'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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-SharNeela-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti
heyyyy Neela

h r u?nice to see u after long time

beautiful update

do continue soon

Salam ji...to aap abhi tak hamara saath nibhaa rahe hai. Glad to see that coz I am looking forward to that interesting conversation we had during the Qayenaat days.

Take care and thanks 😊

-Neela

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-SharNeela-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: princez_94

It was such a dreamy update... aur pata bhi nahi chala kab khatab ho gaya... I was writing this oneshot thing and when i saw ur pm i dropped everything... Aur tum yeh karti ho...So short... Agli baar ek lambaaa udpate chahiye...

& Aur main bilkul theek ho tum sunao? aaj kal ziada busy rehti ho?

& let me qoute from ur ff...

yeh tum mujhe 'aap' kyun bula rahe ho? . 'aap' kehna bandh karo ji'aur meri dost bann jao foran se..

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LOL..wah ji wah yeh to hum per hi chutkula bann gaya 😆 thik hai...aaj se tumhari demotion hui..'aap' se 'tum' aur dost to hum hamesha the..abhi bhi hai..tumse ho ya aap se 😊 haan busy to hain hum, fursat se likh nahi paate isska afsos bhi hota hai. per ekbaar likhne lage to bas...agli daffa ka pata nahi per agle mahine se I will be regular with longer updates. tab tak manage karlo plz.

accha tum KMH ki forum pe jaati ho kya? I will be joining soon. loving the series so far...per kaafi episodes miss bhi kiye.. *sigh*

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: sharneel

LOL..wah ji wah yeh to hum per hi chutkula bann gaya 😆 thik hai...aaj se tumhari demotion hui..'aap' se 'tum' aur dost to hum hamesha the..abhi bhi hai..tumse ho ya aap se 😊 haan busy to hain hum, fursat se likh nahi paate isska afsos bhi hota hai. per ekbaar likhne lage to bas...agli daffa ka pata nahi per agle mahine se I will be regular with longer updates. tab tak manage karlo plz.

accha tum KMH ki forum pe jaati ho kya? I will be joining soon. loving the series so far...per kaafi episodes miss bhi kiye.. *sigh*

😆 Demotion nahi promotion....Theek hum intezaar karein gaye...Agale khat ka... Nupur se ziada humein intezaar hai... 😆

Jaati hoon but mostly as a silent reader... 😛 Ab toh kabhi kabhi Mjht forum par post kart hoon...

Yah phir PSF par.. Or Fanfiction forum.. bas...

Lekin dekhti hoon, par were a bit behind... about month or so behind India so issliye kuch episode late aathi hai...

Btw aur koi serial dekhti ho?

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maria

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: sharneel

Salam ji...to aap abhi tak hamara saath nibhaa rahe hai. Glad to see that coz I am looking forward to that interesting conversation we had during the Qayenaat days.

Take care and thanks 😊

-Neela

main ne starting main hi kaha tha ke jab tak koi gar bar nahi ho gi...main saath nibhaon gi...jab mujhe laga hurt hone ka khatra hai😆toh main age read nahi ker paon gi..

u r great writer...i have one question for u...i hope u ll give me answer.. her story ko itna complicated bana na theek hai kya?

i know life is complicated and there are lots of turns and twist in our way..but life is beautiful and simple also.

waise i have started my three FFs...i am become writer..

Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago

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-NightDreamer-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

amazing one....beautifully u wrote....i read in 1 take...👏

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shaheen_memon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

thanks a lot for updating...i was so eagerly waiting for this.......love u

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kirti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

wow neela

loved the update

and the letter part was really nice

hope ki nupur ka intezaar jaldi khatam hoga

aur hame bhi apke agle update ke liye zyada intezaar mat karvaye .

thanks for the pm

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-SharNeela-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti
main ne starting main hi kaha tha ke jab tak koi gar bar nahi ho gi...main saath nibhaon gi...jab mujhe laga hurt hone ka khatra hai😆toh main age read nahi ker paon gi..

u r great writer...i have one question for u...i hope u ll give me answer.. her story ko itna complicated bana na theek hai kya?

i know life is complicated and there are lots of turns and twist in our way..but life is beautiful and simple also.

waise i have started my three FFs...i am become writer..

aap ne kab aisa kya pooch liya jisska jawab humnain nahi diya...boliye? 😊 iss sawal ka jawab hazaron tareeqay se diya jaa sakta hai. In short, sahi ghalat ka sawal nahi hai yeh. ek story ka simple ya complicated hona poori tarha se usski readers per munhasir hai. woh usse lightly le to story simple hai aur agar woh usse complex tarha se le to simple story bhi complicated hai. baaqi rahi life ki baat...all lives are complicated and all lives are simple and beautiful. zindagi ke kahi stages hote hai...kuch stages bohat haseen aur khubsoorat hoti hai aur ek stage aisi aati hai jisske wajah se thodi si uljhanon ka saamna to karna hi hota hai.

