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Posted: 14 years ago
~~~~ Part 10: From Friendship to Love ~~~~


..tumhari email se lagta hai meri woh choti si pyari si Nupur ab bohat bari hogayi hai. hamesha kya aise hi suljhakar baatein karti ho? pehle to aisi nahi thee. hamesha mujhse kisi na kisi baat ko lekar jhagra karti thee…mere khilone le jaaya karti thee. ab to aisa lagta hai meri woh Nupur kahi kho gayi hai..saamne se guzar jaaye to shayed main pehchaan naa paaoon.

Europe bohat hi khubsoorat hai. hamesha se hi…these countries are a good mixture of both traditions and modernism. kahi kahi pe jaao to hazaron saal purani imaartein dikhti hai…churches, castles and palaces ..its all amazing. aur phir jab shehe me jaate hai to modernism kick in big time. The facilities, the transport system, the fast-food generation all just clicks like that! tum ek kaam kyun nahi karti..aajao yahan pe. I promise, guide bannke tumhe poora Europe ghumaoonga..woh bhi muft. kya kehti ho?

ab ijaazat de do…emails jab hai to ummeed hai k aise emails ab milte hi rahenge akser…hai na? kaushish karenge hum bhi k tumhe jald se jald hi jawab de. We have lots to catch up with. bohat saare baatein karni hai…bohat kuch batana hai tumhe abhi to. per tum itni closed kyun ho? iss dost pe bharosa nahi raha kya? kuch bhi to nahi bata rahe ho apne baare me. kya karti ho…kya parti ho. Write all the details…intezar me hai hum..hamesha ki tarha.

-Mayank

p.s. tumhare naik tamannaon k liye bohat shukriya. haan…zindagi me kaafi aage barh gaye hai per manzil abhi tak haasil nahi hui. abhi bhi kuch raastein hai jinnse guzarna hai abhi..abhi bhi kuch manzar hai jinhe dekhna baaki hai. yeh alag baat hai k unn raahon me humsafar agar saath ho to shayed safar aur bhi dilchasb bann jaaye.


Nupur is sitting in front of the PC and reading Mayank's reply. Although days have passed by and Nupur is a bit more comfortable with her arch enemy (ok I am talking about the computer, not Tanmay) but she still can't help but feel a bit shy after reading this email. Then again she comes out of her world rapidly and starts looking around wondering if anyone is noticing her.

"ufff kya musibat hai…shaanti se email bhi nahi parh sakte. yeh poori duniya hamari hi computer ko kyun ghoor rahe hai. kya inhe pata to nahi chal gaya kuch..hamari shakal se to kuch pata nahi chal raha na (as she wipes her face with her dupatta). per yeh khat ghar kaise le jaayen…kaise printout nikalte hai. yaar hum itne buddhu kyun hai! arree…ghalti hamari kahan! duniya me jis cheez se humain hamesha chirh rahi…jisse hum hamesha bhaagte rahe ab wohi aake humse chipak gaya. ab kya kaer…kya kare..!"

Thats when she notices Tanmay…as usual waiting in the queue to get an available PC. Nupur rushes to him..

N: arrey Tanmay..tum! arrmm yahan kaise aana hua?
T: bas…hawa khaane aagaya. bhook lagi thee..kuch aur mila nahi to socha iss queue me khare hoke hawa hi khaa loon
N: arre..yahan iss bheer me…hawa khaane me maza kahan? apne is choti sheher me hawa khaane k aur bhi bohat acche acche jagah hai. hum le jaayenge tumhe..issme kya baat hai?
T: wah…aaj saamne se aake itni meherbaani kar rahi ho! matlab kya hai tumhara?
N: arre…hum dost bann gaye hai na ab. to meherbaani kaisi. aakhir ek dost hi to dost k kaam aata hai na.
T: ohho…to janab ko mujh ghareeb se kuch kaam hai
N: arre maine aisa kab kaha..
T: nahi nahi..aap kyun kehne lagi bhala. main khud keh raha hoon k main aap k liye kya kar sakta hoon Ms. Nupur Sharma
N: woh Tanmay…mujhe ek printout nikaalna tha per samajh nahi aaraha k kaise nikaaloon
T: hahhaa…bas itni si baat. chalo aao yahan..main dikha deta hoon.

So Nupur gets her 1st lesson in computing from Tanmay but promises him to show him around the town as a favour returned.

In the evening, they decide to start the tour. Nupur takes him around her favourite places and does not hesitate to elaborate on the history behind each place.

N: yeh hai iss choti si pyari si sheher ki sabse khubsoorat jagah…iss sheher ki jaan maano. (she shows him the waterfall).
T: beautiful…jitna socha tha isse bhi zyada hasseen hai yeh jagah
N: socha tha matlab?
T: I mean poori raasta bakbak karti aayi k jharna yeh jharna woh…so andaaza laga raha tha actually yeh jharna kya hai. jo bhi kaha kam kaha. waqai me bohat acchi jagah hai
N: iss jharne ki ek ajeeb kahani hai. Baba batate hai k sadiyon pehle iss jharne k paas do premi mila karte the per unnki family me kuch annbann hone ki wajah se larki ki shaadi kahi aur hogayi. aur shaadi k din hi ussi larke ne yahan pe aatmahattya karli. *sigh* uss din k baad se yeh jagah iss sheher ki TajMahal jaisi hogayi. yahan pe akser couples ko dekha jaata hai…hai na kahani ajeeb?
T: ajeeb to hai. per aaj k daur me yeh sirf kahani hi bannke reh gayi hai. aisa pyaar..aisi jazba iss yug me nahi dikhta.
N: pyaar aur jazbaat ka kisi yug ya daur se kya talluk. dil ki baat hai…dil agar saccha ho..jazbon me agar woh shiddath ho to sau saal pehle ho ya aaj se sau saal baad…ishq me jaan dena kabhi bhi iss duniya k liye purani baat nahi hogi


Tanmay is staring at Nupur's face who seems to be lost in some other thought whilst she utters those words. In true sense, she is actually thinking of Mayank.

Has Nupur already started to feel that way about Mayank? At the revival of their communication, has this relationship has actually become something merely more than just childhood friendship? Above all…does Mayank feel the same way as Nupur does!

All on the coming updates…

-Neela

Writer's note: sorry for the short update…from this point on, things will start changing soon but its not something that can be rushed. I am taking my time so that the characters are justified for their future actions.


