'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

awwwwwww.........😳😃👏😳

i lovd nupz last reply.....hw zyaada nahi hua toh khat likhungi...lolz..........

this showz her innosense............m sure their bond will not chng..........

awesome update!!

do cont soon!!

n thnx so much for d pm😊

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

hey neela😃
eid mubarak🤗
kaisi rahi tumhari eid
meri to mast thi😛
aur ab aur bhi achi ho gayi tumhari update padke😉😆
😆
ok coming back to the update
it was a great update 👏
i was feeling so sad when mayank went to delhi😭
but i felt terrible when he was going abroad😔
it not fair na
but i am sure mayank will never forget nupur😃
that was a awesome update
and once again
those last line were too good😳
loved it
pls update next part soon
because really waiting for the next part😳

love
tashu

Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago

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abb01

@abb01

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Neela,

I liked ur story but i am angry with you

i am not in PM list

and u might not know i was on vacation

but haan mujhe kaun puchega

main hu hi kaun ek nachij si reader

sad face

Aru

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EID MUBARAK JANI

Neela ,i am happy now

I actually loved the concept and 3 years ka funda also

i remembered clinic plus ka 3*3 adv re

Loved it i actually loved always when mayank says

Nupur ko apne sath le chale so cute

then thr parents are also so nice

But why the separation

Bechare bachche ab khat ke jariye jude rahenge

Now waiting for the next part

update when time permit

Happy face

Aru

Edited by arunabehere - 14 years ago

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

how sad:((((((((((

mayur alada hoe jabe:((((((((((

khubi pocha but hope kono boro somossa hobe na......

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Neela ji

aapke updates mashallah itne pyaare hain ki Kya bataun

bahut hi pyaara update tha

next part jaldi update kijieyga

humein intizaar rahega

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Amazing update

mazaa aa Gaya

loved it

agla update jaldi

u hv an eager reader here

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

EID MUBARAK NEELA DI ! 😊

welcome back :) and get well soon aur update ki utni fikar nahi jitni tumhare health ki hai :) Health comes first ok....

btw coming to the update...bahot hi pyara update, it radiated the innocence of childhood... fights and even patch up but then bond aise hi badhta hai....hmm...mayank nupur ke saath aisa nahi hoga...
distance does hamper relationships especially when in childhood...why childhood even in our older years long distance relationships are tough.

God alone knows how this relation will move on in the future...kya woh itne anjaan ho jaenge ? ya jaan ke bhi anjaan ? Yeh toh bhai bus aap hi bata sakte hoo.....

It was a sweet update !
Take care and update only when your well !!!

Fatima 😳

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

awwwwwwwww

so cute

awesome

i love this story so far

can't wait or mayur to meet again

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

i loved their convos yaar...hamesha ki tarah, too good....

i felt really sad that now they have gone sooooooo far apart....

yaar, koi laut kar nahi aata hai...universal fact....

but i loved this update....do continue sooner this time. :)

P.S- in case u think that why my comment is smaller this time, it is becoz of the small update and due to the pain in my hands.

love,
Mahak