with love...maan (ss) part 32 updated pg 145 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
hey nice one!!!!!!!!
do continue and do pm me next tym when u continue...!
well adorable maan....!
really nice dear!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
love it interesting story brilliant both parts pls cont soonnnnnnn thnak yu so much
pls do pm me
cong congo new FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Wow bro that was a splendid start and great continuity.loved it.its awesome.seriously u r such a good writer you should think about writing an ff😊.update soon.but u did not pm me.......😭.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Beautiful!!!

Sweet Maan and adorable Geet.

loved it

add me in ur pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
part 3

Maan was on cloud nine after his wife almost kiss....he was dreaming in his geetland and couldn't notice geet reactions.........

Geet likes only one thing in this world.....sleeping...she loves sleeping.....because she herself thinks that sleep is her biggest friend which can take away all her tears and bring her prince charming daily to her in dreams.......

she was just to see the face of her prince charming...when maan tried to wake her up. first of all she is not liking maan.....and above that today he mercilessly woke her up from her dear sleep....that' it she became a volcano to erupt...and started talking to maan angrily

geet : Mr. Maan singh khurana..............(in a loud voice)............................aap ko patha hey jab koi so raha hey...usko jagana paap hotha hey....maha paap......

but maan who was lost in the kiss of his dear wife was not paying any attention to her words.........he was just smiling himself

Geet : Oh god!!!!! what is this? am i joking/am i dancing like a monkey? Why r u smiling? huh
but maan was still smiling thinking about kiss........ she could not take any more........she went near maan.....and screamed loudly....maan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

With that maan who was in dream heaven just felt like falling into hell..........before he could understood what really happened.......daadi was standing before them with a stern face asking countless questions with eyes

maan: maan thu gaya kaam se...(in his mind)....daadi aap yaha...(smiling)...waise bhi geet ready ho chuki hey.....just i was telling her to sleep for sometime after taking bath....so that it will be good for her stomach...no...no....eyes.....no....mind......i mean for health (with a shaking voice)

Geet was standing there with a 😕 expression on her face........She has no idea about maan's blabbering.......

Daadi: maan aap se yeh ummed nahi thi......aap shadhi ke pehle din se hi zoru ka ghulam bangaya ? u lied to me for the sake of ur wife......i can't believe it maan!

geet got shocked with daadi's words.......somewhere in her heart...she is feeling very happy......because according to her....her prince charming should tell lies to save her.......and here maan today did that for her..............All her anger on maan for destroying her sleep vanished
instantly............

Daadi: geet!!!!!!!!!!!!what is this? you are sleeping till now! aisa nahi chalega......from tomorrow u should get up at 6......understand....otherwise app keliye achcha nahi hoga...?(it sounded almost like a warning)

maan was hurt with daadi's behavior towards geet.

Daadi: jo hua woh bhul jao.....it should not be repeated again.........Iam leaving to paris today.....maan's responsibility will be yours from today onwards......so be careful........if anything goes wrong..............

maan interrupted daadi......

maan: daadi its getting late...chaliye......

maan and daadi left to airport in car...

in car

maan: daadi! she is just 18 and today is her first day...why r u so mean?...huh.....daadi today i didn't like ur way of talking with geet.......
Daadi : maan! i know geet from her childhood..........u may be hurt with my words....but see it will do a lot of good to u.......

maan was confused with daadi's words...
maan: (selftalk) good...oh god......how i have to face geet now?i know how much those words would have hurt her...and daadi is saying it will do good...maan beta tera din hi karab chal raha hey!

after the departure of flight maan was on his way back to home thinking how to pacify geet.......

Geet on the otherhand..............was not at all hurt by daadi's words...infact during the whole moral science class of daadi she was looking at maan and only thinking about his lie for her........slowly maan was replacing her prince charming in her heart....which she is not aware of..............

to be continued






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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
chala baga rasav anna continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Aww nice update
Yay I like the precap!
Update soon xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
wow maan already turn to joru ka ghulam i wonder why dadi say that so geet prince charming turning to be maan love it love it amazing update pls cont soonnnnnnnn thank yu so muchhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
nice part:) thanx for the pm:)
pls continue soon:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
WOW loved it bro.geet started to have feelings for maan.waiting for the next part.....😊

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