Core of My Existence(AR Story)Nextthreadlink150 - Page 91

Originally posted by: ParaDiseMb

Ermmm Hello there...When are you Updating!?

Originally posted by: caprigurl

Sorry for being a prat and not commenting on last few parts- Mereko itna guilty feel ho rha hai, and have nothing really to defend myself Anku baby 😭
*ok senti speech over *

This FF naa- like I told you- every line is so well thought of
There are stories that meander and there are stories that are bang on target taking you where the author sees it going. With every character etched out, their thoughts spoken aloud to the reader.
This is the latter kind and obviously I love it❤️
You know in the show- I might have tried to empathise with Riddhima , but never really could ,I didnt know where her Why's and No's and tears came from , sometimes

Here - I understand her cos you bring it out so well.

She was so damn happy about the trip- heck any girl in her place would- they've been living with the only thought of her treatment for so lon , away from home, a fun trip like this- she'd love it now that she's married to Armaan and now that she's let go of a lot of insecurities.
Oh yeah she'd probably thought up of the girly romantic Honeymoon moments too ☺️
But then wham came this news- the timing was sudden, her fear of leaving Armaan alone and going to a new place with her Core of Existence NOT beside her must be a scary thing to think about , na?😲

But she needs to understand that this is like a once in a lifetime shot at gaining back her own happiness, her independence and most of all joys for her and Armaan as a couple.Not that they are'nt happy now- but if all goes well - Armaan would be the happiest guy ever :) They'd be able to dream everything a married couple can dream of, they'd be able to gain their work-life back-these are things that define a life- Love matters , So does life 😊

So her attitude of nakhras- HAaa we've seen that before, I just hope she gets thorugh to Armaan soon- he was real hurt by that one sentence of hers

Armaan toh, by god, I love this guy- Guys mein itni patience hoti hai?😆 He's being such an extremely understanding, selfless, patient guy- It was not that he was'nt shocked by the implications of her living alone in that place without him, God knows he's been her shadow every since they've come here. It must be super hard for him to let go of her- that part of the equation Riddhima doesnt acknowledge yet.
Still he is so sure about his decision to make Riddhima give her life a chance. Kudos!
he is trying the reverse tactics right?😉 Ishmaart- his Basket can't see him behave like this , so there's obviously gonna be a confrontation- I already see Riddhima actually coming around to his POV :)


Continue soon- The story that lies ahead really intrigues me- I wanna see her recover pleeash


-Ishi

Originally posted by: jannat4ever

wow awesome ff dear..👏 👏
loved it
d concept is really amazing and not to forget superb updates...
plz add me to ur pm list

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Ankita!!! I loved this part! FINALLY, I understand Riddhima 😆

You did the impossible, Ankita, you made people agree with Riddhima and withdraw their anger towards her 🤣

Seriously, the part was amazing! Ahh, Armaan's so smart! He knows just what to do to make his basket eat :D And the way they're both showing attitude is kinda funny you know! And it reminds me so much of DMG! 😆

Once again, I love Muskaan! The way you put her pain in, at just the right moment, was so awesome! I love her character :) She's always there for everyone! And I wish Rahul stops being a jackass :P

And you put in a glimpse of Shashank and Padma as well! It was well written! They way you expressed Padma's dilemma of sorts was amazing :)

The rest of the update, the play of emotions it was all beautifully done! Man, I love the way you write! It's so awesome! Okay I think Riddhima is sort of afraid of the treatment? Not only because of the obvious reason [staying away from Armaan] but I think she's afraid that if she gets an ultimatum, I mean a final decision sort of thing that she'll never be able to walk again, then everything will be over and that little ray of hope shall go away too. Am I making sense? 😕

Also she's kinda made peace with her condition and Armaan hasn't. Not because he's repulsed by her condition but he KNOWS that she can do better so yeah, that should be interesting to watch out for in the outburst! I'm totally looking forward to that!

Amazing part, really! <3

Continue soon!

xoxo

Aanya

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