|AR FF| Saviour.. |Part 9 Comp.|Page 72| 4/7/12

Hi guys...i know u all must be ready with ur chappals n tamatar to through on me...that i didnt updated other fics n came up wid a new one...but kya karon yaar...they r guests at my place...so not getting tym to do anything at all...so sorry for this...will update them soon...

ok coming to the point after my long bak bak...here is the intro of my new fic...

Saviour...

Disclaimar: all written is just completely fiction...anything related to anyone living or dead is certainly coincidence...so plzzz do take it seriously...

Warning:the contents of this fic are my thoughts so it should not be copied to anyother website...or in anyother fiction...i have my other fics content got copied but didnt say much but this tym i wont stop my self for taking action against the one who did this...


Intro...

Mumbai sapnon ki nagari...jahan har kisi ke sapne sakar hote hain...har koi apni hi duniya mein masroof (busy) hai...kisi ko kisi ki koi fikar nahin...koi jiye mare kisi ko is se koi lena dena nahin...har samay har waqt har koi bas apni manzil tak pohnche ki jaldi mein hai...

isse shahir Mumbai mein hai ek jagah...jahan har koi tayar hai dosre ki madad ke liye...ap bhi chal kar dekhna chahiyen gae...tu lets go...


We can a beautifully architectured building...the area around is fully covered wid flowers n grass...on one side their is parking area...n the other has basketball court...

the main entrance of the building is beautifully build making it more exotic with its huge n large glass...main people are running here n there...men n women are going in n coming out...a completely different atmosphere is there...

the lobby n reception area is furnished wid orange shaded couches n the gal behind the desk on reception is busy guiding people were to go n also taking phone calls...

men n women wearing white coats r running here n there dealing wid people helping them...the pungent smell of medicine is making the atmosphere more that of the hospital...

that's wat it is...hospital...SANJEEVANI...

the men n women in white coat are the doctors who r running to help ppl...n to give them proper medicine...

today the climate is bit cloudy...n seems like its gonna rain soon...all the doctors busy going their duties n soon its tym for them to leave as it already 8 pm n they should go home to come again next day for their dutoes...we can see someone standing near the entrance of Sanjeevani...wearing black long shoes n pants...wid black overcoat and a hat...he is looking for someone...but when he see four ppl coming out of Sanjeevani...he hid himself behind the car n keep his eye on them...

the four ppl came out...3 gals n 1 boy...they exchanged pleasentries...biding gudbye...move to their respective cars to go home...2 in one car n the boy n gal in another...

After the left the man come out n took his cell fone calling someone...

the bell ringed n someone picked the fone...

its completely dark n nothing can be seen...the person was sitting on a rocking chair n was rocking it back n forth...

Man in black at Sanjeevani : Sir gals just left from here may be going home...

Boss: ok gr88...keep ur eyes on them...i want them at any cost...did u get that "he shouted...

Man: y...ye...yes Sir 'he answered afraid from his masters anger...

Boss: Shashank Gupta now i will see who is gonna save ur daughters from my clutches "n laugh an evil laugh"

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ok guys...so here I'm wid a new part...sorry u might find it a short one...but im not at all feeling well...having fever...but still write a bit....for u guys........so enjoy.........

PART 1............

Jahan Mumbai mein ek taraf raat hai......wahin duniya ke dusre kone mein subah ki kiranen har taraf roshni pehla rahein hain..........

New York.............America ki ek bohat hi kubsurat si city....waise tu yahan har koi busy hai...aur har pal kaam aur sirf kaam........magar yahan rehta hai ek sweet sa parivar.........

milna chahiyen gae tu chaliye............

we can see a 21 floor building....having white glasses all around....simply beautiful...n awsum architecture...

a black car stopped infront of the building....a man came out of it.........wearing...2 piece suit of black color....his hair were very silky....any one would die to touch them....he moved towards the building....n enter it.............

he is a well build man....perfect jaw line....a straight nose....eyes......deep like ocean.........he moved inside....its an office...desk n chairs were there n many ppl....men n women...working on their computers.....

as he entered all wished him........n he replied wid a sweet smile......making every women dazzled............he entered his office.........n took a seat behind the table......poen came n gave him a cup of coffee.........n went away...........

he picked up his coffee took a sip...n then towards the file placed on his table........after reading it he dialed a number n the bell ring.........

a beautiful mansion....having a beautiful lawn........filled wid green grass n many different kinds of flowers.........a path was made of bricks....for the cars to enter.....the mansion was simply decorated n looks really elegant n cozy....no one can feel out of place....its decor was beautifully done............the fone rang....

n a lady decended the stairs wearing a white colored chiffon sari...white silverbead work on it...wid a perfect slim figure...adorable eyes...a sweet n cute voice...hairs black n straight...n she picked up the fone.........

lady: Hello.....

