'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 22

Originally posted by: valiyah27

UR back............with a bang.............as usual great update...............i soo miss u ..............wondering is this real Tanmay orrrr..................well will be revealed as update continues.............soo plsss try n cont updating............thnx soo much for updating n pm...................!!!

Yeap..I am back and you're right. All on a sudden I am in a writing spree...Khuda ne agar aise hi symptoms rakkhe to agle kuch dino me hi Intikhaab inshallah khatam kar lenge hum 😊 And what about Tanmay? 😊 yaar itna shakk karte ho aap log...concept me iss triangle ka ziker kiya hai na! Just wait n watch now...

Thanks...

-Neela

Originally posted by: vampire_girl

pls koi mujhe pinch karo..neela ka update...hayye alaah..!! kahin mai sapna to nahi dekh rahi na?...🤣🤣

ok now coming to the update😛

nupur is such a innocent girl😳
tanmay ka kya chakkar dal diya neela apne?😈
but i actually like this guy😆
par nupur ke saath nahi...

is this mayank?😕...but your last note .....did she, unknowingly, just took one step away from what could have been her destiny.

mujhe sochne par majboor kardiya🤢..dekho mujhe nahi pata...mayank tanmay hai ya tanmay mayank...mujhe bas...happy ending chahiye this time😳
pls update soon🤣..jo ki nahi honewala😆

love
tasfia

nautankiiiii...yeh aap ke drama kya khatam nahi hoti kabhi? Kekta serial ki tarha non stop chali jaa rahi hai 😆 😆 btw, pinch bhej diya hai...mila kya? 😆 😆

To aapko Tanmay pasand hai 😲 koi nahi...shaadi karwa dete hai isski Nupur se...kya kehti ho? 😉 baaki readers k jootay parenge woh alag baat hai per meri Tashu to khush hojayegi na! yaar yeh tumne khudko vampire kyun bana daalaaa 🤢 acchi khaasi naam ko bhoot bana diya..😆

Anyways...keep reading. Next update coming soooon inshallah.

-Neela

p.s. You watch CCKP?? 😲 to dair kis baat ki hai...aajao forum pe. We are rocking it now 😃

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti

heyy Neela

very nice update...but the story is very confusing....complicated story..

let's see what happened in the end...but its seems Triangle love story.

do continue soon...

jawab to subhe se de rahe hai hum aapko...phir bhi yahan jawab nahi diya to phir se aap ke shikayeton k line jayenge 😊 story me confusing kya laga...so far kaafi straightforward hai sab kuch. sach kaho k hum khud aapko confusing aur complicated lagte hai...aur aapko hamare FF se bhi yehi umeed rehti hai. kher...yeh to waqt ki baat hai 😊 Aur haan ji..Triangle Love Story nahi hai...yeh hai PRISM 😊 A complicated Triangle 😆

Shuker hai k abhi tak parh rahi aur hamari to bas Khuda khair kare...

Thanks...😊

-Neela (naam thik se dekhlo...)

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

ufffffffffffff
etodin por update!!!!!!!!!!

tao eto choto!!!!!!
ei kahini kon dike jasse kisui bujtesi na..........next update joldi koro

Kheya...tumi amar ei chotto prithibite notun ele..tai janona. amar nikhonj hoye jawar ekta batik ache. dekhona...jokhon udhao hoye jai to keu kicchu bolena. shobai jaane..meyetar mathata abar geche..jokhon thik hobe tokhon dibbi phire ashbe r ami ashio. keu keu obaak hoy abar onekei ekhon r prosno korena 😆 tobe shob baarer moto ebar o pranpon cheshta korbo jeno continuity and consistency dutai bojay rakhte pari. Thanks for your comments Kheya...bhalo theko

-Neela

Originally posted by: tellycrazy

I thought that guy was Samrat but am quite surprised to hear it was somebody else😊

Neela, your dicion in Hindi is awesome. You writings in Hindi is beautiful and very poetic. Though not my first language, I enjoy Hindi and recognize its potential to be the most romatic language after Urdu and Arabic😳😳