~~~~~~~~~~~
juda juda hai apni raahein to kya
khaffa khaffa si hai yeh aahein to kya
na kuch maanga Khuda se jo maanga tumhe
beasar hai magar meri duayein to kya

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Posted: 14 years ago

Reserved...iss baar jaldi unres. Kar dhun ghi.. 😳

Edited

Kya kahein itna accha update parh kar...
Beginning fromthe title from "friendship to love". Confusing title as its no clear yet who you're talking about.
meri woh choti si pyari si Nupur ab bohat bari hogayi hai.. Embarrassed
Mayank ki e-mail thori si confusing, but i assume he meant it in a friendly way, still it so sweet...No wonder she was shying like that after reading.
arch enemy ... Nupur is so adorable, lekin bechari ka dushman ussay chipk gaya..🤣Mayank aur Nupur ke beech usska dushman a khara hua hai...😆
Waise shukriya Neela je... pehle aap ke updates humein rulate thy aap hasatey hain...Embarrassed
Tanmay-Nupur friendship si growing, it was sweet of her to show him around... The waterfall reminded me of Qayeenat... Jaise woh wahan gaye thy aur uss jagah ki dastan ka pata chala tha...unlike Qayeenat iss jagah naye ek acchi yaad chorri... Nupur ko Mayank ki yaad arahi hai... aur pyaar ka ehsaas abhi say he... That was unexpected, pehle mayank ka e-mail aur ab Nupur ke khayal...
Looking forward to the update... sorry for this behka, behka comment lekin aapke update naye confuse kar diya..
-Laiba
- You like pink better than black & red?
I thought it was time for a change... You don't like it?
Aap chali gaye aur sab rang le gaye...
Edited by princez_94 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

aadab

mayank k khat..was soo sweet an awesum.....so as nupurs new frnd......
yeah tu teeno hi itny pyary hain.....ab kis k hisay mein kya aay ga..yeah jany ki bari bekarai hai hamain.....
lovly to cya back soo soon....
PS ap k jawab parh k tu aur daar lag raha hai......per phir bhi hum por umeed hain....
tc
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy Neela...
Beautiful update...loved Mayank reply.
last lines..hmm....mujhe lagt hai...abhi aik aur character ki bhi entery hona baqi hai...
is bar bharosa kiya hai...dekho is story ka kya anjaam hota hai...hope for the best...
keep updating....
Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel



nautankiiiii...yeh aap ke drama kya khatam nahi hoti kabhi? Kekta serial ki tarha non stop chali jaa rahi hai 😆 😆 btw, pinch bhej diya hai...mila kya? 😆 😆

