Bhageeratha- maaneet(ss) part 16 pg 63 updated - Page 28

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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice update. I hope soon geet also falls in love with maan.plsss update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
well loved the confusion created by the infection thing...
finally maan is going to stay with geet...
lets c how this relationship takes the turn of events...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice n long part...thnx...i loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part
loved it
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it lotzz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomes parts
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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice update

Loved Maan

Bechara he is so confused hehehe

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update. It was very funny how Maan misunderstood Geet. They are going to stay in the same flat. Interesting... Curious to read more brother. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT


Part 14

geet : maan..ab bas bohuth hogaya...bahana banana chodiye...u r going to stay with me...that's it...no more arguments regarding this...samjhe aap...

although his heart was jumping with joy...he was about worried how to control his feelings for geet...He just remained silent not knowing how to react...

geet: maan...kyu aap soch rahe hey...sochne se kuch nahi hone wala...mein aap ko nahi jaane doongi...sochna bandh kijiye...

maan smiled and sat near geet...geet looked at him in surprise...maan raised his eyebrows as an act of questioning...geet shook his head...

geet: maan...aap smile kyu nahi karthe...aap bahuth achche lagthe hey...when u smile...

maan smiled again after listening to her words...

geet: oh my god..aaj sach much toofan aayegi...

maan looked at her in confusion...

geet: aap ithne baar smile kar rahe hey na...isliye

having said these words geet laughed...maan lost himself looking at her...

geet: aur haan..ek aur baath...kisibi ladki ke samne aisa smile math dena...agar aisa smile dekhogi na koi bhi ladki aap pe fida hojayegi...

maan gave an embarrassing smile as it was his first time to listen such words from a girl...to divert the topic...he said...

maan: geet..plz..aap aram kijiye...

geet: aram...maan pichle 2 din se wahi tho kar rahi hu...aur kithna aram karu...

maan (monologue): geet...agar 5 min aur tum se baath hua na...mein khud tumhe apne dil ki bath bathane keliye majboor hojaonga..isse behthar hoga..tumhe kisi bhi tarah chup karana...

Just then kathie entered geets room giving a gentle smile and hello to maan and geet...maan sighed in relief and thanked his babaji for helping him...he too smiled looking at kathie...geet looked at him with eyes wide opened signalling him not to smile...maan looked away from geet...trying hard to control his laugh...

geet: kathie...for how many days still i have to stay here?

kathie smiled and said..."just one more day..then u can go home..."

geet sighed..."one more day...oh no..."

kathie smiled and was about to leave..then geet again called her...

geet: kathie...one small request...

kathie stopped and looked at geet...

geet: actually iam scared that maan may acquire infection from me...can he get any preemptive treatment for that...

kathie was really touched with her concern...

kathie: Don't worry geet...if that was the case..i would have told ur boyfriend not to enter this room...ok...nothing will happen

maan and geet shocked at the same time when they heard the word "boy friend" from kathie...both looked at each other in confusion...,...before geet could clarify...kathie smiled and left the room leaving shocked maan and geet...

geet(monologue): yeh kathie bhi na..patha nahi kuch bhi bol dethi hey...maan ko yeh sun kar bahuth bura lag raha hoga...bahuth imaandar aadmi hey maan..woh ek dosth ki taah mujhe help kar raha hey...ab yeh baath sunke patha nahi woh kya sochega..mujhe hi kuch karna padega

maan(monologue): boy friend...sunne mein achcha hey...mein geet ki boy friend...lekin..geet kya sochegi...kahi mujhe galath le liya tho...

both maan and geet looked at each other...geet gave an embarassing smile...

geet: maan...kathie aise hi mazak karthi hey...don't take it serious...ok...aap kal raath se kuch nahi khaya...plz aap canteen mein jaake kuch khayie...

having said these words she turned away from maan and sighed in relief...maan stood and tried to talk to geet...but as she turned aside he left the room thinking that she might be feeling sleepy...

on his way to canteen...maan kept thinking about geet...

maan(monologue): kyu mujhe geet ke paas rehne mein ithna kushi mil raha hey...unse doori kyu mujhme udaasi la raha hey...kya mere dil sach mein unkeliye dhadak raha hey...nahi maan aisa tu kabhi nahi sochega...tum ek maksath se yaha aaya hey...unpe dhyaan dedho...baaki sab chodo...lekin ...mere jaise insaan jo apne maksath keliye lad raha hey..kya woh pyaar nahi karsaktha ...nahi..nahi..yah sab nahi hoga...mujhe insab se dhoor rehna hi hoga...lekin geet...unse dhoor rehna ab mere liye naamumkin lag raha hey...yeh kaise paagal pan hey..mein unke baare mein kuch nahi jaantha hu..phir bhi patha nahi kyu aisa lagraha hi ki woh sirf mere liye hey...nahi maan..tu aisa nahi sochega...bandh karo apne dil ko...aur dhyaan dedho apne maksath ko pure karne mein...haan yahi teek hoga...mujhe sirf aur sirf mere maksath maine raktha hey...aur kuch bhi nahi...

maan snapped out of his thoughts when he saw an indian in emaciated state who was brought into the hospital on a stretcher...surrounded by police...he was rushed into emergency as he was fighting for his life..the police were confused as they were not having any details regarding that person...maan shook his head and walked towards the canteen...

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"Atlast i helped him...now no more guilty feelings..." said sunny in fully drunken state ...he came out of public telephone booth and walked towards the bar in which he was dwelling past 2 days...he was drinking continuously to ease his pain... but it got doubled...moreover his guilty consciousness started to eat him...he went inside the bar..ordered another drink...and started drinking...his hair was in mess...his clothes were torn...he was in pathetic condition...

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Arjun came out of the airport happily...

arjun: today...i will propose to geet at any cost...if she agrees then it will be good for her...otherwise i will make her agree with my own ways...

A wicked smile came upon his face...he then tried to call sunny...but his phone was switched off...he got furious on his irresponsible behavior...then he remembered about maan...

arjun: oh no..i totally forgot about him...i thought he will look after my sports centre in my absence...so that i can steadily and calmly make my plans to make geet mine...but i totally forgot him...now anyways i have to find him now...and appoint him as soon as possible...if sunny would have done his work properly then there would not have been any necessity to appoint maan...to look after my sports centre...

he then remebered that maan called from geet's mobile...and his stay with geet...he clenched his fist in anger...

arjun: damn it...this is all because of that idiot sunny...here iam trying hard to impress geet...and this sunny made maan to stay with geet...maan is good looking and smart person...what if geet fall for his charm...no ..no..i will not let this happen..geet is mine...her property is mine...

having said these words he drove his car towards geet's apartment...little he know that detectives appointed by avinash too followed him...

to be continued...


Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me first🥳
nice part but u r quite irregular specially with this one this is my favorite ss and ur always delaying it not fair 😭 plz i want u that u should frequently update this one plz its a request
Edited by abinash079 - 14 years ago

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