'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 21

Originally posted by: nikki028

tanmay??????😳😳😳....i thot it ws Mayank who for d time bein wantd to hide his identity...bt ur endin note in "thought" makin me rethink...is this Tanmay for real????😲

nywz vry nice update neela.....👍🏼

Nikkiiii...wow! I know you read my FFs per aaj to comment hi kar diya 😊 Good to see you sweety...

All I can say in response to your reaction is that don't look behind the screen to find facts. The only condition for my readers on Intikhaab is you've got to put yourself in Nupur's shoes. Otherwise, you will not be able to relate to the storyline and when time comes and Nupur needs to make the biggest decision of her life and I ask for your opinion, you will not have that empathy. phir meri Nupur k saath injustice hojayega 😊 Look at things the way Nupur does and you will eventually get all your answers 😊

Thank you...and keep reading 😊

-Neela

Originally posted by: nightdreamer_mn

Long tym...neela..were wer u..all dese dayz...missing ur ff...well it was really amaizng update...da new guy i thought it was mayyu i guess der intersting one is still yet 2 cum...😃

lol...woh aap ne jo PM ke zariye sawalon ke bhouchar kiye...ussi se darrke chhup gaye the hum 😆
abhi thodi si himmat karke aaye hai yahan.

kaisi ho Summi? And thanks for the comments. i'll try to update more frequently. aajkaal likhne ka mood hai ji

-Neela

heyy Neela

dear plz dnt make us w8 for soooo long

UR back............with a bang.............as usual great update...............i soo miss u ..............wondering is this real Tanmay orrrr..................well will be revealed as update continues.............soo plsss try n cont updating............thnx soo much for updating n pm...................!!!

ufffffffffffff
etodin por update!!!!!!!!!!

tao eto choto!!!!!!
ei kahini kon dike jasse kisui bujtesi na..........next update joldi koro

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

Salam

aj tum kamal k din hai...pehly tu ap k pm aaya .....is pagham k intezar hum kab se ker rahy thy....kal hi soch rahy thy ap ko tang keray ek scrap ker k...per ap k dil zayada acha hai....humari baat tu sunata hai kam se kam..😆...

a beautiful one...though was short.....but nupur' unsaid word...her fears n her embarssmnt all was perfect in this.....tu akhir kismat ahi gai....humain intezar tha us moor k jis se kahin ek new turn layti hai.....

ap ki agli tareer k mantazar......

fr8 part

PS: apny humary ff per akar humain kitni khushi di ap nhi janti.....

n the last lines u wrote ...aww...mindblowing...pata nhi kyun per aksar ap woh kah jati hain jo hum shyad kah nhi patay...lovly

uffooo...dekhiye meri shakal..😳 aisi hi hogayi hai ab to 😊 aap ke dono jawab parhe abhi abhi..wahan k aur yahan k 😊 in fact kal na jaane kya hogaya k bhatak bhatakte aap k FF pe jaake haazir hogaye. hum kabhi silent reader ki tarha kuch parhke baghair LIKE dabaye chale jaate hai akser per kal dil ne chaha k parhe aur parhne k baad lagah k kuch kehna to chahiye..Fiza ki mehfil se chupchap uthke chale aana beaadbi hojayegi 😊 aur jo dil me aaya likh diya..I am so glad k jo bas ek coincidence sa tha wohi aapke dil ko itna khush kar gaya. Bless you..

About your comment above...haan ji..akhir woh manzar aahi gayi jahan pe jaake zindagi ek doosri mor legi. kahi sawalon k toofan ka saamna karna hai Nupur ko..I feel sorry for my characters. hum unhe beinteha pyar karte hai phir bhi unhe unn raaston se guzarna parta hai jahan se hum shayed apne dushmano ko bhi guzarne ki dua na kare. saath rehiyega hamare...hamari kahani aap logon k ahsaas k baghair adhuri reh jaati hai.

Last lines (hamari FF ki?? wrote something on yours as well 😊) kya kahe...shukriya...bohat ajeeb comment hai per sach hai...dil se hai

Lets see what happens next..

-Neela

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Hello Neela ji
Shuvo nabo barsha

Hey Neela
i missed u and ur ff- r a bhai kichu din por por tumi kothai gayeb hoye jao boloto???
kono khobor thake na......


accha update porlam------------ hahahaa as usual nieearish update.LOL
at first i thought thy guy was mayank , then thought sam but finally found Tanmay
hehehehe accha gadha baniyecho amader.

lovely update Neela- tanmay-nups convo ta onek moza legeche
khub valo update
next part jaldi update koro- kemon????

abar nabo borsher shuveccha roilo....
valo theko

lol...gayeb hoar ekta bhalo batik ache amar. shudhu virtual world noy, ami real life eo gayeb hoye jai. ek jaygay, ek barite ek thikanay ami ek bochorer beshi thakte parina. amar majhe majhe mone hoy ami bodh hoy paliye beracchi. mojar byapar holo jekhan theke palai ghure phire abar shekhanei chole ashi 😆 😆

Update bhalo legeche...good! Tanmay er dhakka shamlate perecho tahole! ami to shei kokhon theke bolchi j tomra keno assume korcho Samrat! S means student, kintu keu to shunlena. shobai nijerai nijeke gadha banale...not my fault 😆

Shubho Noboborsho tomakeo! Pohela boishakh...bashonti ronge shajano thakuk protita muhurto tomar..

Shubhecchante
-Neela

Originally posted by: shaheen_memon

dear plz dnt make us w8 for soooo long

i eagerly wait for ur update....

n u r superb this was amazing.... 😊

So sorry yaar! Wish I had an upper hand on this. This time sincerely try karti hoon...to update frequently. By the way, last lines note kar liya na? kaisi thee yeh wale?

Thank you so much for your cute comment 😊

-Neela