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Posted: 13 years ago
just waiting to know what happened..
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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm so proposal loved it do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
plz cont soon!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 35 will be updateinggg 2day eveninggg

Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res 😃

me 1st wale se bhi 1st😆
tere update se bhi 1st!!!🤣
i actually loved this update so much👏
hehehe maan impressing budha sasurji😆
but uh oh tht trust dilemma is a killer!!!!😡
u gotta conti soon

Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 35


Past


Geet already had tears seeing his stupid but truthful proposal n sat down on her knees n peaked on his lips n answered on his lips telling

"Yesss I accept ur Proposal n will accept u as Mr.Geet Handa" n thy kiss turned to be more passionate with them sitting on the floor in each other's embrace.

They sat on the floor for some hours in each others embrace just feeling d warmth of each other's love and the silence in which they could hear each other's heartbeats'

Around 2 am Geet was feeling sleepy n her eyes turned droopy


Maan "Geet tumhe needh arahii haiii nahii chalooo soo javoo

Mujhe bhi needh arahii haiii

Aree 2 baj gayeee

Mishtyyy tumaree saath tho time ka patha hii nahii chaltaa"

Geet " Accha haiii naaa sariii zindagiii kese kat jayegiii pathaa hiii nahiii chalegaaa n Yaaa Gud night

Tum javo subha ko milte haiii" n pecks his lips

Maan "Hellooo javo se kya matlab haiii tumara

Mein yaha sooo raha huuu" n goes n falls flat on Geet's bed

Geet "Kyaa?????? Nahi tum yaha nahi so sakthee

Mama Papa ne dekh liyaaa thoo'."

Maan "Ohhh agar Mama Papa naa dekhe tho koiii problem nahiii haiii naaa tumheee"

Geet "Misthyyy koo apnee Maan ke paas rehne mein kya problem ho saktiii haiii'"

Maan "Haaaiii mein marjavaa

Kuch jada hiii pyaar arahaa apne Maan paar

Iradda kya haii Madam???" n winks at Geet

Geet "Don't worry irrada tho bohat neek haii

Bas tumhariii bahooo mein sar rakhke sona haii"

Maan "Bas itna hiii Meine tho kuch aur hiii socha tha'.." n giggles

Geet "Chi Chiii Babajiii dekhona Kesa hone wala patiii mila haiii mujhe

Hamesha chidaa tha rehthaa haiii mujhe'."

Maan "Areee Babajiii soo rahe hongee unhee disturb nahii karthe

Aur chaloo avoo soo javo meri bahoo meinn"

Geet " Maan paar Mama Papa?????"

Maan "Misthy don't worry door locked haiii

Kisko ko kuch pata nahi chale gaaa'

Mujhe abhi needh arahiii haiii

Chaloo soo javooo"

N Maaneet slept peacefully in each other's embrace for the last time not knowing the storm coming into their lives

Next Morning

5 am

Maan woke up to see his Misthy closely snuggled into his chest n hairs all over her face made her look like a cute adorable child'.

Maan freed himself from her embrace, pecked her forehead n went to his room

As soon as he just fell asleep for like 5 mins he heard a knock on the door n he saw the time n knew who was at the door to trouble him

Maan "Abbb yeh buddha itniii pee kee bhi correct subha ke 5 am ko kese uth jatha haiii"

Rajeev "Young Man kya huaaa tum darvaza kyun nahi khol rahe hooo????"

Maan "Yesss sir mein shoes pehen raha huuu

Aap jayiyeee mein bas abhii ayaa"

Maan "Chaloo beta Maan hoja ready sasurjiii ko impress bhi tho karna haiii"

Maan got ready n went outside to see Rajeev lost in some deep thoughts

Maan "Sirrr'.." n pats Rajeev's shoulder

Rajeev "Huhh'"

Maan "Sirrr aap thik haiii???

Kuch problem haiii kyaaa ????

Aap mujhse share kar sakthe haiii"

Rajeev "Aree kuch nahii Young Man Shaadi mein aab sirf 3 din reh gayee haiii naaa tho bas vohiii soch raha thaa

Chalooo walking pe chale the haiii"

N they leave for walking

Maan worried about how he n Geet will convince Preet n all the family memebers n

Rajeev lost in his thoughtsss''.


Geet woke up when she felt someone nibbling her fingers

Geet "Maan yeh subha subha kya tang kar rahee hoo' mujhe abhi bhi needh arahiii haiii

Mujhe sonaa haiii"

N then spreads her arms to feel Maan but she is not able to feel so she opens her eyes n sees Devdas with a letter tied to his neck

Geet "Gud morning Devdas"

N opens the letter

Mishtyyy

Gud Morning

Have gone for some important work

When we meet will take my Morning Kiss

Dnt forget to give it to me *Wink*

Luv u lotsss

Ur Boyfriend

Geet kisses the letter n goes into the bathroom to take shower but leaves the letter on the bed

Naina enters Geet's room to wake her up n sees the letter n gets tensed becoz she knows Geet's childish nature so she just exits the room without talking to Geet'


As Maan got freshen up Naina comes into his room

Maan "Aunty why are you looking so tensed??? Any problems???"

Naina "Maan promise me that what im going to ask you

you will answer it correctlyyy"

Maan "Yess Auntyy ask meee

If I know I will surely answer you"

Naina "Maan you know Geet is very childish n from small she had a dream on running away n marrying but now I just found a letter from her boyfriend

You are her Best Friend na Maan

Plzzz tell me if you know her Boyfriend

Plzzz Betaaa I beg you if you know that guy plzzz telll me"

Maan "Nooo aunty I don't know that guy"

N thinks what a surprise it would be for aunty n how much happy she will be when she gets to know im Geet's choice'.

Naina "Okkk Betaaa I trust you

You are matured enough to know that she is getting married in 3 daysss

I just asked you bcoz if she runs away with that guy Rajeev will die that instant

From childhood Rajeev has fulfilled all her wishes n now is her chance n she will totally break us off if she runs away

Beta I trust you so if you get to know anything plzzz let me know"

Maan "Okkk aunty"


As Naina leaves

Maan is left in a dilemaa n has a guiltyyy feeling for lying n cheating Naina who trusts him sooo blindlyyy n she never suspected that it could be him

N the word TRUST was just going round n round in his mind.

If he was doing right or whether he was wrong'


Precap-

Shaadi Shopping

Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Plzzz need your suggestion
so what Maan is doing is Right or Wrong?????
need your Answers
n that will be the answer on Maan in the next Update
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update maan is wrong in cheating naina but for naina he can't break geet trust

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