New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet - Page 62

Been following your FF for some time now....its beautifully and most lovingly written...with as much care for the situations as the characters :).......I am loving the myriad of small questions and doubts which are holding them back but binding them together.....

ur ff gie us the hope that no matter how dark is

great update😃 ....................maan is sweet and caring 😊

Ok I didn't comment in the last update so I make up for it now so basically I want to say how you make things flow and logical I mean its not rushed you've analysed each emotion going through the character in a step by step process and hats off to you anyways back to this chapter well this for me is like geet trying stay in the moment as she's confortable and feels as if this is her home and she just dowsn want ruin it and maan he wants to spend more time with her but also trying to control his emotions which could burst if his not careful basically not wanting to take a wrong step to ruin everything he shared he with her so basically both are trying to preserve their relationship with each other. Also geet gets to know maan bit more like delve into his past about his ex girlfriend wanting to know if he still missed her and what type of relationship they shared maybe because she wanted him not to have intense feelings for someone else or just mere curiousity and then his dream gosh I thought it was real and scared about the outcome but in that moment you showed us an insight of maans uncontrollable desire which he tries to channel in the right way and now we come to the conclusion that both dont want this day to end and want to preserve it as they enjoy each other and this was more of geets side as she observes maan and realises that she is falling for him as she likes nearly everything about him and knows that his something different and that they both hold something special and coming towards the end of the chapter geet wants to be a part of his life and maan realises that his love for her is unique and he never felt like that before because for her his changing for the better anyways lovin the story and great update as always and continue soon 😊

Nice part..Finally Geet ask Maan about Album..Now both now that have a past..I thought they might take one step ahead but i guess Maan has to wait for Geet..to take step first,,,

Wondeful
an amazing part
wish they confess soon
jasmin

🤗🤗🤗 Do I need to comment now???😊

Hey Hasini,

Originally posted by: Hasini67

8.13 PM

She woke up and was leaning on my shoulder. Her left hand came around me to hug me tight.

Geet:"Why didn't you wake me up Maan? How long have I been sleeping"

She was still half asleep and so was I. I hugged her back.

Maan:"Its ok ab kya hogaya hain it's just a Saturday"

My eyes were still closed. I turned and gave her a peck on her lips..

I jolted. Did I just do that? I opened my eyes to see what I had done.I was stitting next to her and she was still asleep on the couch. Our hands were tangled tight. It was a dream and a bad one that scared the bejesus out of me. I made sure that never happened. When I had jerked, she woke up too as I had pulled her hand as well. I was embarrassed that my dreams had become so much to do with her.

this part was the best of all the other scenes like the snow fall, their chopstick session etc....