Anyways...congratulation on being a writer. hamari ab umer nahi rahi kuch parhne ki warna zaroor parhte per itna zaroor keh sakte hai k aap jo bhi likhti hogi apne dil se likhti hogi aur jo dil se likhta hai woh ussi ki dil ki aks hoti hai and you have a beautiful heart 😊

-Neela

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-SharNeela-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#179

~~~~~Part 8: Letter Vs Email~~~~~

Nupur is in a dilemma. All her life, she has been an anti-tech person…just like her baba. She has grown up to learn that nothing can beat nature and neither can anything replace its needs and benefits. Its a beautiful world…and God has decorated this place in HIS own way which makes it a better place for us to live with contentment. Do we actually need machines to survive? That too at the cost of our mother nature? How many trees have to be chopped down to make a few plastic cups? Where on this earth can we go to breathe some fresh air that is not polluted by smoke and gas from cars and engines? How long before we never see a river or a lake without dirt and filth spread by human beings? Climates are changing…there is global meltdown approaching soon which will engulf this beautiful world if we don't take action NOW…this is what Nupur's beliefs are. She prefers to spend her nights under a clear sky where she can see all the stars…she would rather lighten her evenings with candles than waste electricity…she would rather enjoy the breeze from the surrounding trees rather than have an air-conditioning at home. She loves her simple life and that why she loves her small town, her small house. Above all…because of her simple lifestyle she, herself has turned out to be a simple person with minimal needs and wants.

Now Mayank's email issue has been bothering her ever since she got his letter and overcame the initial excitement as she realised that her anti-tech nature has become the main obstacle between her and Mayank in terms of keeping in touch with each other. She doesn't have a computer at home and rarely has been near those machines all her life. She is familiar with the concept of internet browsing and emailing and social networking but never felt the urge to be an active participant of such activities. She would rather write her own letters or talk to her friends directly or read a book or newspaper to acquire knowledge about the world, why need a computer for that?

The confusion with regards to how and when and if she could write emails to Mayank was gripping her everyday. As she was walking towards her college, she was yet again trying to a figure a way out..

N: yeh Mayank bhi na! 10 saal k baad dikha to abhi innko tour me jaana tha. 10 saal me yeh tours khatam nahi kar sakte the kya? jhat se likh diya email karo…kaise karoon?? hamesha khud ki sahooliyat ka hi sochte ho aap yaar
N: arre uss bechare ko kya pata k iss zamane me bhi aap jaise namunay paida hote hai. woh tehra modern world me rehnewala…laptop bagal me dabaakar iphone me apne doston se baatein karte hue MBA class me jaata hoga.
N: jaata hoga wahan per…aur woh kyun woh poora modern world hi aisa hi karta hoga. isi liye to iss duniya ki yeh haalat hai. bin mausam baarish shuru hojaati hai aur jab baarish hoti hai to rukti nahi aur sailaab aajata hai. sukha parhta hai to zameen me phasal nahi ugtay…saans bhi nahi liya jaata iss kaale dhuaon me bhari hawaaon me
N: o hello…apna lecture Mayank ko sunana..yeh jo 10 saal k baad 2 khat naseeb hui hai na..woh bhi woh wapas maang lega BY GOD
N: wohi to…jab bhi yeh sochte hain to saare khayalat wahin k wahin dharay reh jaate hai. kya karoon…kya karoon…??? kaise email karoon..???

Suddenly someone gives her a tap on her back and she swiftly turns around to see its Diya!

D: arre main kab se tujhe awaaz de rahi hoon aur tu hain k apni hi dhun me chali jaa rahi hai. kaisi hai?
N: haan…haan thik hai hum. tu bata? (in a shaky tone)
D: kya hua hai tujhe? kuch khoyi khoyi si lag rahi hai. koi problem?
N: problem to hai Diya.
