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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishia

res will comment soon..

Reserve edit kaun karega...😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kalikijen

just caught up on all the parts of ur ff

interesting and different conept
continue soon
pls add me to ur pm list, i have added u as a buddy
thnx in advance

Welcome to Saviour...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpI007

hey Anu
awesome part👏👏⭐️
loved it so much
ridz n anji fight too good
awww loved hw kashish care for amy n atul
hey i have a ques, did atul n amy go sanjivini to join their duty or to chk hospital atmshre?
thanks for pm

plz continue soon

n they just went to check the hospital atmosphere...n to find if they can suspect on someone behind all this...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vaaniKSGmallik

ridz & anjy fight was sooo good

loved the part
thnx for PM😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

NOTE:

hi guys...

thnx alot everyone for commenting n pressing the LIKE button...

luv u all...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Yeahhh...finally exams over...

n here I am...wid a new update...

thnx alot guys for bearing me...im such a bad writer...always make u wait...

luv u all for this...but from now onwards i'll try my best to give u regular updates...

ok now no bikwas...here is the update...

PART 4...

Recap:

Armaan n Atul lived in NewYork wid their bro n SIL whi they take as their parents...both r FBI officers n are selected to handle Gupta Sisters case as some one is after them...n the cute moments b/w Mallik family...Armaan n Atul left for Mumbai...AR n AA met...n now..wats next...

They slept dreaming abt the other person…deep in their thoughts…they were really feeling special after meeting each other….



Next morning…


Armaan got up first n went to Atul room to see him sleeping peacefully...He wore his cargo n white shirt showing his perfects abs…n moved out to enjoy the morning breeze…fresh and make u relax…he moved out of the house n began jogging…wid birds chirping n clouds hiding the sun behind them as if playing hide n seek…cool air making u shiver but still an enjoying atmosphere he jogged n look around…as he was jogging he reached a place which was a basket ball court…n being a BB freak he moved to go n play for sometime..



As he moved towards the court door…he saw some kids playing wid a girl…a match was going on n the kids were cheering for both the teams…he stood there n watch how brilliantly the gal was playing…she was wearing black jogging pants n blue shade shirt wid a floral band in her hairs..she was of medium height…seems pretty cute but he want to see her face…wich was not visible to him…



The gal dribbled the ball n score a basket for her team…Armaan was getting impressed wid the way she was playing n then she turned back…n Armaan forgot to breathe…she was the same gal he met yesterday……big almond green eyes…a cute pointed nose…pink rosy lips…perfect jaw line….long neck…n a marvelous petite figure……she was looking sooo cute in this attire…yesterday night when he saw her she was in jeans n shirt……..


He started moving towards her still in daze seeing such a beauty in front of him..Whereas Ridhimaa was completely unaware of his presence as she was still busy in celebrating her team's success….


As she was about to pick the ball…Armaan said…. "Nice shot Basket"


Making all the heads turn towards him n Ridhimaa frowned hearing this from him…


Ridz: excuse me…did u said something…


Armaan: yes I said nice shot Basket…


Ridz: " a bit confused"… hmmm thnx…do I know u by any chance n wats this Basket thing…


Armaan: no u don't know me n nor do I….i just saw how u play n gave u a name…Basket…


Ridz: oye hello mister…mera naam Basket nahin hai samjhe…yeh kya baat hui na jaan na pehchaan mein tera mehmaan…


Armaan: Sorry wat did u just said…Im really bad in Hindi…n I'll surely call u Basket……Miss Basket….


Ridz: tumhein ek baat samjh nahin ati kya…mera naam Basket nahin hai…..


Armaan: yeah so wat..mein tu isi naam se bolaun ga……….Basket…….


Ridz: oh really……so what do u think ho jae..1-1 match……phir mein bhi tumhein ek naam doon gi……wat say kids hogae ek……..



Armaan was caught totally off guard…but he saw kids cheering for her….so he accepted the challenge…



The game start…….both were not ready to back off…once it was in Armaan's hand in the other second in Ridhimaa's…it was getting really hard n difficult to predict that who will win…the ball was wid Armaan n he was dribbling it…moving towards the poll to do the basket…but in a swift moment..Ridhimaa took the ball from him n in this process Armaan got slipped in fell on the floor…n on the other hand Ridhimaa did the basket………n was cheering n celebrating the success while dancing wid the kids……



Armaan really loved this sweet n cute site in front of him n really liked her confidence n attitude towards life…he got up…n dust off his clothes…Ridhimaa moved towards him wid a smirk on her face…n Armaan also gave a sly smile knowing very well wats coming on his way…….



Ridz: so Mr. Loser how it felt to loose from a gal…..



Armaan: hello im not a Loser ok…..u pushed me n I fell u cheater…



Ridz: how dare u call me cheater…..samjhte kya ho apne aap ko…….."she said getting angry"



Armaan: smart…dashing……handsome…….cool……….etc..etc… sab samjhta hoon apne aap ko…wat u think…..


Ridz: bohat bari ghalat fehmi hai tumhein…mujhe tu kisi angle se…. "Smart…dashing…handsome…cool…etc..etc…nahin dektey.."



Armaan: tu ja ke apni ankhoon ka test karwao…zaroor kharab hongi…waise don't worry mein ek doctor hoon…tumhein bas hospital ana hai…



Ridz: hello for ur kind information..meri ankhein ek dum teekh hai…6/6…tumhari tarah kharab nahin hain….Idiot…Loser…pata nahin kahan se agaya subah subah dimag kharab karne…ek tu waise aj 2 nae interns arahe hain…aur yeh mera sir kha raha hai……


Armaan: hello wat did u just said…Idiot…hai na..



Ridz: haa kaha tu…idiot se kam tu nahi ho…

.

Armaan: basket dekho…tum had se agey bhar rahi ho…



Ridz: mein bhar rahi hoon..tum bhar rahe ho…aur yeh kya Basket…Basket…laga rakha hai…kaha na mera naam Basket nahin hai…..u Loser…



Armaan: tu mera naam bhi Loser nahin hai samjhi…



Ridz: tumhari tu mein… "but before she can say anything their pager ring…means tym for duty…."



Ridz: tumhein tu mein dekh llon gi…"she said while moving out of the court…


Armaan: shauk se dekhna Basket…Yo Basket...waise apna naam tu bata ke jao…



Ridz: apne aap ko bohat smart samjhte ho na…tu khud dhoondh lena…Mr. Loser…



With that both move out from the court n turned towards their different path…wich are about to become one…….as she is the one…whom Armaan is going to protect…….

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I know shorrt...but could manage this much only in a day..

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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing one. cont son and thnks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsm part.
Loved their f8.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
Plz update nxt part very soon.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Anu
hw was ur exam?????????
awesome part dear👏⭐️👏⭐️
loved it so much😛
AR 2nd meeting superb
hmmm waitng thier 3rd meetin
thanks for pm
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear nice update loved it do continue soon take care and thanks for the pm.

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