Man in the office: hello jaan.......

Lady: yes Mr. Sujal Mallik....how can i help u....... "u guys might have think its ammy.."

Sujal: woh kya hai na Mrs. Kashish Mallik...apki bohat yaad arahi hai...so agar aap ek kiss de den tu bari mehrbani ho gi...

Kashish: Sujal kuch tu sharam karo... do beton ko baap ho...ab tak tu tumhein sharam ajane chahiye......

Sujal: woh kya hai na jani...hum bare hi besharam hain.....chalo na...ek kiss do na.........

Kashish: Sujal tum nahin sudro gae na...........jao mein nahin dongi.......

Sujal: hmmm huh........plzzz janu........ "he said in a pleading voice...now who can reject...so she gave him a kiss on the fone.....'

Sujal: aah...maza agaya.........

Kashish: Sujal......."she said n was both embrassed ngoing red"

Sujal: acha ab sharmana choro aur un do nalaikon ko yahan bhejo......

Kshish: tum kyun har waqt mere bachon k peche parhe rehte ho...aur waise bhi aj unki off hai na...tu suno do.......

Sujal: nahin Kashish kam kuch important hai...so plzz unko yahan bhej do....aur jaldi utao unko...teekh hai......bye.......

Kshish: ok chalo teekh hai..........bye........

Now she has to deal wid the two devils...actually one........the other one is not a devil,,....he is an angel........a sweet n cute angel...but other one...complete opposite....a big devil........but the life of the family.........

She started ascending the stairs....red carpeted....along wid the stairs...many family foto's were framed....some of the full family...Kashish n Sujal sitting n their sons standing on the back side...or just both of them...or both their sons...n many more.....

she reached the room which is the 2nd one....she opened it...n the room was simply n completely boyish type..walls painted in light blue shade...study table at one corner..closet at the other.king size bed in center.n a big foto of their elder son on the wall..all things on their place....bed was made....nothing out of place.....

she heared the click of the door n turned around to see her elder son coming out from the rest room...in his jeans n white vest...drying his hairs wid the towel....

her little baby..is now a young man...though not having perfectly build or muscled body....but he is never the less...dark brown eyes...shinning wid happiness n content...hairs silky n anyone love to ruffle them.

Kashish: Gud morning bacha...

Guy: gud morning mom... "he said kissing her forehead"

Kasish: arey mera bacha...aj fir subh jaldi uth gaye...

Guy: mom aapko pata hai na...mein itni dheer nahin so sakta us bandar ki tarah...

Kashish: Atul....

Atul: Sorry...."he said smiling sheepishly"...

Kasish: chalo ab jaldi se tayar ho ke neeche ajao...mein us bandar ko jaga k ati hoon..abhi bhi so raha ho ga...dad ne office bulaya hai...

Atul: office kyun...

Kash: pata nahin i guess kuch important kaam hai....

saying this Kashish move out of the room...n reached the next room....of her younger son...who is the most naughtiest among all his cousins n friends....

he is eveready to play pranks n doing masti...she opened the door....n her eyes widened in shock...........

this is wat she was expecting....the room....colored in dark blue shade....closet on the right side...half opened wid clothes coming out...some spread on the floor....things completely messed...lappy was on the floor..along wid the mobile...n other accessiories....

n in the center was the bed...where a guy was sleeping wid a frown on his face....the sun was distrubing his sleep....n mumbled in his sleep...

Guy: sun go away na yaar....ja k kisi aur ko disturb karo.......n placed the pillow on his face............

Kasish control her giggle hearing him mumble in his sleep.......

She moved towards him....n sit beside him....her naughty son...is now the most handsome man...n is the desire of every gal........

she ruffled his hairs...wich r sooo silky...n spread on his forehead........

Kash: babu....uth jao ab bache....

Guy: mama sone do na....abhi mood nahin uthne ka...waise bhi aaj off hai.... "he said keeping his head in her lap....

Kash: ajj off tha babu...dad ne office bulaya hai...

Guy: mujhe nahin jana...mujhe sona hai....plzzz na....tell him i'll come tomorrow.........

