'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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-NightDreamer-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#181

it awesum..neela luved it u r an amzing writer i must say m speechless😍

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Sania

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Posted: 14 years ago

#182

Aadaab Neela Ji!

umeed hai aap theek hon gi

app ne apne paigham mei likha tha ke app is kahani me tabdeeli laane ki koshish

kar rahi hain...........humain ya tabdeeli behad pasand aaye 👍🏼

bas ab ye dooriyaan........ye faasle jald se jald khatam ho jayen

aap ki agli update ka intezaar karen ge........umeed hai agli baar bhi aap humain zyada intezaar nahin karwaayen gi!

apna khayal rakhiye ga........Allahh Hafiz 😊

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kirti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#183

wah neela

loved nupurs thoughts about the modern world

beautiful update

😊

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#184

hey neela..🤗
firs of all i am really sorry i forgit to edit my comment for the previous part..OMG how can i forgot...isiliye is bar directly coome kar diya..😆

this was the best part so far....😃
amazing...too good
nupur is so natural😳
loved dia's and her convo...
oye hoye..she was feeling shy...😳...me too feeling shy🤣
awesome part
and as usual those last lines were fab
continue soon

love
tashu

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#185

they way u decrib nature it was soo gud...but im a techo girl.....u made be embarrsed...lol

anyways

lovely update

n abt ur rply at last one....

i''ll try n give my answers as realistic as i can.....

sorry for short coment

need to go ...

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shaheen_memon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#186

thanks dear for the update u r a fabulous witter no words to describe hw wonderful it is...

hum to aapki shayri ke kayar hai...deewana kar diya hai aapke 1-1 sher ne..

sach aapke agle update ka besabri se intezaar rahega

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sehrish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#187

wahhhh neeela
awesum update yrr
lovin ittt
luv sehr
sorry for short coment busy with studies yrrr

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sariska sujaini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#188

Part 6 was super amazing

loved it

cont soon

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sariska sujaini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#189

Part 8 was amazing

cont soon

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#190

unusual update neela..Nupur's uljhan was actually quite interesting, they are indeed complete opposites arent they.. its true the beauty of a handwritten letter is totally not there in the drab formality or even an informal email.. Letters are like poetry..while emails are ur ad jingles...while poetry is about beauty...ad jingles simply serve the purpose.. but are not beautiful...

the update was gr8 as usual! :)

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