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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire_girl

yayayayayya me 1st..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🥳..
i am so happy..!!😃😳

now coming to the update
uff...!!!! what an update😆
amazing update..you know what nupur's confusion is just awesome
it feels so interesting and it brings smile on my face😆

the letter nupur wrote..was so so awesome😃
waah..!!!! kya likha hai...mai hoto to sochti hi reh ajti bas..!!🤣

nupur's bond with tanmay..
aisa kyun kararahi ho..kya dushamani hai apki nupur aur mayank ke saath hone se
hey wait..jan tanmay ne log in kiya to mayank kaise online mila😲
tanmay mayank hai kya?😕..ya phir mayank hai hi nahi...jaise apke pichle ff me nupur nahi thi🤢arey mujhe itna confuse na kiya karo na😭
kitna dimag lagana parta hai apke ff's parte waqt😳.sara dimag ihan hi laga dalti hoon mai🤣
anyways now am sure mayank aur tanmay me koi na koi connection to hai..may be tanmaya has come on mayank's saying..and will end up falling for nupur😲
OMG..!! jaldi pls jaldi update karna😆

love
tasfia



Haila...itna soch daala!! 😲😲😲😲

kyun dimagh ko itna taqleef de rahi ho aap. iss dimagh ko apni FF me lagaye...shayed hamari rated ki kuch nikal aaye 😆 😆 Tanmay se Mayank ka connection? kyunki dono online the!! haila I used the technology only...when you log into Yahoo Email, your friends can send messages because they know you are online. bas itni si baat thee...isska kya bana daala 😛

ek kaam karte hai..Tanmay ko Mayank ki twin brother kar lete hai jo bachpan me mele me kho gaya tha. kya kehti ho? 😆 About Tanmay falling for Nupur..I think you will absolutely love the next chapter which I have already written and is so far the best one I think.

Lovely comments...agli baar bhi aap hi first comment karna. jisski pehel itni acchi ho usski aakhir bhi acchi hi hogi plus shayed meri kismet khul jaaye aur meri LIKE buttons 18 se phir se 33 hojaye 😃

-Neela

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

waooo...

sab se mazay ka tu nupur aur us k dil hai...dil mein ladoo phoot rahy hain....wah...loved.....yeah jo ek anjana se rishta shooro horaha hai ...buhat khubsoorat hai...ap humain janti hain na...islyan kah rahy hain...yeah us saat samdar paar wlay rishty se bhi zyada mazay ka hai....
nupur aur mayank ke chat.....lol.....humain mayank k jawab buhat acha laga.....buhat maza aaya ...nupur k khabrahat aur tamay k reaction....sab buhat acha tha ....bs ap ki akhiri 4 lines...huamin phir se kuch paresha ker gi..
buhat khub as usual
PS...hum per bahroosa rekhny k shukriaya.....hum InshaAllah khoshish keray gay k ap ki umedo per pora utray.....han han is per ap hum sab ko bora bana nay k soch rahi hain😉....



LOL...yeah you're right. This time its all about Nupur....her thoughts had to be very clearly reflected. I guess I am trying to show the flow of her feelings and thoughts as she falls in love...or shall I say she realises her love for her childhood but long lost best friend. I will not allow the readers to see Tanmay or Mayank's side that much simply because this story is from Nups's POV and readers will be as oblivious as Nupur will be throughout the story. Only then you will be where I want you to be to help me end this story. English kuch zyada hogaya Fiza ki comment me! LOL...aaj na jaane kyun Urdu pe ghussa aaraha hai...kya kare *sigh*.

p.s. scrap for you...

-Neela
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel



Haila...itna soch daala!! 😲

kyun dimagh ko itna taqleef de rahi ho aap. iss dimagh ko apni FF me lagaye...shayed hamari rated ki kuch nikal aaye 😆 😆 Tanmay se Mayank ka connection? kyunki dono online the!! haila I used the technology only...when you log into Yahoo Email, your friends can send messages because they know you are online. bas itni si baat thee...isska kya bana daala 😛

ek kaam karte hai..Tanmay ko Mayank ki twin brother kar lete hai jo bachpan me mele me kho gaya tha. kya kehti ho? 😆 About Tanmay falling for Nupur..I think you will absolutely love the next chapter which I have already written and is so far the best one I think.

