'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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@kheya-mayur

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#91

its not fair...............

erokom muhurte keo lekha ses kore!!!!!!!!!!

joldi update koro.

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#92

waiting 4 that envelope to get open..hmm..awesome update sweety

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shaheen_memon

@shaheen_memon

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#93

first of all sorry for commenting after 4 parts...ws having exams

nw ur ff......dear i really dnt have words its just marvellous🤗

so beautifully u have described each n every emotions aur sone pe suhaga sher after every part again they r going to b a part of my dairy(sorry for nt taking permission)...really awesome yaar

plz do update soon.......waiting eagerly for the envelop to open...........

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#94

neela..................🤗
yea tumne kya kiya.......😆
that was a great update
loved it
that mother daughter moment was too cute😃
hmm...to nupur ko gudda chahiye uo bhi chalne bolne wala ....kahin uo gudda mayank to nahi...😉
mayank's letter...by god you stopped in such a point😆
plsssssssssssssssssssss
update next part soon...atleast try haan😛
but the update was awesome
and like always those lads lines were the best😃😳
😳loved every bit of bit

lots of love
tashu

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ragini sharma

@-DreamzGirl-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

nice one dear . liking very much . i wish at the end of the story hame mayur jarror milenge

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Uff Neela... Ab ye letter kholne ke liye shubh muhurth ke wait kar rahi ho kya?

Hum kar bhi kya sakte hain? Intezaar ke alawa!!!

hmmm.... Waise update tho as usual.. u know..nice 😊

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

nice update

wtg for the next

😊

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Ahaa.....so Nupur's pov? good....lemme read ahead now....

i love the character of Nupur......she is just too like me.....

Does she thinks about Mayank at that time? i wonder why i get that feeling...

Main toh abhi bhi gifts ke maamle mein bahut particular hoon....😆

Yeah....Nupur is too young for marriage....vaise bhi Mayank hasn't returned na!😆

Aha.....so Diya aayi aur Mayank ka paigaam laayi.....so cool!

i wish to know what's in there.....open it sooner yaar....

fab update.......do continue soon...

P.S.- I want Mayur now!!!! *greedy muh* 😆

love,
Mahak