Maneetff: **Friction** UPD: pg 141(new:146) - Page 2

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Thats Awesome Dear.....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.....
Thats Very Interesting..........
Loved it..❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.....
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😉 Heyy my janu manu's thx for replying and today just for all u gawjuss people I sat in class typing the parts LOLZ😆. But plz forgive if it's not that good becuz this is just the beginning chika's! As the story progresses it will get better. Comment and tell me where I shud improve...

Chapter 3

"So..tell me where is your house?" she said chirply.

"Ek baat batao? Tum driver ho..ya main?" he said sarcastically, he was Maan obviously he wasn't going to answer politely.

She glanced at him and spat out.

"Eh! Zaida ghussa mat dikhao. Pehla din hai aur main itni mushkil say'.." she stopped to play some music then brought back her angry expression.

"'..haan to ummm'.oh yeah! Main itni mushkil say ad-JUST karne ki koshish kar rahi hoon, aur tum mujhe pehlay din attitude dikha rahe ho?? HMMMM, bolo, bolo na, bolti band ho gayi?"

Maan sat there with an irritated expression, he sat wondering how such an innocent face could express so much anger.

"This girl goes from sad, to happy'to god knows WHAT!? Women'soo difficult to understand" he thought.

"I'm waiting Mr.- bolo na!!"

"Hmm, tum chil-la kyun rahi ho?" He said softly focusing on her eyes, the khohl distracted him further making him want to just'.

The lines on her forhead straightened and she had a flat expression. He saw the flare in those sensual eyes lighten a little making her look so very innocent.

"Kya?"

"250 Versova Dr. Ab main chalaoon gadi, or you gunna keep staring at my face?" he said coming out of his trance or should I say her eyes?

"Acha" she said pouting, how she thought this man would be somewhat social.

"Geet- this isn't the way"

"Really'I'm not a GPS!!" she said yelling, she was too busy thinking she could have had her bestiies over for a Slumber Party..here she was stuck with this..this'.

"CHil-la kyun rahi ho?? Main dad ko keh deta hoon..THIS(he pointed to her) This is MY PA!"

He forgot he was holding her from her shoulders and that she had stopped the car.

She looked at him with fierce and annoyed eyes then they both turned around.

They were annoyed to be stuck with one another.

Then Geet started driving again, she had remembered that her dad said to take 5th St.

He realized she was going the right way and said.

"You knew the way..you were just annoying me?"

"Sweety, I have no darn intention of being stuck with you..HERE." she said focusing on the road.

Then all of a sudden the car stopped.

"Oh no! Babaji."

Maan glared at Geet. She ignored him and got out. There was smoke coming out of the car. Geet started talking to herself again.

"Oh shit! Mujhe to car fix bhi nahi karni aati."

Maan slightly smiled at her getting out of the car.

"Tum ho to yeh to hona hi tha."

"Maan, main dusri gadi mangwa leti hoon." She flipped her hair back while dialing a few numbers.

Maan started to see what was the problem when he noticed Geet's hands run through her silky straight waist length hair, she looked scared.

"yeh serious hoti hai to kitni.." he cursed himself for paying attention to her.

"Daddy, main aur Maan SIR rastay main hain aur yeh stupid car'.haan'hmm'waisay dad main manage kar leti but you know its soo dark and im here..K..Thanks!"

Maan looked at her and smirked.."Nautanki" he thought.

"Kaam ho gaya SIR. Andar chaliyay"

"Andar tum chup ho jaao gi to main jaaunga, warna.."

"Jo aap ki marzi" just cuz she called him SIR didn't mean she was going to beg him.

In a while the car arrived they got in and Geet was like..

"Shankar itni der kyun lagaayi..aur mommy daddy so gaye ahin kya?"

"Yes maam they went to sleep, aur sorry maam traffic jam tha"

"Achaa, Naughty Naughty laga do plz"

While the song started Geet was enjoying soo much she was kinda moving to the song, when Maan was like..

"Turn it off"

"NO"

"I said-"

"I don't care..enough of your stupid'."

The car jumped and Geet grabbed onto Maan's tie.

"Seriously..don't touch me"

"Ooooo Mr.Touchmenot don't worry mujhe tumhari izzat leni bhi nahi hai."

"Listen'your crossing your limits. I don't care I will fire you."

"Go ahead..see if I care"

They reached the mansion and Maan got out and forced Geet out too.

PRECAP:

"Sushant Khandelwal..you know the new business tycoon?!"

"yeah.. wait..you're marrying him?"


Guys I have not read it over..forgive plz😳

Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
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Loved it.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️....
Loved Maaneet's Conversation......
Loved Maaneet's nok Jhok....
Thanq sooooooooo much for the PM.🤗....
Eagerly waiting for the next part......
Pls Update Soooooon

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