Maaneet.. A new beginning THread # 1 - Page 3

Originally posted by: monikaseth

well done great going keep it up dear awesome

2 pm

28 April, 2011

Geet ab bus bhi kar de' or kitna ghome ge aik he room me .tjhe daikh dikh k to mjhe chakar are hai.

Nivi said after being fed up of geet's constant fidgeting and walking around.

Geet : tu chup ker.. thujhe pta bhi hai mjhe kitni tension hai.?

The maid came in and handed over a letter to her and said: madam ji aap k naam courier aya hai.

Geet : theek hai. table pe rakh do or tum jao

Nivi : geet omg

Geet: kia?

Nivi: geet letter..

Geet : nazar ara hai mjhe letter hai. is me itna khush hone ki kia baat hai?

Nivi: tu na pagal hai bilkul.

Geet : pagal me ho ya tu jo Letter daikh k paglo ki tara uchal ri hai or mjhe kehri hai

Hae babaji kia sare namoney mere life me he bhaijne thay apne

Nivi: ufuu geet tu bhi na kuch samjhti nahi hai.us din last viva k bad jb hum sb friends lunch pe gae thay to tujhe yad hai kia conversation hui thi.

Geet :kia hua tha? Hum sab itne tired thay k mjhse to enjoy bhi nahi hora tha kuch.

Nivi :tu bhi na hamesha bhool jati hai me yad dilati ho

'''''''''.FLASHBACK'''''''''..

Geet . nivi , simmi, rohan , arjun , puja , dev and rahul were sitting in an Italian restaurant ,having time of there life . they were celebrating there new found freedom. There were finally free after 3months long prof.

Geet : so when u two r getting married?

Pooja blushed profusely where as arjun seemed a bit uncomfortable

Arjun : result k bad daikhe ge.

Dev winked at geet.

And geet understood what arjun meant he was no where near proposing her so she changed the topic but nivi being nivi asked dev

When r u going to propose love of your life?

Geet chocked on her drink.

What happened ? u alright? Kia hua? Everyone asked

Geet ; I am fine. Ha bolo dev tum kia keh re thay?

She waited with anticipation that maybe now he would say something but

Dev : yar I don't know . mjhe koi larki pasand aa bhi jae to I don't know how to approach her. What if she says no? my ego don't let me make the move atleast not while I know I have to spend some more years with her as friend or acquaintance.

Pooja: u r such a bore

Arjun: ye kia baat hui .. larki hai khae ge to nahi/

Geet : pyaar kia to darna kia. Pyaar hai to bolo. Bgair poche tmhai kia pata us k dil me kia hai?

Nivi : tum bol nai sakte to letter me likh k poch lo. Use ha karni hoge to wo khud aege tumse baat karne. na karni hoge to wo ignore kar dai gi letter.

Geet : that's sound like a good idea

Dev : ok ok I 'll do that if I'll ever want to propose someone. Happy? Now can we leave we have a movie to watch time hora hai show ka.

.

'''''''''''''''''''''.

Nivi: so?

Geet : so what?

Nivi: le abhi bhi samajh nai aya?

Usdin k baad se ab tak dev ne tujhse koi contact nai kia which is so unlike him.i mean tum dono can't spend a single day without talking for 5 or 6 hrs. and here 2 wks have passed and he hasn't contacted you.

Geet :to?

Nivi: honestly!!! Don't you see he must have been gathering courage to propose to you.and now he has sent this letter

Geet : r u crazy?

Nivi :geeettt

Geet : u sure? I mean why would he do that?

Or waisay bhi I m so over him..we were just frnds or ab to wo bhi nae hai.

Nivi : tu kis se jhoot bol ri hai. Hum dono jante hai k tum logo k beech frnship se kuch barh kr tha or hai.

Geet : pta nai wo kia tha . per ab kuch bhi nahi hai. Plz dobara ye sab baat na kari

I already feel like a fool . jo tum sb logo ki bato ko man kr ye soch bhaithi k wo mjh se pyar krta hai.

Nivi : aik bar letter khol k to daikh le.

Geet :hmmm

She went toward the table . strange she was apathic at the moment.