D: accha bata mujhe..kya problem hai. main chutki me solve kar dungi
N: woh Diya mujhe kisiko email karna tha..
D: (laughs out loud) tu aur email?? hahhhaaa…kya joke sunne ko mila subhe subhe
N: isi liye …isi liye kuch batana nahi chahti thee kisiko. jaa tu yahan se
D: arre ghussa kyun horahi hai meri jaan. main hoon na! per iss poooooori duniya ko pata hai k Bhushan family khaas karke Nupur Bhushan se koi technology ya machine related kaam nahi kerwa sakta. phir yeh kaun buddhuraam hai jissne tujhse…Nupur Bhushan se email ki ummeed rakkhi..bata mujhe!
N: ermm…(she was feeling very shy about mentioning anything about Mayank, not even the fact that they are exchanging letters now but to get Diya's help she needs to say something). woh maine ek NGO me ek internship k liye apply kiya tha. unhone kaha hai k apna resume unnko email kar de hum.
D: bas! itni si baat? to mujhe dey de apna resume main ghar jaake teri resume unnko bheij dungi
N: Nahi…I mean tu kab tak karti rahegi. humain apna kaam khud karna chahiye na?
D: yeh kaam tujhse nahi hoga meri jaan. tu burhi hojayegi per teri resume wahan tak tab bhi nahi pohunchegi (giggles)
N: mazaak ura rahi hai? kaisi dost hai tu? hamesha best friend best friend karti hai..aise hote hai best friends? jaa humain nahi baat karni tujhse
D: ufffo…tu ek kaam kar. aaj shaam ko ghar ajaana. main tujhe sikha dungi, ok?

So, its decided and as per their plan, Nupur sits with Diya and takes her loooooong lesson on how to email. Diya also helps her to create an account and after a long day, Nupur returns home, relaxed. Now she has figured a way on how to contact Mayank but she cannot go to Diya's house to type the email as she will suspect something. Best bet is to go the college lab and type it there. After her dinner, when she retires at her own room, she starts writing the draft letter so that she can type it in lab tomorrow. After a long thought and reading Mayank's letter another couple of times, she starts writing..

Mayank ji..

'aap' aur 'tum' ka talluk sirf umer se nahi hota. har ek rishte me jo log bandhe hote hai woh uss rishte k mutalliq ek doosre ek audha dete hai. yeh audha izzat ka hosakta aur pyar ka bhi….yeh to uss rishte per aur uss rishte je jure insaanon per munhasir hai. warna to humnain bade burhey ki zubaan pe apne bacchon k liye aap suna hai…thik waise hi bacchon ki zubaan pe 'tu' alfaz suna hai apne bade buzurgh k liye. so umer se nahi…hum aap ko rishte ki audha se 'aap' kehte hai, hamesha kehenge. aur dost to aap hamesha the..abhi bhi hai. 'aap' ya 'tum' se iss dosti ko mat naapiye.

aur aap ne hamare yaadon ko lekar ek sawal uthaya. sach maano to iss sawal ka jawab humain nahi pata. sach hai k humnain aapko apne yaadon ke zariye hi sammait ker rakkha hai apne paas per ek sach yeh bhi hai k unn hi yaadon ko lekar hum apne aaj ke din bhi bitaatay hai. aisi koi din nahi jaati jab aap kisi na kisi bahane hamare yaadon se ubhaarke hamare saamne nahi aate. ab yeh yaadein hamare mustaqbil se juri hai k nahi iss ka na humain koi andaaza hai aur na hi iss per koi ikhtiyar hai. yeh faisle to bas Khuda ke haathon me hote hai…unhi per chhod diya.

kher..aap k baare me jaanke accha lagah. aap ne zindagi me kaafi tarakki kar liya hai. Khuda kare k aise hi aap apne har kaam me kaamyaabi haasil kare. ab to aap Europe k kisi mulk me honge, hai na? kaisi hai woh nayi jagah…kaise hai woh log? agle khat ya email me sab kuch likh ke batayyega. aur apna khayal rakhiyega…ghar se door hai na to zara ahtiyaat bartayyega.

-Nupur

Nupur finishes the letter with a smile on her face. Now she needs to email it to him…with so much uncertainty about the lab, the computer, email..everything is so new, she goes to bed looking forward to another adventurous day in her life.

-Neela-

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aap ne mujh per yeh kya ahsaan kar gaaye
jaan bann ke hamari jaan hi le gaaye
na poocho kis uljhaan me guzarte hai lamhein
khud se hi khud ko aap anjaan sa kar gaaye

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Edited by sharneel - 14 years ago