Opposites Attract - Maaneet FF Thread #3

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#661

MINDBLOWING... YAAR WHEN THE WILL EXPRESS... U R MOVING VERY SLOWLY...

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#662

would like to mention that you write so realistically that most of the times i can see the "movie" infront of my eyes - dadima and geet dancing, maan and dadima dancing , other relatives...

you have this unusual knack of including small emotions in your updates which are very realistic...not everybody can attract readers as much as you can with your simple and creative writing...

i have no issues with the pace...it seems like i am seeing the progress in the relationship a few days at a time...till its interesting - i'm fine with it 😃

Edited by mystique_girl - 14 years ago

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anaum91

@anaum91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#663

luvd it...it was awesome...dooriyaan thodi si kam hone lagi hai...Good good..Keep writing...cont soon n thnx fo d pm's

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 14 years ago

#664

Fantabulous n superb update...thanks 4 da pm n update! Maan falling for Geet...wants to dance with her. 😊 Loved the dance between Dadi n Maan...so beautiful.

Edited by khwaishfan - 14 years ago