To aapko Tanmay pasand hai 😲 koi nahi...shaadi karwa dete hai isski Nupur se...kya kehti ho? 😉 baaki readers k jootay parenge woh alag baat hai per meri Tashu to khush hojayegi na! yaar yeh tumne khudko vampire kyun bana daalaaa 🤢 acchi khaasi naam ko bhoot bana diya..😆

Anyways...keep reading. Next update coming soooon inshallah.

-Neela

p.s. You watch CCKP?? 😲 to dair kis baat ki hai...aajao forum pe. We are rocking it now 😃

hayye mai na nautanki hi hoon..apke FF's ne bana diya hai😳
nahi nupur ki shadi mayank se karwa do..aur tanmay ke liye mai hoon na😳🤣🤣
mai vampire hi hoon..mai 200 saal ki hoon😳
haan arahi hoon us forum me...🤣
ap bulao aur hum na aye aisa to nahi hoskata na😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey neela..!!🤗
itna fast fast update...neela wapas agayi lagta hai😆
coming to the update

it was mindblowing...loved the way nupur fight with the tecnology🤣
mayank's letter was so so nice..aisa lagra tha jaise mere liye ho😳😍

specially when he said..
.meri woh choti si pyari si Nupur ab bohat bari hogayi hai.
aur uo wala to bas kuch aur hi tha...
yeh alag baat hai k unn raahon me humsafar agar saath ho to shayed safar aur bhi dilchasb bann jaaye.

it was really really awesome❤️
tanmay..uff..!! aisa kyun laga hai yea mayank hai..ya mayank se connected hai..i mean he's sweet lekin mysterious hai😆
specially when he said..
beautiful'jitna socha tha isse bhi zyada hasseen hai yeh jagah..kya hai yea...pata nahi..par lagta hai kuch aur hi hai😳

Tanmay is staring at Nupur's face who seems to be lost in some other thought...why is he staring..OMG..what if he falls for her...nahiii..aisa na karo pls😭..bechare ka dill toot jayega😳..kyun ki nupur sirf mayank ki hai
and those last lines....mindblowing...loved them as usual❤️
ok mayank is feeling the same thing right?😕..cause if he isnt..then nupur is going to have a heart break🥺..oh god no..its hurts na..if you love someone and he doesnt love you back..god..nooo!! neela aisa kuch kiya na to dekhlena😈
continue soon pls😊

love
tasfia
Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


Neela ji apka udate bahutttttttttttt he accha tha
mayak ki letter padke dil khush hogayi
specially when he said- ..tumhari email se lagta hai meri woh choti si pyari si Nupur ab bohat bari hogayi hai. hamesha kya aise hi suljhakar baatein karti ho?

i mean i wanna emphasize on word - "Meri"
hayeeeeeeeee kitna accha letter-

Oye hoye nups was blushing - hahahaa loved my sweet, innocent nups
hehehehe the way she was looking around her- lagta hai ki koi chodi pakdi gayi.lol
loved nups and tanmay frship

btw nups is falling for mayank- but whats abt maynk ??
i hope he also love nups-

hey hey why tanmay was tarring at nupur- kahi ise bhi tou kuch kuch nehi ho rahe hai na
hmmmmm lets c- whats waiting for us.


good update Neela
simply awesome
keep it up


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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
luved maynk e-mail n nupur...she's soooo sweet n innocent
luved tanmay n nupur convo
cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing n beautifully written...so touching....well who's tanmay...?n were is mayyu ..?
i guess 4 dis v hav 2 wait 4 next update..😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
oooohhhh....mayank wants a hamsafar?? Nupur, where art thou? :D

Lol.....nupur is so confused, Just like my frd, whom i had to literally teach typing even!

So nupur asked for his help? zaroorat padne par gadhe ko bhi baap banana padta hai...so true....

Interesting story of that jharna....although aisi places ke peeche selfless love hi hota hai!

beautiful story......nupur started feeling for mayank....

awesome update.....liked it much.....but wanna read mayur more...

but yeah, i loved the poetic four lines....as always, they seem to make me fall in love with them...

continue soon...

-Mahi

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