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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow maan dreaming

of girl but didnt see her i'm sure its geet it remind old epi love it
wonderful update
pls cont soonnn
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thank yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
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NIce part!!
Thanks for the Pm..
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Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome update ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

Thanx a lot😊
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

wow great part love it precap scaring update soon

Thankyou. well that precap part going to be really thrilling. i promise you that.😉
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Originally posted by: sharmake11

wow maan dreaming

of girl but didnt see her i'm sure its geet it remind old epi love it
wonderful update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhh

THankyou😊 keep guessing😉
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thanx😊
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PART 5

29th April, 2011

10 am

Geet woke up.She was feeling great.As if everything was going to fall in its place. Peace that she had missed in past 2 yrs was finally back.

She got up lazily. Took a long bubble bath. Strange she didn't feel any inner turmoil that was driving her crazy. She was fighting with her own self but for what she still didn't know. One thing she did know was soon she'll meet him. And he will make all her dreams come true.

While drying her hairs she was immersed in her thoughts...

I am sorry... I know may be I have lost that right on you but

What could I do you were not here and I didn't even know

That u wd one day come or not ok ok. I am sorry my heart

Knew u wd come. But this stupid brain of mine went with what

other ppl were saying.. I am sorry.but from now onwards I

will only listen to my heart and my babaji will lead me to you.

Yes this time I will search for you. I will find you.

Haina Babaji aap mere help karo ge na . bachpan se usko daikhti ari ho bus ab us se mila do.

With that thought she turned around only to find that letter still present on that table.she smirked. She wanted to throw that letter out of the door but stopped midway. It was him.Her heart knew it was him. It has something to do with him. Her M.B (mystery boy). Her hands were trembling. Her heart beat was accelerated to maximum. And she opened the letter only to find a folded paper and a ticket to Chicago. Economy class. Hang on did I just get a ticket wo bhi economy class. ECONOMY FOR GOD'S SAKE. Or wo bhi 10th may that's next wk. babaji me ne us se milane ka rasta manga thaye ticket kyu bhaij di .chlo bhaijni hi thi to business class bhaijte . how am I supposed to travel in economy class wo bhi itni lambi flight.omg omg . kahi wo plane me to nai milega.babaji gareeb hai kia..nai nai gareeb kaise hoga. Jahaz me to ja hi rha hai. Chalo dad jitna ameer nahi hoga. Krlogi guzara. Omg me finally us se miloge.

Hae o rabba me apni bkwas me ye to parhna bhool he gai k ye bhaiji kis ne hai.

She opened the folded paper .it said :

Dear Geet. Sorry we couldn't get you the business class.That was the only seat available in that plane and besides all flights are completely packed the next available flight is after 2 months.but since Nivi is coming next month. We figured you won't be able to stay 10 days alone. So we are sending you this. That's going to be fun.knowing you . you wd made loads of frnds even in the plane.have fun . we will see you on 11th may.

Take care.

Your ma and dad

She put the letter back . so that was destiny.

12 am

Nivi came running .shouting Geet Geet all the way.

What happened?

Aj tere liye mene tere favourite Mac & cheese bnai hai. Aja it's done

Wah ji. Aj apni is frnd k liye special khana. Aj suraj kaha se nikla hai.

Geet burst out laughing. Tujh pta hai you are a drama queen.

Nivi settled herself on the table . while geet served while humming o bekhabar,o bekadar'..

Kia baat hai geet aj bari khush lagri hai

Geet smiled while sitting on her chair.

Bol na geet kia hua hai?

Aise he khush nahi hosakti me?

Khush? Hang on tune wo letter khol liya?

Haan . while laughing at her manners.

To?

To kia?

ufu kia tha us me?

Wo para hai daikh le tu bhi

Nivi at once opened the letter. To find the ticket.

Ticket?

Ha ticket.. for my dreams. She said while laughing

Tu hans ri hai.. tu sab chor k jari hai or tu khush hai.

Ha khush ho kyunke apne piya des jari ho.

Piya des?

Geet nodded smiling

Dev bhi jara hai?

Ahhh Dev Dev Dev stop taking his name. wo mera piya nahi hai. Me apne mb k pche jari ho mera dd jise soch kar he mera dil dhak dhak krta hai.

Geet don't tell me k tu phir se us dd k chakar me par gai hai.

Well dd mera past mera present or mera future hai'

PRECAP :

ACCIDENT😲

She was drenched in sweat. She saw him. He was splashed in blood'😭

p.s : plz leave me your comments and hit the like button.so that i can keep going.. Thanx
if u guys give me loads of comments i promise next update within hours. as i have already written it just some minor details are left.

Edited by ssch - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well dd mera past mera present or mera future hai' Superb dear love it please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update ...

thnx 4 d pm...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part
pls cont soonnn
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thank yu so muchhh

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