Marriage 2- Writer's note on pg. 3 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part7- confusion with understanding

Again a marvelous ud … loved it how alkeh confessed his love for nupur and also their closeness. Finally he spoke out his heart and yes raj is also so cute.. he can't even wait for 3 months.. is this the same person who use to run away from marriage… and the aman helped him .. I loved it.. and raj is so cute while talking to her …

How cleverly he asked her number wao.. and best was when she said she believe him.. well it was obvious as they are going to marry in which exchanging number is not a big deal but still the way she said it so cute

And alekh what should I say about him .. he such a stupid that eh didn't even understand nupur feeling of last night and thought she is running away.. hope he sort out his confusion soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part8- romantic episode

I don't think I do have to say anything more.. the title I thought for that episode is saying everything.. I loved it whole .. whether its raj reaction on naina's three special words or his way of coming directly in her house … his hug or his kiss.. his guilt of crossing some limits of kissing her or his care for her feelings.. her understanding for his guilt or her gesture of surrendering herself in his feelings….

I just loved it.. but still alekh is gone case until nupur is back..he he

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part9- confession

Well finally our alekh's tension is over as his nupur is back.. and yes shalu is too supporting … she knows this the he loves her..

the way you portrayed his scene when she came back and found out about alekh marriage proposal .. I loved it also his confession and her acceptance of his love…

apparently there was no song this time.. but I didn't felt it was not there .. as AN scene in room was so magical that I felt a soft music was playing in background.. and for that you deserve a big applaud..
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Part10- PLAN

Well whole ud was dedicated to how create way so naina can go on date and with mr confuse our raj how to impress her… actually I just realize the center of attraction in ud was naina whether raj is thinking and planning about date whether nupur is planning to make her escape..but alekh entry is little dramatic.. what will happen when he will find out that naina is going with raj…

But nups made a great plan and naina was real support in it…hope she soon find something to wear otherwise she would be left with selecting her dress here and there her raj will count rose petals singing with "she will come , she will not" lol

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part11- PLAN execution

Finally she has selected a dress… and you selected the superb dress…I dint have to visualize it in pink as its already awesome in black.. I mean I can imagine whole floor covered with red petals … bright small light all around .. whole city can be seen from top and with heavenly red rose carpet and black magnificent sky surrounded by bright lighting and angel with black dress.. oh she was looking awesome.. I know you have suggested for pink.. but I guess black is enough for me..;)

and yes AN .. they also found some time… and swt love when her duppata got off . and his desire his feeling so swt

passionate and loving ud

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part12-passoinate

Well I don't have any words to say for this ud .. as you actually took away all my words and I am blushing hard while reading😳😳😳

Well I thought for some sec that they will directkly go for shopping but I guess that was not your idea ..and also your raj is not so sidha too….😆😆lol.. so how can he go direct,,,

Date scene with car scene everything is… I don't have words 😳😳

So just simply really passionately romantic

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Part13-shopping day

Well shopping was on full swing.. naina' bought each and everything with such a happiness that can only be seen on bride face… and he … I don't think he had any interest in shopping he was just enjoying as he was with him… he such a content person…he can live in little … for him just naina is enough…lol

And he took every chance to enjoy his this shopping whether its on jeweler shop or at eating zone for directly asking

But I like the most his vision of seeing her with his own family and his respect for her as he know she just not beautiful but also sensible for others feelings …

And well its nt juts happy day I guess you have made something new plan for alekh.. hope lakshmee ji don't do wrong with alekh
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part14-sachahi

Emotional part.. so it was naina who thought her mom his taking wrong decision .. in last ud I thought its shalu and that's why I felt lakshmee ji has accepted someone else instead of nupur for alekh…

Well alekh and nupur deserve this treatment from naina.. as they both called her best friend and still didn't told her about their love … and naina also felt so lone alone person as she feeling everyone knows about AN .. it's natural... sometime someone connect not related thing with some other things… like this tiem naina is linking their simple hiding or ingnorance of telling her with her marraige

So emotional one when everyone trying to make her happy.. this ud is wi will not say loved it totally but yes important part I agree

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Part15-Pleasing

The ud was dedicated to manaofy each one.. first nups was trying her luck with naina… then alekh has to do his work to please her…and then its was our swt drama queen turn...😆 😆 That's our naina to please her rajveer…

Well she planned well and shalu helped her…

What I liked most when mansi said all those thing and yes a heart can pull other heart... I think that's why rajveer was feeling headache as his heart was aching to reach naina at home..lol😆

Let'e see next

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Part16-understanding

Well raj was angry and naina went in his room to manaofy him.. but made me amaze his understanding .. he already knew that she is there .. which actually shows one kind of understanding .. when a person notice smallest single thing, even if it is just a perfume, about his/her spouse that shows how much he/she thinks and care about their spouse and notice them .. and also how much they understand .. because when you don't know about your spouse you can't understand them…

And yes at ceremony also.. naina's mother actually gave them a real trick of love.. because if ego comes loves fly away.. so that was marvelous to.. and for writing that special a special applaud for you

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