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Hannah

@nondescript

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Posted: 14 years ago

#911

i managed to read it :D Will comment later tonight, need to help maa with Iftaar now :) xo

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samiyah

@Samiyah258

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Posted: 14 years ago

#912

Ankitaaa you did it again! I don't know what to say AGAIN rofl i think it was a very beautiful and emotional update..i'm very glad it was long ROFL i loveed it <3 i'm soo excited to read the next part!

I love your FF it's one of my fav's :) you're awesome and you write awesome and this FF is awesome!
I was planning to read this part later tonight but i just couldn't wait and ended up reading a while ago...very touching indeed!

The Armaan-Muskaan parts are always very cute and touching..and I think the way you described it all in this update really really was beautiful.. it was very touching actually

The AR convo was soo touching oh my god ankitaaa you're too goood :) The way you explained Riddhima here was really well written and I completely understood her! You've always been amazing at expressing every emotional and writing every emotion in your FF and I think you did it once again superbly here!

I kept staring at your title while reading it...and I completely love it.I don't know if I said this before or not...but I actually like your title! " Core of my Existence".

I want to see AR all happy happy just like they were in DMG 1 I hope she recovers really soon and we get to see Armaan and Riddhima happy <3

It actually made me miss DMG more but I'm glad you started your own FF..i'm looking forward to reading what happens next

Edited by Samiyah258 - 14 years ago

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Rabia Amla

@-RabiaKSGKaJen-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#913

AWESHOME! AMAZING! FANTASTIC! GREAT! PAARTT!

JUUSSTT LOVVEEDD IT SOOO MUCCHH <3

THEE WAAYY YOUU PORTRAYEDD ARMAAN'S ANDD RIDDHIMA'S FEELINGS WOOWW.

THE PART WASS SPELL-BOUNDINGG.

YOUU WROTEE THE CONVINCINGG PAART SOO WELL.

SERIOUSLLYY ANKUU YOUU LEAVEE ME SPEECHLESS AFTAA EVERY UPDATEE <3

ARMAAN TOLD RIDDHIMA HOW HE'S FEELING.

+&& RIDDHIMA SEDD SHEE WILL GO FOR THE TREATMENNT.

II JUSSTT LOVVEE ARMAAN +&& RIDDHIMA.

ANNDD MUSSKII. II HAAVE NOO WORDSS BOUT HER. SUCHH AA HELPFUL FRIEND <3

JUUSSTT WANNTT TO SEE HER HAPPY NOWW.

UPDAATE SOONN <3

P.S YOUR AMAZINGG.. NOOO. YOUUR MORE THAANN AMAZINGG ;)

LOVEE YAAHH x

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Rabia Amla

@-RabiaKSGKaJen-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#914

WOOOHHOOO! 20 MOREE PAGESS. THEENN WELCOMEE TO THREAADD 2 <3

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ssh57

@ssh57

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#915

superb update Ankita. Loved it. Ar moments were fantastic. I'm sure Riddhima is going return from the hospital literally dancing back into Armaan's life!
Love,
shardha

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Ayesha87

@Ayesha87

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#916

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

Ayehsa, the way the I have defined AR in my ff , everything does not have to be said, and explained. Both Armaan and Riddhima understand what the other feels. Their relationship has matured from a level where Armaan or Riddhima have to explain their intentions to the other.
A person may take a decision confidently, but fears take a while to fade away.
The part or conversation hasn't ended here itself, Riddhima will talk to him a lot more about her own feelings in the next part.
Moreover, Armaan did tell her, how she didn't need to spell everything.
Riddhima had taken the decision of going, buthis anger and decision to go back made her think over whatever was happening and lead to the outburst.

Thanks Ankita...for the this🤗
Yep this the one thing i adore abt ur ff the most, the fact that AR understand each other without them needing to explain it...its a very deep & intense maturity you have shown in all the parts throughout the ff😛
Your bold line has cleared it all for me,coz thats the thing i was unsure abt 😉
Glad we will hear more from ridz abt her feeling, though armaan already understands her without her having to spell everything to him, but since in the conversation he told his feelings, i wanted same for ridz, especially when she was willing to take the step even before she saw armaan's anger again & decision to go back (like this line from last part - She would definitely do all it takes to make his love for her win, by going in for the treatment and would pray she comes out victorious) & then she got confused & frustrated again, but glad armaan continued with his act of going to india, despite knowing she has realized...he did it to make her confident & believe in herself again, the outburst from his side was very much needed to make her understand fully, coz if he didn't do the going back to india drama ridz would have only agreed for treatment for armaan's sack....but now she is determined & has all the more energy in her to win it for herself, armaan & most importantly for their love...at first i felt that if he knew ridz has realized her foolishness then why did he continue with india drama...but now it was done to make ridz more strong it was our hero's way of making her fully transformed😉 & im proud of him for doing it...go ARMAN, u proved it once again that u are beyond good👏

Abt the rest of the part..ankita i simply just have to say you are mind blowing & im not just saying this, i mean it😛...it was so beautiful & drew me into the moment, i felt i was living the moment with AR...their emotion & feelings could be understood & felt with us...that's how wonderfully you have wrote the part👏

I just love the way AR proved it the world that for them, nothing is beyond the love they have for each other & can go to any extent to do anything for each other😛

What do i say about armaan, the way he stood by ridz all the time & did everything for her happiness & same for ridz she was only thinking abt armaan...just bring tears in ones eyes...these 2 crazy lovers are sure the core of each others existence 😃

Thanks once again for taking time out & writing such awesomely for us, really appreciate it a lot & im sorry if i wrote anything wrong in my earlier comment...i understood it all, but i guess i wanted conformation from you to make sure that what i was thinking was correct...simply coz i wanted to armaan to know from ridz herself how much she loves him that before she was overcoming her fears only for him...even though armaan knows each little feeling of her & does not need ridz to say it words, it feels nice to hear it from her as well, just the way, we heard armaan's words & lived the moment with him..even though we know ridz knew it all😛
yaar im so happy to know we are going to hear ridz in the next part, oye hoye im getting badly excited

Take care...god bless🤗

Edited by Ayesha87 - 14 years ago

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samiyah

@Samiyah258

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#917

I updated my comment on pg. 130 :)

Ahhh you're almost done this thread! Wohooo I really hope I'm the 1st to comment on the next thread...

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#918

OMG This part was like the most amazing part you ever written! i loved how you described each feeling of AR, how you wrote their feelings out. Just fabolous! im so glad AR have their insecurities out of the way..they can now totally focus on getting Riddhima better without worrying about the others worry about it :D i literally have no words for this part! Just outstanding! Well done Ankita! i hope Riddhima will get better soon and knowing AR i know their love will grow even bigger during these 2 months :)
continue soon x

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simisim48

@simisim48

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#919

HEY :D I LOVE LOVE LOVED the update <3 I think this is the best part you have written so far! All the dialouges you have used between AR are simply amazing ! I love how muskaan was so eager to listen to their conversation and the drama between them i could totally imagine her LOL ! I can totally understand her fears the way you have written it :) I hope ridhima gets better soon and we get to see their cute moments ! Cant wait to see their new life :D CONTINUE SOON :P