Lovely comments...agli baar bhi aap hi first comment karna. jisski pehel itni acchi ho usski aakhir bhi acchi hi hogi plus shayed meri kismet khul jaaye aur meri LIKE buttons 18 se phir se 33 hojaye 😃

-Neela

haan bohot kuch soch dala😆..apne FF par kya dimag lagaunn..itna common sa to hai😆...haan i know par yahoo mail par mayank tabhi kyun ol hua jab tanmay ne apna email check kiya?😕...koi aur time pe bhi to hosaka tha na😉

nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii maynak ki hai nupur sirf bas..!!😭
tanmay ke liye mai hoon na😳..nupuir ko goli marne ko kaho tanmay ko..aur mere post parne ko kaho🤣..ya allah..curiousity kyun bara rahi hoap?😆

inshallah..ek din apki likes 333 hogi😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel



Haila...itna soch daala!! 😲

kyun dimagh ko itna taqleef de rahi ho aap. iss dimagh ko apni FF me lagaye...shayed hamari rated ki kuch nikal aaye 😆 😆 Tanmay se Mayank ka connection? kyunki dono online the!! haila I used the technology only...when you log into Yahoo Email, your friends can send messages because they know you are online. bas itni si baat thee...isska kya bana daala 😛

ek kaam karte hai..Tanmay ko Mayank ki twin brother kar lete hai jo bachpan me mele me kho gaya tha. kya kehti ho? 😆 About Tanmay falling for Nupur..I think you will absolutely love the next chapter which I have already written and is so far the best one I think.

Lovely comments...agli baar bhi aap hi first comment karna. jisski pehel itni acchi ho usski aakhir bhi acchi hi hogi plus shayed meri kismet khul jaaye aur meri LIKE buttons 18 se phir se 33 hojaye 😃

-Neela


r a baba - kyun use dant rahi ho????
hahahaha aisa guess maine bi kya tha.............
lekin tumhare reply padne ki baad apni demag se wo hota diya
now no more gussing just waiitng for ur next part
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-


r a baba - kyun use dant rahi ho????
hahahaha aisa guess maine bi kya tha.............
lekin tumhare reply padne ki baad apni demag se wo hota diya
now no more gussing just waiitng for ur next part

yeess milgayi meri supporter milgayi🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-


r a baba - kyun use dant rahi ho????
hahahaha aisa guess maine bi kya tha.............
lekin tumhare reply padne ki baad apni demag se wo hota diya
now no more gussing just waiitng for ur next part



Faria..ok bokchina kintu tomake bokte jacchi. nijer kono comment nai naki je oke quote korle?😊 r ami kokhon bollam j tomra bhul bolcho 😉...eibar to ending ta likhi nai ami..so even I don't know! tomra jerokom ending debe sheirokom kore likhbo...ami just bollam j ami eto bhebe likhi nai eshob. I wanted to get them online on chat somehow for future purposes...at the same time I wanted Tanmay to support her to show their blooming friendship. eto kichu bhebe likhi nai 😊

Btw, Tashu bhabche tumi ami childhood friend. tumi ek kaaj koro tomar jiboner shob cheye boro secret bole felo amake...then she doesn't have to be wrong 😆 😆

-Neela
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel



Faria..ok bokchina kintu tomake bokte jacchi. nijer kono comment nai naki je oke quote korle?😊 r ami kokhon bollam j tomra bhul bolcho 😉...eibar to ending ta likhi nai ami..so even I don't know! tomra jerokom ending debe sheirokom kore likhbo...ami just bollam j ami eto bhebe likhi nai eshob. I wanted to get them online on chat somehow for future purposes...at the same time I wanted Tanmay to support her to show their blooming friendship. eto kichu bhebe likhi nai 😊

Btw, Tashu bhabche tumi ami childhood friend. tumi ek kaaj koro tomar jiboner shob cheye boro secret bole felo amake...then she doesn't have to be wrong 😆 😆

-Neela

amar jibone actually onek boro ekta secret ase sheta bolle you will misunderstand me😆..actually je keu hok na keno amke bhul bujhbe😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire_girl


amar jibone actually onek boro ekta secret ase sheta bolle you will misunderstand me😆..actually je keu hok na keno amke bhul bujhbe😆



Tomar secret diye ami ki korbo? tumi to amar childhood friend na! Ami Faria'r secret e interested. Btw, bhaloi to bangla bolcho...fazlami korar jonno pooro forum e r kauke pelena?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel



Tomar secret diye ami ki korbo? tumi to amar childhood friend na! Ami Faria'r secret e interested. Btw, bhaloi to bangla bolcho...fazlami korar jonno pooro forum e r kauke pelena?

thank god you are not interested🤣
bhalo mone hoche ..thanks...ektu upodesh diye den na..bengali te bhalo korar..i hate these sub of mine..ah .! its sucks

ami shobar shatei fajlami kori..je kauke jigesh kore nen..shobai same uttor debe🤣🤣

🤢
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire_girl

thank god you are not interested🤣
bhalo mone hoche ..thanks...ektu upodesh diye den na..bengali te bhalo korar..i hate these sub of mine..ah .! its sucks

ami shobar shatei fajlami kori..je kauke jigesh kore nen..shobai same uttor debe🤣🤣

🤢



bhabkhana emon j ami jante chaile tumi shobar shaamne ei public forum e tomar secret reveal kore debe..bekub!

shobar shathe fazlami kintu korchona...protita line er shathe kichu smiley add korcho tar maane eta na j fazlami korcho. Sometimes I heard you say a lot more meaningful things behind those emoticons..but I ignored coz thats none of my business and its out of my territory 😊

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