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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Just read the first threeparts.
Seems really interesting😊
Please add me to the PM list...
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Chapter 4

"Lemme go.."

"Your coming inside so I can show dad how clumsy and unprofessional you are"

They entered the mansion and instead of Sonia Khurana and Savitri Devi hugging Maan they greeted Geet.

"Kitni pyaari hai..bilkul pari" said Savitri Devi.

"I know a true beauty when I see one" said Sonia

Maan was furious.

"Maan tum aagaye beta" Both woman hugged him.

"Aao bete andar aao" both woman showed Geet the way.

"Nahi, aunty main chalti hoon"

"Hum tumse kabhi mille hi nahi, only your dad and mom came to the business parties. Andar to aana hi parega. Come have Coffee" said Sonia

They sat and were having coffee while the woman chit-chatted, and Maan was explaining the points for the business deal he signed with his dad.

"Achha, to tum Fashion Designing ki field main ho"

"Yup, main next season Boutique open kar rahi hoon"

"Yea, your dad told me"said Savitri Devi.

It was a bright fresh morning and Geet woke-up she stretched and went up to her royal purple luxurious bathroom to take a fresh shower.

While Maan was in the shower thinking about what Dadi had said to Maa.

"It's a good thing she decided to reject Sushant Khandelwal. Itni pyaari hai..perfect enough to…"

And Dadi and Maa had left for the night.

He had an idea of what they were thinking but shrugged the idea off.

"Namaste aunti, is Sir ready"

"Bete Maan kaho" said Sonia

"Aunty right now I'm working so I want to be professional" Geet said smiling sweetly.

Maan arrived and said..

"Let's go"

"Maan tumhe baat karne ki koi tameez nahi hai. That's not the way to talk to a girl" said Savitri Devi.

"Good Morning Geet can we please go?"

"Okay SIR let's leave please."

They walked into the posh Khurana Constructions and Maan went to his cabin while Geet followed.

Maan turned around and bumped into Geet who was texting on her iPhone.

"Go to your cabin and STOP texing because you keep annoying me!!"

After she replied she turned towards him and looked at him with a calm expression that pissed Maan off like never before.

"Be professional and stop yelling and did you tell me or do you think I'm psychic huh?"

"It's the one that says Miss.Geet Handa right by mine…genius."

Her anger had melted away when she saw her cabin through Maan's glass cabin. It was in a turquoise and metallic grey combination. The curtains were Silk and it was gorgeous she loved it.

"That is SOOOOO CUTEEEE, I love it!!!!" she was soo happy that she didn't notice Maan staring at her and smiling.

"Hmmm, now go" he said while going through a file.

"Did you design it Maan-I mean Sir?" she said making her eyes wider.

"Yes, I did"

She was soo happy that her eyes were glittering, she pinched Maan's cheeks and said..

"Awwww, your sooo sweet….SOMETIMES..I lovee it Thanks!!"

"Geet leave my cheeks!!! Did you just call me SWEET? Oh my god! Don't ever ever ever do that again!!!" he said outraged.

"Why?? I was being nice..sweet nahi kahoon to kya sexy kahoon? Awww your soo sexy…SOMETIMES..I love it Thanks!!" she said substituting her previous statement.

Maan was shocked.

Geet started laughing like crazy.

"You-r ex-pre-ssion a-and hahahahahahah…..see sweet fit the sentence better?" she said while her cheeks turned cherry red.

"Geet please go…your soo…sooo-"

"Sexy…yeah baby I know….." she winked at him and left laughing like a maniac to her cabin leaving a shocked Maan behind.

It was 6 p.m. all Geet did was file her nails and texted (secretly) and Maan told her to write down a dictation and she did perfectly not interrupting work. After all, she was a hard-working girl.

The phone rang and Geet picked up.

"Yes Sir..I'm coming"

"Geet..you can go I'll be late"

"If you don't remember, I'm your PA? anyways if I go dad will think that I have agreed to marry Su-shi" she said looking worried.

"Su-shi?"

"Sushant Khandelwal..you know the new business tycoon?!"

"yeah.. wait your'e marrying him?"

"No you snail, your soo slow. I don't want to that's why I'm jhailing you.."

"Geet"

"Jiii"

He was curious finally he knew why such a young rich girl joined his company rather than her dad's.

"Oh okayy"

"Yup..so that's it"

They were in the car dropping Maan home first then she would leave. He was busy texting away while she sat their on her iPhone playing a game.

Then she wondered if he had a girlfriend, that's why he always texts, she thought

"Maan? Do you have a girlfriend?" She asked.

"Noo, never I don't even want one."

"Why, and you're the eldest in your family no wedding plans?..nothing?"

"Please, Maa kay saamne mat keh deyna. You'll remind her. Now even dad and Dadi want to see their bahu" he said still on his phone.

He slightly realized that he gave too much info..she was just a PA..that too temporarily. But she had also told him personal info. So it didn't really matter.