I would say the factor that sets Intikhaab apart is your wonderful usage of the Hindi language. Keep it up👏

Thank you Nitya. Its nice to see you commenting here which is very rare 😊 So Nitya speaks up and when she does she showers the FF with such graceful words 😊 Once again thank you for such beautiful expression, not sure how much I deserve them though. By the way, the language is more of Urdu than Hindi. Pure Hindi is something I used on Shukla sir in one of the chapters, this is Urdu, more of an easier version for everyone's understanding. But the shayeris are usually in pure Urdu. I am absolutely in love with this language...not my 1st language but its my Jaan's 1st language and I am no way near to the level I hope to be some day like Jaan.

Please continue reading and comment whenever you can or feel the urge to 😊
-Neela

Originally posted by: ...Mahak...

Wow....brilliant....hmm......so she and tanmay are friends now...

U mean she can fall for him instead of mayank?

And i am soooo happy that it is not Samrat....becoz i always feel bad for his heart-break irrespective of the happiness i feel in mayur's reunion....

And ur last sentence...that was she taking on step away from her destiny.....umm kinda loved it....

Awesome update..update karte raha karo...i miss your updates :)

- Mahak

Hi Mahak...glad you liked the update. So she may fall for Tanmay? Don't ask me..you tell me 😊 What do you think? Can it happen? And I dunno why or what made ppl think it was Samrat. I will never use Sammy as a lead character in any of my FFs. Mainly because I cannot imagine him even imgaining about Nupur. MJHT is nothing MaYur to me..everything else didn't effect me that much.

Anyways..I will try to update more frequently (me ponders 😆 )

Love
-Neela

Originally posted by: sharneel

Thank you Nitya. Its nice to see you commenting here which is very rare 😊 So Nitya speaks up and when she does she showers the FF with such graceful words 😊 Once again thank you for such beautiful expression, not sure how much I deserve them though. By the way, the language is more of Urdu than Hindi. Pure Hindi is something I used on Shukla sir in one of the chapters, this is Urdu, more of an easier version for everyone's understanding. But the shayeris are usually in pure Urdu. I am absolutely in love with this language...not my 1st language but its my Jaan's 1st language and I am no way near to the level I hope to be some day like Jaan.

Please continue reading and comment whenever you can or feel the urge to 😊
-Neela

Originally posted by: princez_94

Reserved....!!!

kahan gayab ho gaye thi? Its good to have you back! 😳

Edited

Sab say pehle "Welcome Back" 🤗

Back to the update... Bechari Nupur sab usske he peeche parhey hain...

lol...Aafat...🤣 I'm loving this new guy.. Jho Nupur Bhusan say takraya hai...

But very nice... Kya zamana agaya hai bechari sakoon say mail bhi nahi likh sakti hai...

But amazing update Neela "as always"...

So Tanmay & Nupur...? 🤔 I've analysed this line a lot, read the previous parts once again... & read ur comments to others...And I've come to an conclusion ... I'm still not sure, you're very unpredictable but let's see what happens next... & I'm having a very bad feeling about this... it's like you have given some clues in every update... Yah yeh mujhe he lagta hai..? 😛 But in certain updates there are sentences that makes you think...Lekin dekhte hai Nupur ki kismat main kya likha hai...

"Will this road lead her to her destination or did she, unknowingly, just took one step away from what could have been her destiny."

-Laiba

Well...hamesha sabse pehle aake reserve karti ho aur sab aakhir me aake edit karte ho...how am I supposed to post another update without your comments...bolo? 😊 So what conclusion have you derived from all my comments? And what bad feelings? itne uljhan me kyun ho Laiba? khulke bolo...I am not unpredictable...every part...every chapter..especially the concept has the story outlined very clearly...bas samajhne ki dair hai 😊 Lets wait n watch..see what happens!

-Neela

p.s. what happened to the bright pink text 😲