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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved d concept....... Awesome.........do add me on ur pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Damn Javed is NOT the main lead 😆😆 lo main to pehle se hi sapne dekhne lagi thi ....u thro cold water on my dreamz 🤣
hmmm santoshi no comment then 🤣
nd they already got engaged
Ru me frm Jaipur nd end of this month im going Jaipur on vacation 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Both chapters have been really good so far!
I can't wait for the continuation...

Thanks for letting me know about this, and please do add me to the PM list ⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago
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THANK YOU GUYS 😃🤗
ok, before you read this update PLEASE KEEP IN MIND that this FF is NOT about Maaneet.. i am repeating this because the main lead's name is DEV 🤣
ye please do not imagine him as Dev.. this one is totally different.. and i wouldn't even imagine the actor as this character 🤢
thank you 😃

Chapter Three
"DEE!" Santoshi shouted "i don't know what she's packing!" she put her bag in the big car

"DIA" Kiron shouted "DON'T FORGET YOUR INHALER!" she walked towards the car and gave Shanker her bag

"coming, coming" Dia came running with her bags

Santoshi gasped "what did you pack? your closet??"

"oh shut up Santie, as if you didn't pack every pj in your closet"

"pj haan not my whole room!"

"ok girls, enough.. the Akbar's just called, we should be going, chalo"

"yay" Dia grinned putting her bag in the car "this is going to be fun!"

The Seth's, Akbar's, Santoshi's friends, Javed's friends and Dia's friends met at the train station that took them to Pushkar fair in Jaipur just after 6 hours. There were many tourists and Indians that had their tents "it seems we have to have our tents there" Javed's father pointed at a place

"but that's far away from people" his mother said looking around

"haan, we will rest tonight there then we will search for another place"

"you're right, i'm sure everyone is tired"

"haan bahut" Dia mumbled

"chalo then"

They went to the place that was far from the fair and people, everyone had their tents up, Javed's parents were in one, Santoshi's parents were in another one and the rest were divided into 3 tents.

"desert is getting bored" Taani sighed

"we just arrived Taani and we should rest" Santoshi lied down

"i'm sure the guys are awake.." she grinned "we should play a game"

Santoshi giggled "no Taani, we should sleep"

"oh come on yaar, please"

"Taani! i wore my pjs.. so tired yaar"

"please" her other friends begged

Santoshi sighed heavily "fine.. i'll change"

"haan, wear something sexy" Taani joked leaving the tent with her friends, she went over to the guys tent and shouted "OYE"

Few minutes later Javed came out "oye kya?"

"you guys haven't slept yet?"

"nahi toh?" he folded his arms

"oye stupid, was going to ask you to play a game with us" she sighed "seems you're in a bad mood"

"no i'm not in a good mood, beat it"

"kya hua?" Santie came putting her hair up

Javed looked at her and smiled "i'm in a very good mood, guys!" he shouted back at the tent

The girls and guys made campfire and started singing, laughing and some dancing "i thought we said we wanted to play a game na?" Taani complained

"haan what game?" one of the guys asked

"i don't know.. think guys"

"i got it!" Dia grinned "truth or dare!"

Everyone agreed except for Santoshi "that is so childish!"

"childish or you hate the DARE part" Dia laughed with others

"so not funny" Santoshi felt embarrassed

"what? scared of the dare part janu?" Javed asked smiling at her

Everyone awed "Javed, it's a stupid game.."

"so you are scared of the dare part! we won't ask you to kiss Javed Santie relax" Taani said, others laughed

Santoshi looked at her annoyed "oh come on jaanu, it's not like we have something else to play.."

"whatever" she said folding her arms to her chest

"yay! chalo, wheres the bottle?"

They started playing, Taani had her part now and the bottle was pointed at Santoshi "dare" she said smiling at her

"God.." she sighed "kya?"

"hm" Taani started thinking "i dare you to walk in the desert alone for 5 minutes"

Everyone got quiet looking at Taani "are you crazy?" Santoshi said

"what Santie? scared kya?"

"Taani that is scary a bit" Dia said

"God, if its not scary, why is it called dare then?" she looked at Santoshi "don't ruin the game yaar, just walk there" she pointed at the dark sandy empty area "and come back after 5 minutes"

Santoshi looked at Javed "it's ok jaanu, we will be here.. you will see the fire na? don't go too far" he smiled at her

Santoshi looked at Dia who was giving her a worried look but soon smiled "we'll be here" she said

Santoshi sighed "teek hai" she got up "but when i come back, i will go straight and sleep in my room.. that's it for this stupid game" she walked towards the desert, her heart was beating with fear but she kept on walking "Taani na, will show her when we get back.. she thinks she's so smart asking me this.. i'll show her how to play the dare part real way" Santoshi was talking to herself walking then she stopped, she looked back but couldn't see the light of the campfire, she swallowed hard as she looked around, she could see ahead few tents "where am i?" she whispered, she looked back one more time but decided to go ahead towards the tents, she walked but then stopped as she heard horse steps

Santoshi looked back and smiled in relief "hello?" she shouted, the horse was getting closer to her "please help.. i lost my way back.."

"where are you going to?" a man stepped down from the horse

Santoshi moved back, he wasn't Indian she knew from his accent "i came from there" she stretched her arm to point back that's when he held her, she gasped looking at him.. she wanted to take it away but he kept on holding her tight "let me go"

"or else what?" he got closer to her "saw your friends daring you to walk alone" she looked at him shocked "come on"

He dragged her but she kept on fighting him, he threw her on the sand and she looked up at him, she got up to run away but he slapped her hard that she fell back bleeding, she looked up at him to see him half naked "please let me go" she begged crying "please" but he already torn her clothes, she shouted for help but no one could hear her.. she was in the middle of no where.

He leaned down to kiss her but she put her hand on his face, he grabbed it hard enough that she thought he was going to pull it out of place. She shouted in pain and felt dying, but suddenly a strength got through her.. she had a hand full of sand, as he leaned down to try and kiss her, she put the sand right in his nose, the man moved back coughing hard for air.. Santoshi got up, she grabbed her torn jeans and covered her upper part and started running towards the tents that she saw before.

"HELP ME" she shouted as she almost reached them "PLEASE HELP" she shouted again getting inside a tent, right when she did.. right when she knew she was almost safe, she fainted

The tent that she got in was full of guys, they all stared at her body lying unconscious when one of them grabbed a blanket and ran towards her "Rohit, get the car" he shouted as his friend, he covered Santoshi with the blanket and lifted her up, looking at her face.. feeling his heart skipping a beat

"Dev!" Rohit shouted from the car, Dev ran towards it, he put her in the backseat "stay with her, it's going to be a long way to the hospital" Dev nodded rapidly, he sat and held her close to him.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow nice entry! M afraid if santy fall 4 dev, will she betray javed? Waitin 4 nxt.thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Don't tell dev is ur main lead........ I thought maan is ur main lead thank god u named her santie otherwise.....!!!lolzz..... Nice update..... Continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow wow wat an entry


thumbs up


plz pm me

waiting


meena

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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
really awesome update....loved it
do keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Birillant update...!!!
trip turn into sumthing different...!!!!
well story Hero entered now...!!!
i wonder hu his n Santy luv story will start...!!!?/
lolz...who was that Guy....hu was misbehaving with Santy...!!! cheap...!!!
im sure Taani is died...!!! cont soon...!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update
Ru plzzzzz make it longer next time plzzzzz
Waiting eagerly for the next part!!!!!!
update soon plzzzzz

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