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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: muzic_lyf

hey nyc start..seems interesting..do cnti sooon..

n do add me to yur pm list..:)

thankyou..i am sorry i am new to this stuff. i don't know how to add u guys in pm list and how to pm u...plz tell me and i'll do that
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start... do continue.. pls add me to yr pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting
great start
pls cont soonnn
thank yu so muchhh
pls do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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monikaseth , muzic_lyf ,maanujaanu ,Shalve ,sharmake11

Thank you so much for your lovely replies👏. i will be updating regularly.i would love to include your suggestions.and yeah the more the replies the sooner will be the update😉
ringme, muzic_lyf, Shalve, sharmake11, monikaseth, scorpiodreams, maanujaanu, Thankyou again for liking my work.😳here is the update:
PART 2:

10 am

Same day i.e. 28 April 2011

Geet was sitting around lazily.. Still pondering about the weird sensations she was having since morning. This was a luxury as well misery for her that she lived alone in that huge handa mansion. Luxury cuz she was free to do what she wants misery cuz she was alone and it was impossible for her to keep her mouth shut for even 5 mints.

She was immersed in her thoughts when the door bell started ringing. And after a mint nivi walked in. Nivi her best friend. She had loads of friends but she never shared her inner feelings with anyone other than nivi.

Nivi: oye geet ' kaha gaib thi. Tyjhe kabse phone kar ri thi??

Geet: well'nice meeting you too.. (rolled her eyes)

Nivi: geet me serious ho tu phone kyo nai utha ri thi? She said while crossing her arms on her chest.

Geet: you ain't some president ,or the hottest person on this planet that I would be dying to attend your call and besides how am I supposed to know that you are calling when I am downstairs and my cell is upstairs in my room..

Nivi: well you could have said so in a more friendlier tone. I wouldn't have minded that you know.

Geet: whatever'

Called her maid to bring two coffees for them. meanwhile nivi and geet went upstairs to settle themselves comfortably in geet 's room.

Geet: ab bol. Suba suba kia tufan aya hai?

Nivi: yar bohat tension hori hai mjhe . thujhe nahi hori.??

Geet: hae babaji ise kaise pta chala k me kia soch ri ho.kia isko bhi wohe sb pta ..

Nivi: to kaha kho gai ? me kuch poch ri ho?

Geet came out of her trance..: thujhe bhi pata tha.

Nivi: haan .sab ko pta hai.

Geet:hae rabba ye kia hogya sb ko kaise pta chala. Mere life kia koi theater ki film hai k sb ko pta chal gya. She said to her babaji while looking upwards.

Nivi: thujhe kia hogya hai geet?

Tu kia khud se he baat kiye jari hai?

Me janti ho k aise me bohat tension hoti hai per itna bhi khud per sawer na ker..she said while patting geet's shoulder.

Geet: matlab Dev ko bhi pta hai..

Nivi: haaan usi ne to pchle hafte btaya tha..

Geet: dev ko pata tha??

Nivi: hae yar bohat tension hori hai.wo bus ane hi wala hai ab to kuch ghante reh gae hai.aik pal me puri life change ho jaege.

Geet: shocked babaji ye sab mere sath hi kyu karte ho..aik to mjhe khud ko nai pta tha k me kia sochri ho uper se apne koi super hit film ki story ki tara ye baat sb ko bta di.me Dev k samne kaise jao gi. Wo sb janta tha.

Nivi : Geeettt while shaking her. Kidher kho jati hai.

Geet: coming out of her trance. Dev

Nivi: dev. Kia dev.

Geet: dev ko pta tha.?

Nivi: kia tere sui wahi atki wi hai. Array tujhe pta to hai dev k contacts hai university me wo he to her saal pta krata hai k result kb declare hoga..

Geet: result fully shocked now. Konsa result?

Nivi: tu na sach me pagal hogai hai.hamare M.B.B.S k final prof ka result. Aj ane wala tha.

Geet suddenly jumped from her chair.WHAT.?? RESULT ARA HAI AJ? OR TU MJHE AB BTA RI HAI?

Nivi: surprised by her sudden reaction. Geet kbse to bolri ho tu kia sochri thi.

Geet folding her hands and looking upwards Babaji bus is bar bcha lo sachi agli dafa se exams parh k doge.koi chamatkar kardo.izzat ka sawal hai .agar dev pass hogya or me fai'nahi nahi babaji plz aisa mat krna plz plz pass kara do

Nivi: relax ker tu to mjhse vhi ziada tension le re hai.

Geet : relax kaise relax karo result ara hai

She started walking around in her room fidgeting with her duppata.

PRECAP: RESULT😲 AND MAANEET MILE GE KIA??😉
Edited by ssch - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well done great going keep it up dear awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting ff...
add me to ur pm list...cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i dont mind if yu put past & future together but coloring so we can know love it love maan entry nivi & geet conv so cute both parts amazing pls cont soonnn thanks pm thank yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice part!!!
Thanks for the PM..
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting ... new concept ...

continue soon ...

plzzz .. add me to ur pm list ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing .
do continue plz.
add me to yr pm list
thx.

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