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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maan is gonna hav tuff tym controling himself for sure
Geet in her care or innocence will always make him go in la la land
Bechara Maan hehehehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
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SUPERB!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZZZ CONTINUEEEE....WAITIN 4 THE NEXT UPDATE!!!!! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 5

Geet: Maan do u need any help? Should i apply balm for u

Maan was in awwwwwwwwwwwwww after hearing those words from geet. For a moment he lost himself and was about to say............yes....but suddenly he realized what he was going to do......

Maan: (self thought) maan what r u doing.......u r melting just with her touch.....will u able to control urself when she is that much closer to u applying balm......u will end up doing something which will totally destroy the budding relation.....common maan...just say no.......for now...it is the best decision.......otherwise u will be in big trouble...........

maan: thanks geet...but i think i can manage........( in his mind he was very disappointed as he missed a golden oppurtunity)

But geet was hurt because maan refused her help........she felt bad about that.....although she has no intention of touching him......she wanted to make him feel better...she want to help him to get out of that pain.........in one word she want to be with him at that moment.........But maan's refusal somewhere hit her hard.......which maan is not aware of....

Geet: ok maan....apna dhyan rakhna.....agar koi zaroorath hey tho mujhe bathadena.......iam keeping some pain killers here...if it hurts more...use them.....

She was about to leave after saying these words......but she remembered something...and again turned back to maan.....

Geet : maan aap ka dinner.........

maan interrupted her saying.......

maan: geet send it to my room with nakool......

Again refusal...actually she thought to bring the dinner by herself to his room.....but maan refused.....This time she felt really bad.........and left the room with tears in eyes........

Maan took a deep breath thanking god for saving him from committing a mistake

Maan: (self thought) geet i don't know when u will understand my love? i want to win ur heart before claiming u...............i will make that happen geet.....

geet was feeling terrible...her tears were not at all stopping......and the most amazing thing is she herself doesn't know why she was crying this much for maan's refusal......

She stood before mirror and started talking to herself which she actually does everytime when she is in pain

Geet:(oye geet....why u r crying for a stranger....if he doesnot want to take ur help....then it is his problem...not urs.....stop crying.....waise bhi...woh tera dushman hey...dosth nahi...uska fikar karna chod .....

phir bhi...woh kyu mera help nahi lena chahthey................😭

Is he hating me for my words on that day😭............waise bhi hate tho mujhe karna chahiye usse.......😡

hate...😲oye geet tu hate kyu karega usse....maan ne kya galathi ki........😔.agar tumhare gharwale thume force kiya...isme maan ka kya galathi hey................🤔

yes..😭.why should i hate maan? when he is not at all at fault....................................but i think he doesnot like me.........😭.What if he thinks that I love someone........oh my god.......why can't i shut my mouth on that day............waise bhi...i clearly mentioned that there is no one in my life....did he clearly understood what i said/misunderstood that.......😭.

like this geet was asking so many questions to herself....and all her questions were related to maan...only maan..........but she is not having any idea..why maan's refusal is bothering her that much?

Today she felt lonely...very lonely....for unknown reason....he cried her heart out.......😭.and was about to sleep...she suddenly woke up....when she remembered maan's dinner.....

Wiping her tears....she rushed to kitchen shouting for nakool......she arranged everything for maan and sent the dinner with nakool............................

Then geet returned to her room.........and slept thinking about maan..............unintentionally

In maan's room

maan was busy in thinking how to make geet fall for him.......he was thinking ...thinking...thinking...😳 until nakool knocked the door

Nakool: maan sir!!! geet madam ne aap keliye khana bheja............

maan: nakool......geet...

maan wanted to ask nakool whether geet had her dinner/not......but he doesnot want any third person between him and his geet....he want to find it by himself.......so he stopped himsef

nakool: sir...aap ne kuch kaha

maan: nahi kuch nahi ....khana table per rakho...tum jao

maan: (self thought) kash geet aaj mere liye dinner leke atha...nakool ke badle.........

maan smiled thinking about his desire and pacified himself saying......maan beta thoda time tho lagega aisa hone mein.........

maan: first i have to find whether geet had her dinner/not? per kaise?

To find out that...maan entered geet's room.....but his bad luck...she is in deep sleep.......

maan: geet is sleeping.....today morning because of me her sleep got spoiled.....again now...no...no...i will not do that....let her sleep...kash dinner kiya hoga.......😃

maan was again lost while staring her angelic beauty................😍

geet......tum meri ho sirf meri............kisika nazar bhi tum per aane nahi dhunga geet...i swear...........i will win ur heart...i will...

maan closed the door slowly and went to his room thinking about geet......geet's beautiful face while sleeping...........😍took away his hunger......he slept peacefully hoping for a better tomorrow with geet.......................
to be continued......................








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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow sweet update😊
loved it!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the update ... Geet is unconsciouslr falling for him
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mindblowing update love it pls cont soonnnnnnnn thanks pm thank yu so muchhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
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geet has started loving maan whci she is unaware of!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow simply amazing update:)
loved it:)
thanx for the pm:)
waiting for the next one:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so, Geet unknownly falling for Maan.........

looking forward for next part.

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