'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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anju011

@anju011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

awesome update neela.
but who is this new guy? is it samrat?
oh wow finally uska letter aa gaya.
can't wait for the next update.
continue soon.

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

glad u r back...was missing this FF quite badly

I was pleasantly surprised at how updated the next part so soon!!

tnow thats fab!!

so is this new guy mayank :S

u always include element of mystery to everything...so its confusing n exciting (scary at times😆)

looking forward to this eagerly :)

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abb01

@abb01

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

neela,

this was a beautiful update so S entered in her life

thats cool

but who is the one staring him Gunjan???

i am more concerned for the Letter why did you stop??

now tumhari next update ka betabi se intzar rahega madamji

update soon without delay isase pahle ki ek aur bar tumhe recap likhana pade

Luv,

Aru

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Escapist

@Escapist

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

Mayank in town..wow what a grand entry !
ohho maja aayega when miss Nupur comes to know the alak ka andha is none other than Mayank...

btw does he know she's the one ??
and hope he is Mayank only :)

Nice going...lets see what the writer has in store for us since she suffers from Amnesia and forgets the track oh so often 😉 No offense, just plain humor :)

Take Care,
F

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

superb update Neela!

i think that guy is Mayank 😳

waiting for the next update

continue soon

nd thnx for the pm

'' humain maaf kijiye ga Neela ji, humari tabiyat theek nahin hai isliye hum sahi se comment nahin kar paye 😔''

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

Wow, this surely has to be pure luck.

I mean, itni jaldi update?? I am so happy!

She is soooo impatient. Typically Nupur.

Yaar, talking with oneself is the best thing.

I so love this thing in Nupur.

Nupur ki language....by God..i mean 'abbay' n all....kitni tapori types hai!

But yeh stranger Mayank hi ho sakta hai...

Hmm..so amazing........i loved it...

Pakka yeh Mayank hi hai....and letter bhi?

Great!

Loved the update......

And update as soon as you can.

And once again, marvelous poetic lines. I love your shayaris.

-Mahak

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#157

hheyy neela red ur update after longg tym yrrr

parh k maza agyaa
nupur is 😆😆
and her curiossiy and self talks are *muah*
aww poor girl waitting for mayank replyyy😕 ..
jaldi ajayega

loved ur whole update yrrr

waitng for nexttt update
bb fastttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

luv sehr

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kulsumd

@kulsumd

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#158

hey di
Kaise ho aap?
Shayad aap ne soch liya hoga ke mein ne aapke tehreeri safar mein aapka saath chodliya...?haina?
Waise aapko toh pata hai ke mere xamz chal rahe hai jiski wajah se mein aapki updates nahi padh rahi thi....😔
Padhai karne ki wajah se dimag thoda sust hogaya tha socha aapki updates padh ke thoda chust karlun..😆😊....Aur iss mamle mein kafi had tak kamyab bhi hogaye...😃

Di....this ff is really unique 4m ur KAJ & Qayenaat....
All the updates 4m 2nd part 2 6th part are just Beautifull...
I know i havent commentd on this ff on particular update....but after ma xamz i wil comment indvidually on each update Inshallah...

Mayank ka khat acha tha but i lykd nupur's reply on mayank's letter...

Aapke pichle ffs k baraks ye ff mayank zyada nupur ke ehsaasat ko ujagar karta haina...

I just love this chulbuly bubly nupur in ur ff....Bygod mjht ki yaad taaza kardi...❤️
Mayank ke baare mein utna kch jaanne ko nahi mila...

Ye kya nupur ki zupan toh ekdum tapuri jaisi hai....[:O]
Btw whoz dat new boy??hamare toh kuch samajh mein nahi aaya...:(
Actually kya haina samajhne ki taaqat iss waqt sirf kitabun tak mehdud hogayi hai...warna ladke ki jaankari ki tafsheesh jaari rehti ..

Hum toh aapki aadat se majbur hai phir isi daurahe par khada karke jawab diye bagair hume sochne ke liye chod diya....
I want the next update jaldi jaldi...khat ka jawab padhne k liye besabri se intizaar rahega..

Last but not least agar mein ne comment nahi kiya toh gussa mat kijiyega coz aapko wajah maalum hai....sorry 4 not commenting on previous updates..
Im feeling so good after commenting here...😊

N remember 1 thing di i wil be always a loyal fan of u n ur writing...

