Maaneet.. A new beginning THread # 1

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Hi all. i had been a silent reader for quite some time..used to read fan fictions a lot ..being an editor in my school and college years couldn't stop myself from writing one on our beloved MAANEET...Thats my first attempt at fan fiction on india forums..plz read it if u guys like it than i will continue it... i wd be waiting for your judjment...Thankyou for your time..
INTRODUCTION:
A new morning'..

6:30 am.

Little light was coming in the room through light gray curtains, disturbing the girl in her already disturbed sleep. She kept on changing positions but all in vain. Eventually she got up .sitting on her bed. Hairs messed up...rubbing her eyes...She kept on sitting in the same posture. Why was there so much nervousness? what kind of anxiety' why am I feeling this way' she checked her cell .there were 9 txt messages and 3 missed calls she at once checked them none of them belonged to him'strange why am I not disappointed today' why am I so elated as if my life is going to take a new turn'

I have to forget him' Mjhe usse apne dil se nikalna hoga'.. Per kya woo kabhi mere dil me tha bhi '. Agar ask such me pyarr kiya hota to assay me dinnno me use bhula na pati'. Kyo us k passs hote hoe bhi me kisi aur ka intazar karti thi' I am sorry Dev per mjhe aisa krna he hoga'

She picked up her cell and deleted all 4 no that were under the name Dev Khurana'

She got up from her bed ' went into her washroom again a combination of lilac and gray just like her bedroom'took a bubble bath felt a new weird feeling couldn't guess why but that's how she was..

GEET HANDA that's what her name was.. angel like beauty'cute , innocent, bubbly , charming' believes in her babaji.. it's her believe k jo bhi hota hai acche k liye hota hai.

Bus hum kabhi kabhi uski acchai samijh nai pate.. She had strong morals. She was beauty with brain.

Link to Deja vu
Link to Mr & Mrs khurrana
INDEX
INTRODUCTION : page 1
Character sketch :page 1
Part 1 :page 2
Part 2 : page 2
Part 3 : page 4
Part 4 : page 5
Part 5 : page 7
Part 6 : page 8
Part 7 : page 8
Part 8 : page 10
Part 9 : page 12
Part 10 : page 15
Part 11 : page 20
Part 12 : page 23
Part 13 : page 26
Part 14 : page 30
Part 15 : page 33
Part 16 : page 36
Part 17 : page 38
Part 18 : page 41
Part 19 : page 43
Part 20 : page 45
Part 21 : page 48
Part 22 : page 51
Part 23 : page 55
Part 24 : page 60
Part 25 : page 65
Part 26 : page 70
Part 27 : page 80
Part 28 : page 85
Part 29 : page 97
Part 30 : page 108
Part 31 : page 121
Part 32 : page 130
Part 33 : page 140
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Posted: 14 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH:

GEET HANDA 24yr old innocent yet mature. Bubbly, charming, full of life believes a lot in her babaji... Never looses hope..<img

MAAN SINGH KHURRANA 26 yr old .a complete hearts throb. Great attitude. Never hears no for an answer. Totally practical.beleive in himself. Girls go gaga over him. But he never even looks towards them'

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MOHINDAR HANDA Geet's dad. Love's her a lot.

RANO HANDA Geet's ma. Also Geet's best friend.

SAVITRI DAVI Maan's dadima... Strict but with a childish heart. Want man to get settled.

VICKEY SINGH KHURRANA Maan's younger brother .loves and his repect his bro a lot.18 yr old. Full of life.
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DEV SINGH KHURRANA Maan's couzin. respect Maan a lot. take him as his own brother. 24 yr old.
Nivi Geet's best friend. also 24 yr old.

Rest of the characters will be introduced as the story progress..if you guys want me to continue plz plz reply

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Edited by ssch - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice intro..
Continue soon... Pm me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanx Radhika..
a few more replys n i'll definately continue. thanks for your support. means a lot to me.
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Awesome... Continue... Do PM me
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Originally posted by: komlika

Awesome... Continue... Do PM me

thanx a lot..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great start dear well written .
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hey nyc start..seems interesting..do cnti sooon..
n do add me to yur pm list..:)
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Part 1:
6:30 am

Same day. A pair of shiny polished shoes stepped out of the airport... blue jeans, white shirt buttons half open. He was talking on his cell phone. Rings were visible on his right hand which was holding the phone. Slight stubble. Big dark eyes. Arrogance was visible in his every move.

Haan dadima me pohanch gya ho.

Hmm

I don't understand why do I have to attend this stupid wedding ceremony

But you know I have important work over here

Dadima' stop it

U know I can't say no to u so u are blackmailing me

Whatever

I'll go for a few moments only once I m done with my work

Ufoo why r u creating a scene

Its one wk away

Remind me then not now

I have enough things on my mind right now

Take care

Bye

Where the hell is this driver??? I have been standing here for the past 5 mints and still no sign'.. I am gonna fire him the moment he appears in front of my eyes.

Sir ji''

Maan sir!!!!!!. Said a trembling driver chandu.

Ha?

Tum ? ye time hai tmhare ane ka?

Tmhare sir pe koi tha nahi itne dino se to kaam bhool gae ho

Sir ji . wo traffic block the raste me isliye dair hogai

Agli bar aisa hua to

Nai nai sir. Sorry dobara aisi galti nai hoge

his cell started ringing

saman gari me rakho.

Hello ' MAAN SINGH KHURRANA here.

And the conversation continued

note: i need your help guys . what do you suggest that i reveal there past first or continue the story and reveal past as time requires it in future.
Edited by ssch - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

great start dear well written .

Thankyou so much

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