...while Prisha gaaliyon se bharas nikalegi..😆...she is right..they shud have died in sum earthquake...😆😆...pata nahi...EQ me kaminey kyun nahi marte?😕😡 pata nahi...yaar...!!! main jab thoda aur badi ho jayungi na...toh iss par sachhi research karungi...

Coming to the flashback...its lovely!! Finally scene continue hua...😳...and loved Raj saying..."Main koi professional hu kya?😆"sach hi toh bola uss ne...😆...and well..Dev was superb at night...kya kya bol raha tha...😆😆...dono ka convo was fantabulously amazing...😆😳😳...just loved it to the core...👏👏⭐️...I wont mention any specific line..as all the lines were superrr!! 😃 Thank you...😃

Do continue soon...as u have already started sketching the next part...😉 yupe...aur next part sayad jaldi hi post bhi karr dun...😃

Thanksss Sumi...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
sab se pahle...
Happy birthday again 🥳 have fun lots of happiness...god bless you 😃

Originally posted by: -purnima-


haila 😲😲 i missed 1 part of Mathur saab 😳😳... never mind better late than never 😆😆😆 koi baat nahi dear...tum aayi toh sahi...

awww mathur saab sher-o-shayari 😍 ...wah wah 👏👏...ek sher aur ho jaye 😳😳😆 abhi unn ke peene ka mood hai...😆

dance & mathur saab 😳😳 ... literally kafi cheez aaj pehli baar karte hue dekha 😆😆😆 aur bhi aage kuch hai...sayad wo bhi tumhe pehli baar lage...😆

prisha darling bahut chad gayi usko 😆😆 hope she is fine 😛😛😆... even if she is not Rajeev hai na to take care 😳😳😉😉 haan yeh toh hai...aur ye bhi tum next part me dekh lena...matlab ke padh lena...😆
Nashe mein kafi raaz khul rahe the 😆😆😆... but u went in FB 😆😆ab kya karr sakte hain...main apne aadat se majbur hun...😆

... no worries i loved that Mathur saab also 😳😳...aww no1 hugged Rajeev before 😆😆...bechara confused hogaya 😆😆... how to react .😆 ha ha ha...aur Dev se bhi ajeeb ajeeb sawal puch raha hai...😆

Dev smart boy 👏... pakad liya na apne dost ko 😛😆😆...😆 & Rajeev ke sawal 😆😆 where he comes up with such sawaals 😆😆😆 mere dimagless dimag se udhar leta hai...😆

& u 😛😛 all the best for next part 😊😊... & Rajeev ki confusion jaldi se door karo bechara is so confused usse hua kya hai 😉😉😆 abhi toh mushkil hai...par sayad jaldi sab thik ho jaye...main sure nahi hun... sachhi...😆

continue soon 😃

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Thanksss Purnima...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -serenity-

Happy Belated Birthday Shreya 🤗🤗🤗

Awesome update Priya 👏👏👏👏... Thank you...😃
Maza aaya padhke...especially Raj ,Prisha ,scenes with mitali n ashwin ... chalo achha hai...me pass ho gayi...😛
"sau darde hain "..is it the same special song prisha sang that day in that nigt club n raj came to know that she is prisha... nahi ye wo gana nahi tha...wo song tha...'sajna aa bhi ja'...!!! aur rajeev ne uss song ki wajah se use nahi pehchana tha... Prisha ne apne hath me ek baht hi purani si bracelet pehni hui thi...uss se pehchana tha...n uss ne uss song ke bare me socha...😃
raj prisha ko apne bahon main utana..wow that scene was so sweet uss scene me Raj jo hai...phir toh apne aap hi sweet ho jata hai na...😉
Flash back is so cute ..thank you...😃
plz continue soon

Thanksss Yogi...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

kya yaar...taunt maar rahi hai tu...aaj hi update kar rahi hai kya? am commenting...

"you know what? i really feel guilty...that pichle 3 updates se maine ispe comment nahi kiya n tumne kuch bhi nahi kaha...i dint mean tum readers ko force karti ho comment karne keliye par...jiss haqq se main tujhe update karne bolti thi ussi haqq se tu mujhe jhaad laga sakti thi na...itna samajhdaar ban ne ki kya zaroorat hai? maana ki tum jaanti thi ki main comment kyun nahi kar pa rahi hoon...parr yaar..sirf yeh dikhane keliye ki meri comment se tumhe fark padhta hai...sirf ek baar keh deti ! kya bigad jaata tera??? haan?? bataaa !"
Hellooo...Doc...yeh padhne ke baad kuch yaad aaya...ke main taunt kyoun maar rahi thi...mujhe lifetime ke liye yeh haq mila hai...😆 taki iss baar CHOR KOTWAAL KO NAHI BAL KI KOTWAAL CHOR KO JHAAD LAGAYE...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

Res for commenting on the ud

hello Vidushi...tere profile pic ki tarah...tu bhi lagta hai RES karr ke so gayi...😆mujhe toh lagha tha ki...sare rplies karrne tak toh tere comments aa hi jayenge...lekin lagta hai ki tu kafi gehri neend me hai...JAAGO RE...JAAGO RE...JAAGO RE...JAAGO RE...JAAGO...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

hello Vidushi...tere profile pic ki tarah...tu bhi lagta hai RES karr ke so gayi...😆mujhe toh lagha tha ki...sare rplies karrne tak toh tere comments aa hi jayenge...lekin lagta hai ki tu kafi gehri neend me hai...JAAGO RE...JAAGO RE...JAAGO RE...JAAGO RE...JAAGO...😆


achchha kaho chaahe bura kaho... jhootha chaahe sachcha kaho...
hamako sab qabool...
hamase bhool ho gai... hamka maafi dai do ...
haan ji bhool ho gai... hamka maafi dai do...

i am very very sorry for not commenting...vo kya hai na mujhe type karna bada boring lagta hai..isiliye main alternate parts pe comment karti hoon...lekin is baar maine decide kiya ki main saare parts pe comment karungi to post reserve kar diya...pphir main bhool gayi😳...Ab itna likh hi diyto bata doon ki part chota tha, lekin accha tha...missed arjun...lekin the bro-sis duo kept me entertained...donosoooper gadhe hain...raj to apne usual best role me tha...prisha ka drunk scene jhakaas tha...aur dev-raj ka scene sweet tha...isiliye aapke update ko milte hain 3.5/5 ... 1 point chota ud dene ke liye kaate gaye hain...aur 0.5 der se likhne ke liye😆...warna aapko poore 5 mil jaate😃...
UpDaTe SoOon

Vidushi


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