"Hi beta..aap dono aa gaye?" said Savitri Devi while kissing Geet's forhead.

"Aunti, main chalti hoon."

"Geet darling? Tum aagayi?"

Geet saw her parents at the dining table. Why were HER parents here??

"Mom?? Dad??"

Sonia came out with a salad bowl in her hand.

"Tum dono fresh ho jaao phir aake khana khaa lo. Baatein baad main hon gi."

"Maan take her upstairs" said Dadi.

"chalo" said Maan confused as to why Geet's parents were here.

PRECAP:

"Get off of me Maan your Mom will see."

"Let her see…I don't care"

He held her tighter from the waist.


This is longer hope u guys enjoyed i have the next part tell me when ur ready 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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read all the 4 parts... nice ff...

can u plz add me to ur pm list....

thnx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Update the next part abhi please😳
Don't delay since you have it with you....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 5

As they walked upstairs Geet saw everyones eyes on them. The stair case was in the center of the house and divided to right and left at the top. There were Chocolate Brown and maroon couches and coffee tables at the top of the staircase.

Geet liked the decor a lot.

When they reached Maan's room Geet noticed how it was soo classy yet simple. He had a white round bed with an indoor swimming pool around the head of the bed.

She went and freshened up while he waited outside the room for her.

"SPLAAAASSHHHHHH"

"OUCH!!!!!!!"

"Geet you okay?" he rushed into the room.

When he saw the sight he was the one who had been amused for the first time.

He bursted into laughter seeing Geet like that.

"Stupid'.Khote'you DUST DANAV.. you're laughing!!!!!!"

He couldn't help it then after 30 secs he stopped and put his hands on his waist.

"Did you just swear at me?"

"Ring-a-bell?"

"Maan Geet!!?? Kitni der hai?" came Sonia's voice from downstairs.

"Coming Maa" he said.

He walked towards Geet and offered his hand. She refused and got up from inside the pool.

"Didn't you see the BIG ROUND HOLE filled with water?" he asked.

"You know what I don't need your GYAN okay!"

"Don't order me"

"I just did"

She was busy complaining how the water wrecked her outfit and now she had to go down to all those people in such a state.

For the first time he noticed her curvy figure. Her plain V-neck black shirt clung to her body tightly, and the white vest was topped with a long necklace that hung across her chest the crystals shining. Her hair was now wavy giving her a hot diva look and her black skirt that hung mid-way to her thighs clung even more to her hips. The black leggings showed her long slim legs.

She was HOT.

He couldn't help but stare at her.

"Maan!!!!! Please get me a towel"

"Hmmm..oh'achha"

He grabbed her a towel and went to his bed texting away while waiting for her to finish drying up.

"Chalein?" she said feeling better.

She hadn't noticed that her shoes were slippery.

"AAAAAA"

There they were in a room with the lights dim and a damp girl on top of a Gorgeous lukin guy. Her hair fell on his face and automatically his hands rose-up to caress her cheeks.

She noticed his perfect face closer now. Not that she hadn't thought he was good looking from when she had first met him.

"Baccho tum kar kya rahe ho?? Itni der" said Sonia.

Geet broke out of her trance.

"Get off of me Maan your Mom will see."

"Let her see'I don't care"

He held her tighter from the waist.

"Maan wo aa rahi hain!"

"Aane do"

She pushed herself off and left running.

"jee aunti? Bas Maan abhi aa raha hai" she said panting.

"Accha bete ab khana kha lo its your favourite Chinese."

"Aap ko kaise pata?"

"I know everything sweety" said Sonia smirking.

No doubt she was an attractive woman still. Ahhhh'that's where Mr.Perfect got his expressions from.

Sonia took Geet down and Geet turned back to see Maan with his leg on the table and looking at her as if he were asking a question.

PRECAP:

"You guys are perfect for each other" said Rano.

"WHAT?" they said in unison

Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
shivangi783 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Thanks for the quick update😊
It was great!!
Enjoyed it😊
You really write well😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivangi783

Thanks for the quick update😊

It was great!!
Enjoyed it😊
You really write well😊



awww thnx hun!!!😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
lovely updates.. enjoyed it.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Awesomes update
loved it
loved maaneets conversation
loving their knoc jhok
loving ur quick updates
can't wait for da next part
con soon
thanks 4 a pm
plz when u send the pm could u please put the link of the ff on it
thank u
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Hey,
This is Amazing!
Just caught up
I love this a lot!
The title is pretty cool and unique!
It's Awesome!
Add me to your PM List!
I love that you update frequently
I just love the MaanEet nok-joks!
Too funny!
LoL! I loved the part where Geet pulled Maan's cheeks!
I was remembering back to his expression in the show!
Soooo cute!!
And then she replAces sweet to sexy!
ROFL!
That was the best pArt!
Hahha...
Update soon!
Please write longer updates!
Just requesting!
8-)
-Jassi

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