The moment she picked up the letter her cell started ringing. result was out. She had passed with good marks. Nivi also passed. There was sudden change in environment There cells were ringing continuously.They were over the moon.The letter remained there forgotten.They at once made plans for celebrating. And soon were both out of the house to join rest of there frnds..There parents were so happy once they come to know they have passed.It was past midnight that geet returned home. Too tired too think bout any letter. She slept a peaceful sleep that night after many days.

PRECAP:

tu itni khush kyu hai?

Aiwe. Mera dil cha ra hai.

To tu ne letter khol liya?

Ha.

To??

Wo para hai daikh le tu bhi.

So what do u guys think what's in the letter?

p.s : again more the replies , sooner will be the update.and i wd love to see your guesses bout letter. thanx

awesome update ...

Nice update, pls continue soon

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cont soon
thx for pm

wow great part love it their friendship bounding very nice thanks a lot for pm

bhakbhartifan, ringme, asmi123, maaneetsangel, scorpiodreams, sharmake11, shah10, monikaseth, ridhz21 thankyou all . here is the update:

PART 4

2 am

29 April 2011

Maan was furious by now. he was angry at himself cuz he had been unable to concentrate the whole day and on top of that there was delay in all the matters by the clients. He had been tossing in the bed for quite a while now.

Ahhh why is this happening? Why am I restless? What is there in the air that is distracting me?

With these thoughts still hovering in his mind he drifted to a restless sleep.

It was a beautiful day' he was doing jogging when he first caught a glimpse of her. The dazzling sunlight was making it impossible for him to see her face but he knew it was her. He didn't need to see her face to guess who she was.

There she was wearing white saree.Pure beauty she was. Wind was blowing her pallo away her hairs were already flying across her face. He went toward her. She still had her back towards him.

Maan: Who are you?

She:''.

Maan: I have been searching for you all the while..

She:'..

Maan: y are u not answering me? Where do you live?

She turned around. Sunlight reflecting from her necklace made him close his eyes but not before he saw those pair of beautiful eyes which had a glint of mischief.

She took his hand in her soft hands and placed it on his heart and said in a mere whisper yaha'.

He was too stunned to say something. He was mesmerized by her feathery touch . That was the first time she had talked to him. He opened his eyes only to find that she was again gone . He felt as is if his soul had gone. But no she was still there far away in the flower filled lawn.

Suddenly the cool breeze started blowing. Light music was playing and she was dancing with it .Enjoying the weather.

Roop hoon teri dhoop hoon
Tu suraj hai mann ka mere

Her pallu was flying in the air.
Ya ghani main hoon roshni
Ab chalte hoon dhalte hoon tujhko hi

She turned around. But still was too far away from him so he couldn't see her face.
Haan mere ik pehar, tu kahe thehar
Toh jaaon nagar se tere

He ran towards her.
Har ghadi mushkilon bari
Kyun lagti hai jo bhi badalti hai bin tere

He reached near her.Put his hand on her shoulder and slowly turned her around.
Tu mile toh silsile, ho ho shuru jo hai khuda ki raza
Tere bina hai zindagi bemaza
Tu mil jaaye toh main jahan se chhupa loon

She at once hugged him. Clinging to him as if her life depended on him
O bekhabar, o bekadar, betaabiyon, bechainiyan hai jawan
Meri nazar dhoonde tujhe tu kahan
Haan tujhko main aankhon ka kaajal bana loon
O bekhabar

She sang while placing her hand on his chest .

He looked down at her face and'..

His cell started ringing.. he woke up . too startled to guess what happened he had again seen a dream bout her..He ran hand in his hair.He was finally gonna see her ace when the phone started ringing . he threw the phone in anger. He looked at time 4 am.He smiled sadly. Suna tha subha k daikhe khawab sach the hai.Hang on that music it's still coming is she somewhere here.

He dashed out f his room towards the sound.It was coming from the back lawn. Was it possible that she was still here. My dream was not a mere dream but a reality. He ran madly towards the lawn only to find vickey his younger brother and his good for nothings partying with loud music.

The moment vickey saw him .he turned off the stereo.. his frnds started to disperse. Maan stood there arms crossed at his chest glaring at all f them.vickey even in his drunken state knew that wrath of MAAN SINGH KHURRANA was soon going to fall on him and nobody would be able to save him.

Vickey: bro'

Maan : come to me when you are sober . we need to talk.

And he went back to his room to catch some sleep but failed to do so.

PRECAP:

ACCIDENT😭

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