Kash: nahin bacha....dad na kaha zaroori hai...chalo utho...

he frowned a lil...but then opened his sleepy eyes........blue eyes....seems like ocean...where anyone can love to be drown...........eyes though sleepy...but filled wid sparkle n naughtiness....

Guy: kya mama aj bhi....aap unhon bol sakti thi na....he would have listened to u....

Kash: yes my darling he would have listened magar abhi tu aapko uthna hoga....so get up... "saying this she started moving out....she opened the door n stopped n turned.....where as the guy has again pulled the pillow n hugging it.............." Armaan......." saying she moved out....her voice has the finality in it....n armaan knw he has to get up now...."

armaan got up from the bed...he was wearing black vest n trousers....his body was well build n have many tatoos....such an amazing body....any one would love to touch it........... *true na...KSG body is soo amazing..hot hot..ok back on track...*

he moved towards the rest room...n after taking shower...came out...wearing blue denims....wid white vest..n a towel around his neck...he threw the towel on bed...n pulled a white shirt....wid its first 2 buttons open...showing his perfect chest.....combed his hairs....n then wearing sneakers....moved out.......

in the hall Atul n Kashish were having their breakfast...so he went n made himself comfortable on the chair beside Atul.........

Armaan: gud morning bhai...ap aj fir jaldi uth gaye...

Atul: gud morning bacha...aur mein teri tarah nahin jo itni dher tak soyon...

Armaan: arey dheer kahan bhai...aj hi tu off tha aur dad ne woh bhi sune nahin diya.........

Atul: ammy...koi kaam ho ga na...tabhi bulya hoga...

Armaan: hmm i guess so...let see ab kya hua..........

armaan n atul...finished their breakfast n moved out to go to office...bidding bye to Kashish...........

Armaan: bhai chalo na...race lagate hain........

Atul: pagal ho gaya hai kya....

Armaan: arey kuch nahin hota na bhai....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........

Atul: ok chal......

"both took out their cars....Armaan's " Pagani Zonda" the fastest car..in black color...n Atul's also the same..." Pagani Zonda" but in white color...n zoomed out on the roads of Newyork........."

"Armaan out a short cut n reached before Atul....who was just a second late then him........"

Armaan: yo...bhai mein jeet gaya...

Atul: ya ya....cheater...salla...shortcut mar ke agaya....

Armaan: tu aap bhi le lete...." he said laughing n run for his life....whereas Atul after him..."

reaching near the bldg....both made themselves perfect n entered...everyone greeted them...the young gals looking at the men entered............not less then Greek gods..............making them gasp.........

they reached the reception...........n a lady was sitting their............

Armaan: gud morning honey.........looking really beautiful..........

Lady: gud morning sir.......n thnx............

Armaan: Rosa aunty....kitni baar bola hai...dont call me sir...im just like ur son.....ok honey.............

Rosa: ok badmash.......

Atul: gud morning aunty...hw r u.........

Rosa: gud morning decra.....waise tum log subh mein idhar...aj tu off nahin hai tum logon ka...

Armaan: hai na...but dad ne bula liya.............."he said making a sad baby face........"

Rosa: awwww...chal koi baat nahin kaam bhi tu karna hai na "she said lovingly caressing his cheek"

Armaan: haan woh tu hai aunty.......... "he said feeling dejected."

Atul: oye nautanki...ab chal nahin tu dad gussa ho jaen gae....bye aunty "armaan kissed on her cheek n left"

they both knocked on the door....wid the name plate.... "Sujal Mallik"

n entered after getting the permission....

Armaan n Atul : Gud morning Sir......

Sujal : Gud morning...sit down......waise tu aj aapka off tha....but a new problem is there...a new case has come...n u both r gonna work on it.........

u guys might have heared the name of the famous surgeon n dean of Sanjeevani.... "Dr. Shashank Gupta" well his daughters life is in danger....n u both r gonna protect them..........as u r the FBI secret agent...n many dont know abt u guys....so u'll have to look forward that no one harm them....they r after Dr. Shashank money....n they want it through his daughters........so now its ur tym to show some action........u both r going to India tomorrow...n wll join Sanjeevani as interns....n dont trust on anyone....so i hope u guys dont have any problem wid it............im i clear.......

Armaan/Atul: yes sir...........

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sorry guys....cant write more then this now.........feeling really nauseatic now....

ok guys...so hope u like it....sorry...thora short part hai...but i couldnt write more...........

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