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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Wow...! I loved it completely...! :)

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

wow Neela...this was so very differnt from ur genre of writing...but this was soo good...

just loved it...:):)

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Anila

@-Anila-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Awesome SS Neela DI...

i loved it lodsss...

it was indeed very different from all ur writings...

I read ur two ffs...n it was different as it has Humour in it too...

i enjoyed it a lottt...

pehle toh Mayank n Nupur ka intro...

""Mr. Well-Disciplined-Organised"" (Mayank Sharma) collide with ""Miss. Never-My-Fault"" (Nupur Bhushan)...🤣😆🤣 *PERFECT*

loved it...it was indeed very unique intro...By God!!!

n den der journey Started...

awww...

Bechara Mayank kitna bolti hain na yeh ladki...😆

bt akhir mein wahi toh sabko bhati hain...😳

Bap re...i wasn't expecting Nupur to beat dat goon black n blue...

it was really Brillaint n awesome...

it tolds hw woman shud be...not to get afraid n try to handle themselves by der own...n den...

Woa!!!!! Mayank ne kya sikh di yeh ladki toh bar bar bhagne lagi hain...

ek bar toh phir bhi samjh ati hain bt Two times...😆😲😆

Shukar hain ke Mayank ne acche se jan liya tha unko warna toh iss bar bhi ladki bhag hi jati...

bt wah!!!kya confession hain...

i loved it...

it was truly heavenly...

At last dono mil hi gaye...

Beautifully written as usual...

bt most importantly dis time something light from U...

i was actually happy for dis...

loved it lodsss...

plzzz plzzz plzzz DO WRITE MOREEE...

will b waiting to read moreee from U...

love ya DI...🤗

Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

this is soo much beautifull

i can't even tell u

am speechless

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Anila

@-Anila-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

SIGH!!!!!!!!!!!!

Finally i read all ur OSS/OS in one go...

n i loved all of dem...

All of dem were indeed very Different from each other n very Unique n Ineresting...for Sure..

i loved dem all...

Aashna:It was indeed Beautiful...though at first i thought ke like ur FFs yeh bhi sad hi hone wala hain...bt nhi apne humey khush kar diya...though mujhe laga kash Nupur apne pehle pati ko talaq de kar Mayank se shadi kar leti...as 25yrs ke baad unn dono ne sahi mayne mein apne rishtey ko ek NAAM diya...bt jo bhi hoon i loved it lodsss...it was indeed Beautiful...

Rehguza: It is d best amoung all dese OS...as i loved it d most...it was heavenly...though i was a lil bit sad at d ending...i wish ke Mayank ko Nupur waha ek din mil hi jati...bt i atually n DIL SE wish ke apko woh jaroor miley...sigh...inshALLAH...

SubhanALLAH...bhttt khub likha hain apne yeh...i loved it to d coreee...n lastly kya apko woh miley???

KehkashaaN: I loved it too...it was very unique kind of OS...something very different...n ending line was superb...

Baraf Baari : Its another awesome OS by U...it was very unique n i was expecting Happy ending kind of thing bt u made me wrong as it turned out to b something totally confusing n mystrious thing...bt i loved it lodsss...Beuaitully written...again😍

All The OS/OSS/SS r very Different n unique n yet very very B-E-A-U-T-I-F-L

Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

awesome ending
thanks for sharing this sweet story
thanks for the pm

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shria19

@shria19

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

amazing ending👏

loved it

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

it was very beautiful neela .
specialy nupurs charectr n mayank's confession was awsom .
loved it

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

hey neela

after long tym i am reading your piece

and its realllyy amzing

lets go in sequence

AASHNA

this is a masterpiece loved the way u expressed each and every feeling

mindblowing

really touched my heart

mayanks character , and their marriage

beatifully done ..

loved it

REHGUZAR

a lovely piece.. really locved the way u expressed

the extraordinary thing about it was that its was in pretty urdu

and its linked to ur story ... thats seems some extra feeling thast added charm to ur writng marvellous... i could feell my self there at that place at that time... wowww...

KehkashaaN

haye kya bayan kya hai ap ne .. buhat khoob buhat aala .. buaht shandaar

har ek jazbat ko har ek pehlu ko kya khub bayan kya hai ap ne..

wahhh lajawab

m speechless after your updates... lovelyyy

Baraf Baari

i am startled by all thisss.. full in confusion but its a masterpiece .. loved it thugh a lot

every os of urs show new dimension and gains interest each time i readi t...