Love
Summi

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#159

awesome updt
thanks for the pm

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#160

~~~~~~~ Part 7: Intezaar ~~~~~~~

..kya bohat zyada intezar kerwaya tumhe?

As Nupur opens the letter, she is faced with this question on the very first line. Just when she was getting comfortable in her bed whilst reading the letter, the sudden question draws out the suppressed anger in her.

N: ..huh! koi nahi intezar kar raha tha kisi ke khat ka (and she continues reading)

ab khud se agar jhoot bolna hai to thik hai per meri khat se to jhoot mat bolo. uss bechare se chupane ka kya matlab? aur baaki raha main! sach batane ka agar dil saath na de to jhoot hi keh dena k thoda sa intezar to kiya hoga hamare paigham ka. dil ko sukoon mil jayega.

N: lo karlo baat! ek to itna intezar kerwaya…uss per innke dil ki sukoon k liye hum jhoot bhi bole? kya zamana aagaya hai. (continues reading)

..kher dair se jawab dene ka ek khaas wajah bhi hai. halankein koi jo itna kareeb sa ho uss se intezar kerwane ka koi bhi wajah qaabil-e-qabool nahi hai. per phir bhi batana zaroori hai. iss liye nahi k hum koi bahana dhoondh rahe hai…bas yeh samajhlo k hamare beech me jo saalon ka faasla aagaya tha…usse kam karne ki adna sa kaushish hai yeh. tumhe shayed yeh pata hi hoga k hum log ab UK me settled hai. 4 saal pehle main akele yahan pe aaya tha apne graduation k liye, phir maa-papa ne bhi US se yahan pe aake settle kar liya. abhi main apna MBA final khatam kar raha hoon. aur yehi wajah hai meri dair se jawab dene ka. jab tumhari khat haath me aaya to main apna exams k beech tha. zahir si baat hai uss waqt uss haalat me main tumhe khat nahi likh sakta tha. ab imtihaan khatam hui to tumhe hi sabse pehle yaad kar raha hoon.

waqai me tumhare khat milne per dil ko ek ajeeb sa rahaat mila. mujhe to lag raha tha tum mujhe bhool hi gayi ho…accha lagah jaanke k abhi tak kuch yaadon me tumne humain sammait ker rakkha hai. halankein dil ko abhi tak yeh tasalli nahi hui k kahan tak yaad hoon! mera matlab hai kuch yaadein hote hai jo sirf maazi tak qaid rehte hai aur kuch yaadein aise bhi hote hai jo khwaab bannke hamare mustaqbil se jur jaate hai. tum shayed yehi soch rahi ho k main yeh sab kya kya sochne laga hoon. darasal tumhari khat milne k baad se hamari kaifiyet kuch aisi hi hai aur isi liye umeed karte hai k agle khat k jawab me humain hamare kuch sawalon k jawab to mil hi jayenge.

Mayank..

p.s. yeh tum mujhe 'aap' kyun bula rahe ho? tumhare khat k saamne main uncle jaisa lag raha tha. 'aap' kehna bandh karo ji…aur meri dost bann jao foran se..

p.p.s. khat post karne hi wala tha k khabar aayi hai k MBA ki dissertation k liye hamari ek choti si group 3 mahine ki internship k liye Europe jaa rahi hai. so iss address me khat mat likhna. ho sake to email kar dena. main tumhare jawab k liye 3 mahina intezar nahi kar sakta. meri email id khat k piche likh diya hai. humain intezar rahega besabri se..

Nupur instantly turns the page and checks the back of the letter just to confirm that the email id is there and takes a sigh of relief to see that. For a moment, a sudden fear gripped her as if she had just lost Mayank again. Her heart just skipped a beat as soon as she learnt about Mayank disappearing for 3 months.

N: yeh kya hogaya hai tujhe Nupur? woh waise bhi hazaron mile door rehta hai woh bhi aaj ya kal se nahi, pichle 10 saal se. wahan se Europe chala jaaye ya Australia tujhe kya farq parnewala hai. hai to abhi tak door hi na!
N: haan so to hai per 10 saal k dooriyon ko kam bhi to karne ki kaushish kar raha hai woh. iss kaushish me 3 mahine ka faasle ka izaafa honewala tha aur tujhe shayed ussi ka khauff horaha tha
N: shayed…per aise ahsaas kyun ho raha hai? jisne itne saalon me ekbar bhi humain yaad nahi kiya…aaj usski 2 khat se hamare dil me itna uljhan kyun horaha hai?
N: yeh to waqt aane per teri dil tujhe khud ba khud hi jawab de dega tujhe. intezar kar Nupur..
N: intezar!! *sigh* woh to ab jaise hamari muqaddar sa bann gaya hai

Nupur's usual self conversation is disrupted by her mum.

A: yeh kya badbad kar rahi hai? kab se dekh rahi hoon….tujhe kitni baar kaha hai k buri aadat hai..chhod de.
N: uffo maa…apni aap se baatein karti hoon iss me kya buri baat hui?
A: buri baat hai. log paghal samjhenge
N: log paghal samjhenge kyun? so to hum hai hi (giggles)
A: mazaak sujh rahi hai tujhe? jab shaadi k liye koi nahi aayega haath thaam ne tab royegi
N: tum fiker mat karo maa. aap hamari shaadi kisi paghal se kara do…kya jodi hogi hamari BY GOD
A: chup kar…kya karoon main teri. itni badi hogayi hai aur baaton me na koi sharam hai aur na koi lehaaz
N: dekha maa…dekha! apni maa se baat karne k liye bhi 'sharam' aur 'lehaaz' ka sochna parta hai. isse to behter hai k hum bindaas khud se baat kare…no terms or conditions apply to me (smiles)
A: tujhse baaton me koi nahi jeet sakta meri maa (and she leaves the room)
N: (again says to herself) fiker not maa…koi to hoga mere jaisa paghal jo mujhe mujhse hi haraa dega

She rushes back to her bed and takes Mayank's letter from under her pillows and starts reading it again and again…and again until she falls asleep completely oblivious of the surprises that life is about to throw at her from this moment onwards.

-Neela-

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paaya hai….kya khoob paya hai tumhe
k har ek lamha maine jeeya hai tumhe
khoya bhi hai to kaise khoya hai tumhe
k har saans me phir se paa liya hai tumhe

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