'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

Hey Neela

Wow dear- what a beautiful update

Awwwwwww nups was lost in mayanks dreamland

She was talking to herself- and trying to convince her mind

Wah wah – neela nups tou kho gayi maynk ki khayalo main

Btw who's the guy? And s for what- Stranger or Samrat???

GOD knows- I hope the guy is our mayu…………………..

Hey I loved their convo

It was rocking update neela

Too good

Keep it up

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-SharNeela-

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Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: princez_94
Resss... Yay! First one to comment... Parh kar edit karon ghi...

Aur Neela itni jaldi... Hum Hairaan reh gaye hai... 😲

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Neelaa... How do u do this every time?? 😳 😍
Amazing update... I really liked it, we got to see a different type of Nupur... The one In KAJ & Qayeenat was also differen but they had similarities i found thsi Nupur different... Mere khayal toh koi shy, reserved, quiet se hogi... Especially at the start... Lekin yahan wow... U surprised me Neela...😲

I loved her welcome gift to the new student... Awesome.... 👏 Btw hai kaun woh? S for Samrat or something else..? I'm actually looking forward to their encounters, it was fun reading their first convo... Simply amazing Neela...😆 👏😳

Aur ek aur letter... Finally Nupur ko chain ke saans lene ko miley ghi... Bechari ko kitna satathi ho Neela... Very bad haan...

But finally letter aya, dher sey sahi aya to sahi... I want his response, usski koi wapsi ki koi khabar?

Anyways Neela u don't need words to describe how a Fabulous writer u are... 😳 I always look forward to ur updates... Enjoy reading every word...

Aur aapki shayari bhi humne bohat yaad ki.... Itna accha update aur uppar se usse bhi acchi shayari... Uff... Wonderful... Bohat ala.... 😳

Waise I've this one very imp. Question.. Tumhe updates Letter's ke time par he kyun rokhne parta hai? 🤔😛

-Laiba

Aur haan... Be prepared to read such long speeches every time... 😆

awww.....itne pyaare comments! Whenever I see your lengthy comments, I wonder k iss ladki ko alfaz kahan se mil jaate hai. But I swear you surprise me each time coz your comments sound so genuine...straight from your heart. So lucky to have you around. 🤗

Now about the update...yeah this Nupur is shaping out to be quite different than KAJ and Qayenaat. aur haan...yeh newcomer Samrat nahi, 'Someone Else" hai 😆 By 'S' I meant Stranger aur innki introduction hum kara denge jald hi.

aur baaki raha aap k million dollar question...hum hamesha apne updates letter pe aake iss liye rokte hai kyunki humain pata nahi hota letter ka content kya hai. So I am as much lost and in suspense as u guys are..😆

And about being prepared to read such long speeches...honestly I look forward to your comments...I always do. You are one of my readers whom I gain so much inspiration when I can't move forward with my writings. So just for your information, the pleasure is all mine 😃

-Neela

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

plzzzzzzzzzzz pm me when u update it

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Ally

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Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

OMG I loved the concept

would love to read more

will deffi catch up on dis FF rite now :)

amazing concept though

didn't get about Nupur being 3😕

but maybe datz just me 😆

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Ally

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

by god

I have no words for part 1

I swear I have been saying "awwwwwwww" for every single sentence I waz reading

this FF has to be the CUTEST MayUr FF I have ever read in my life😳

from the first time Mayu sees Nupur when he waz 3

he lovezz her

and askes her mom to take her home🤣😍

n all the later monthz and yearz passes

everything iz chooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeee😳

just love this FF to the core!!
and then at the end of this part

Mayur's parents sed dat when they grow up they will marry

can't wait to read more now

wonder if they will like each other when they grow up

n haan I love ur poemz

wish could write like that

amazing part 'gain :)

-Lina

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Ally

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

part 2

hey Neela

I love this part

so Mayu'z dad wantz to move becuz he doesn't want to live in a small town

but Nupu'z dad doesn't !
n they argue about dat

n Mayur

I swear dey r choo cuteee

so on Nupu'z first day of school he intro her to his friendz

n kissed her on her cheekz

n so did his friend Abhi

n she started crying

n he pushed Abhi n got in trouble for dat

n then wow Mayur fighting over crayonz

lol kidzz

n later Nupu getz mad when Mayu playing with his friendz

n breakz his toyz

n then Mayu getz mad

and their friendship breakz :(
n both hate each other

wanna read wat happenz next

-Lina-

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Ally

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

part3

awwww this partzzz chooo cuteee

em sad dat Sharma leavezz to delhi

n even sadder dat dey r moving even father away :(

wonder when they will return back

n Mayu will get to see Nupur again

but I alwayzz love all da lil Mayur cute scenezzz

dey both r chooo cute
n again loved ur poem

-Lina-

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Ally

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

part 4

uffff I love this part

so Nupu'z 19

n I just love da part between her mother n her

love their convo

then Nupur goez down n her father wishes her

and askes her wat she wantz

n she sayz nothing

n he sayzz she wantzz to marry or something

n then Dia comez

n she has an letter frm Mayu

OMGGGGGGGGG

I wanna know sooooooooooooooooooooo badly wat is inside dat letter !!
can't wait to read more

wish this part had Mayu

but it waz amazinGGG
!!!!
can NOT wait to read next part @ all

-Linu

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Ally

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Posted: 14 years ago

#149

part5

wow loved this part

Mayuzzz letter iz choo cuteee making Nup'z blush

his asking her if she rememberz him

n then she writezz him a letter back

want to know Mayu'z respond :)
-Lina-

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Ally

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Posted: 14 years ago

#150

part6 lol I love this part

Mayurzz meeting waz kuch alag si lol

so Mayu new to the collage

n he bumpz into Nupur

n then their lil fight

n then she tellz him da library is rite there

lol I love Mayu😍

later he comez in da class

n sitz next to Nupur

lol cant wait to read next part

do cont soon

n plezz add me in ur pm list

thankz

loved reading this FF
n want to know wat it sayzz in da second letter frm Mayu

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