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Res, will get edited on 25th! =)
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Say YAY! 😃
Okay, I don't know yet, if its going to be long or short, but you'll get to know at the end now won't you? 😆
"He looked at Muskaan who was standing silently at one corner of the room, waiting excitedly for all the drama to start, wanting to be entertained by the 'Forever evergreen 'couple."
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Muskaan just cracks me up, man! But you know what, I really do appreciate her character in this story, because in spite of all that she herself is going through, she's still helping AR deal with their lives! Its so damn sweet, and honestly, it is very hard to find friends like her..
Coming to the rest of the chapter, I think it was your best update till date! Honestly Ankita, every word, every emotion, depicted so nicely, I felt like I was there, sitting next to them while they vented it all out! And all I wanted to do, was hug and kiss Armaan, well who doesn't, eh?
And Armaan, LOL, he's so right, Riddhima would take eons to take a decision herself! That's Riddhima...
But at least, he finally put all her fears to rest.. That's exactly what they both needed at this time... And I was right! She was afraid of everything I felt - fear of losing Armaan, of no change after treatment and of losing their last hope which she was so hopelessly hanging on to! Yay!
And somehow, Riddhima had once again managed to turn a blind eye to all of Armaan's insecurities... And I know this update was supposed to be all about Riddhima and her fears, but I'm waiting for the day Armaan vents it out, vents his fears out... Not that Riddhima's unknown to them, but he needs to speak it out sometimes as well.. And I hope that comes some day.. LOL! But honestly, she never once gave a thought to how lonely Armaan would be without her, because it would be the same for him... But well, now she knows..
"Come on Riddhima, I want MY Basket back , the one who fought against me, and went to every extent just to prove her wrong also right. Today fight WITH me , and prove it to me ki tum meri Basket hi ho. Agar apne liye nahi kar sakti toh mere liye hi sahi. If you give up even before trying, ye tumhari nahi meri haar hogi.Kya tum mere liye ye bhi nahi kar sakti basket?"
Okay, see when I read people's work, be it FFs or novels that I read, I always think about how I would right them, and just like that, I imagine scenes I would put in, dialogues I would put in if I was writing the story. And I'm so glad you read my mind, because you wrote the exact words I wanted t you to.. 'I want my Basket back.' I read that, and I had the biggest smile on my face! I was like, Yay! LOL! But honestly, its so perfect for this confrontation isn't it? I mean, this is hardly the Basket that we all knew before the shootout, and its time Armaan gets her back, he deserves it don't he? I <3 you for this Anku!
And I loved Riddhima's answer to that as well!
So finally, we can start counting days until we get our Basket back! Oh, I can't wait...!
And as well know, 'Distance makes the heart grow fonder..'
And now we can all look forward to a new beginning, a new story... And I can't wait for that!
May I just add, I hated how DMG dealt with this issue, they never showed in depth how AR felt about the shootout, except for a few dialogues here and there. These are traumatic incidents, and they don't just fly right out of the window, which was exactly what DMG made it seem like, and I'm glad you came up with a story which revolves around this, and honestly, I couldn't have thought of a better way to write this than you have!
I love this story, and I love the pace at which things are unfolding, its just right.
Kudos to you, Anku! <3 COME! And <3 you for writing it!
Now, go, and continue fast, or else I'm spamming your thread BIG TIME! 😆
Anupamaa
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