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Posted: 14 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: shona2010

sounds interesting...da concept is really different but im going to imagine javed nd santoshi as maaneet 😆
nd Ru cant u find better name for Santoshi 🤣

🤣 dont yaar, Javed is NOT the main lead 😆
and i picked Santoshi because i wanted any name.. not a famous heroine name you know? like those that are used in movies 😆
i just wanted her to be like any ordinary girl 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part dear do pm when u update next .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow that was nice update plz add me in pm list dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HEY INTERESTING CONCEPT


LIKE UR FIRST CHP

DO CONT SOON

AND PLZ PM ME .


EM WAITING


MEENa

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Posted: 14 years ago
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RUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!

Awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome!!!

add me to the PM list now!!!

can't wait to read this one!

or better mail me the whole thing! 😛

can't wait to read!

updt fast!!

luv,
Pree!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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THANK YOU SO MUCH EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗🤗🤗
i will update the PM list soon 😃
ok the next update will have the entry of the hero 😃
now before i go on with the story, if you want to imagine them as Maaneet that alright but this story has nothing to do with the show, literally 😆 different characters and all..
just hope you enjoy it! 😃


Chapter Two

"SANTIE! WAKE UP!"

"God, Dee.. i don't have morning classes" Santoshi mumbled sleeping

"i know but Javed is here!"

"KYA?" Santoshi sat on the bed "you're joking na?"

Dia giggled "look at your face! i am not joking, he is downstairs"

"oh my God! why is he here?" she jumped off the bed and ran towards the closet

"wow, taking a shower for Javed.. as if he hasn't been in your room and saw your sleepy face with messy hair" Dia laughed

"chup!" she looked at her closet "where the hell are the towels!?"

"ehm ehm" Dia cleared her throat

"Dee shut up already ok? haan i know i'm going to take a shower and wear my best clothes for Javed anything wrong with that?" Santoshi asked still looking in her closet "now where are the towels!!"

"ehm.. Santie.. um.." Dia tapped her sister's shoulder

"abh kya Dee?!" she looked at her sister annoyed, Dia only pointed at the door, Santoshi could feel her heart slowly dropping as she turned to see Javed standing at the door "nahi"

"nahi kya?" Javed walked towards her "i've been waiting for almost an hour downstairs, Dee said she will wake you up but what for? i always come up here na?" he grinned

Santoshi lowered her head and started combing her hair with her fingers, Dia giggled "i'll leave you love birds alone"

Javed laughed "Dee hasnt change" he looked at Santoshi "kya hua Santie? don't think its my first time up here"

"nahi baas.. it's too early.. wanted to sleep" she mumbled

"so you're throwing me out?"

"no" she looked at him then quickly back down "shit.. didn't mean that"

He giggled grabbing her waist "i've seen you like this and actually worse than this" Santoshi blushed "why are you acting weird Santie?"

"im not" she whispered

"chalo, bolo.. do you like me?"

She giggled remember that she had this conversation with him but she was asking the question "haan" she nodded

Javed's smile faded "sach?" he asked seriously, she nodded "will you marry me?"

Santoshi looked at him shocked "itne jaldi!?"

"no no, not now.. i know you want to graduate and all that.. but like.. engagement party" he grinned, Sanotshi smiled shyly "you can't say no to that na?" Santoshi put her forehead on his chest "haan?" she nodded "YES!"

Santoshi and Javed got engaged on the weekend

"we should plan for the wedding" Javed suggested over dinner with both families

"someone can't wait" Dia joked

"well, i know Santie wants to graduate first, na beti?" Santoshi's father, Shanker asked her

"haan" she nodded shyly "then work at your company.."

"wait, wait.. graduate then marriage THEN work at uncle's company.. i don't think i will wait any longer than graduation"

"oh my God Javed!" Santoshi blushed, they all laughed

"what? i'm an honest man"

"too honest" Kiron laughed

"achcha suno" Javed's mother said "we are all going to Jaipur for the Pukshar fair, and we are inviting you all to come with us"

"Jaipur?" Dia asked "where's that?"

"Rajasthan beti" Kiron said "that is really great, always wanted to go to Jaipur"

"haan i don't like the idea of ajnabi log taking pleasure of our own treasures" Javed's father said, they all laughed

"so true" Shanker agreed "we should go then, what say?"

"can i bring over my friends?" Santoshi asked

"and mine too??" Dia asked

"of course, everyone is welcome, we are families now hai na?" Javed's mother grinned

At college

"JAIPUR! OMG!" Taani clapped "always wanted to go desert camping!"

Santoshi laughed "its a fair duffer"

"haan but there is also desert camping.. you and Javed can have your own tent" she raised her eyebrows smugly at her

"you're so bad you know that? like super bad!" she took a bite from her sandwich

Taani sighed "kya karo friend? don't have anyone to camp with.. want you to have all the fantasy i have!"

Santoshi chocked laughing "TAANI!" she hit her shoulder "shut up yaar.. i won't have my own tent with him.. i'd rather have my tent with my best friends"

"you're such a nerd yaar" Taani laughed "your friends over your fiance?! woha"

"haan, i've known you guys longer so shut it.. will have my tent with you.. he will ask his lame friends to come over anyway"

"PARTY SHARTY!" Taani made a happy dance "all nighty! can't wait for summer vacation!"

"some are waiting for it to graduate, some for party sharty.. pfft" Santoshi shook her head

"haan, you're waiting for both"

"achcha, woh kaise?"

"after you graduate, you're going to party sharty in your wedding night" Santoshi blushed as Taani laughed at her "aww! you'll be living my fantasy pagali you should be happy"

"shut up Taani!" they hugged "can't believe i'm getting married so soon.."

Taani smiled "yeah.. you're lucky yaar.. getting married to someone who loves you like Javed is really rare these days.. hold on to him na?"

Santoshi smiled "and you will soon have your own loving husband to hold on to"

"achcha? Javed's got a brother or something?"

"nahi, but if i got bored with him, you can have him" Taani gasped, Santoshi laughed "it will be fun Jaipur mein.."

"haan your last bachelorette holiday with us" they giggled

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Posted: 14 years ago
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my like button ain't working....but nice update!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update! Bt whn is our maan i mean lead is enterin?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow...superb...she said yes...n they got engaged so soon huh...!!!
ohh i luv Party Sharty..!! hehehe
lovely convo bwt fami n frends...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
that was nice update.....really loved it
great going and do keep writing

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