Marriage 2- Writer's note on pg. 3 - Page 6

Part23-wedding night

Well I don't have any words for this part …can only say blushing really hard

But I have a question .. naveen has already had two children shurya and netra…so how come his mother is saying he has given her all happiness as shalu is pregnant again .. I mean its not bad to have third child but its sounds like this going to be his mother's first grandchild… i am totally confuse

But I also loved the morning confusing look on raj face

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Okay.....so this is the last part....I thought it wud go for sum more parts....however let me take the opportunity of congratulating u for ur new thread!! 😃😃 And again....ending marks the beginning as well....😉
Thanks a lot dear, mai chahti thi ki ye ek aise point pe finish ho ki sab ko accha lage. 😊 😊 😊

It was lovely to see the romance btwn Raj-Naina.....the teasing of Mansi.....and then the party scene where all the kids were introduced...was nice. However I liked all the names of the kids....👏👏😃.....and then the romance filled night was surely awesum!!! 😳😳
thanks again for liking the names n all. 😃 😃 😃

But I loved the morning scene even more....specially when Abhi was teasing them....and Raj choked...😆😆...to tell u the truth I always choked at that point!! 😆😆
mean u did same as Abhi did. 😛 😛 😛

And then....the sweet romantic scene btwn RN....was the best of the part....I wud say I loved the end Vertika...it was truly beautiful!!👏👏👏
A big thanks Sumi for liking the last part 😃 😃 😃

Thank u for writing such a sweet fic....which was always very nice and soothing....and in this regard I wud like to thank Suhana Dii...as well...as its for her that u wrote this fic....😳
Ye sab Suhana ki shaadi ka kamal hai ki mai aisa likh paayi hoon. 😉 😉 😉

Do write more of such beautiful fics....and share them wid us....will be w8ing for sum more writings from u!! 😛
I will try my best but can't say now as still 3 of my fics r running this time. 😆 😆 😆

Luv,
Sumi. 😳

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

wonderful vertika!!

waiting for one more fic from u !!

will miss " marraige"

indeed a wonderful gift for suhana di !!!😊

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi 😊

the up is really hottttttttttt and romantic😳
thanks ria 😊 😊 😊

toh dekhte dekhte 7 years beeth gaye 😊

aur in saalo mein raj aur naina ke zindage mein pyaar banke do khubsurat aur pyaare pyaare bacche bhi sameel ho gaye 😳
Sab se pyaare bacche na 😉 😉 😉

the fight was really nice 😆
cute fight 😛 😛 😛

par sab se aacha tha naina ka raj ke liye night wedding gift 😉

are wah kitna hot and romantic tha😳
thank u jee once again 😃 😃 😃

i love it

Originally posted by: ammuakhi

the update was tooo hot romantic, extraordinary

superb

liked the way you introduced the children's part

too good dear

loved the teasing of mansi and abhi

don cont with another fic very soon

coz we will definitely miss reading your ff's

tc

ammu

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

oh this was the last part.
raj is too romantic.loved
loved their teasing season.

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Vertika

Hello Suhana dear 😃 😃 😃

So finally this fiction comes to an end..I was not happy but everygud thing definitely comes to an end..This fiction was very special and close to my heart coz u wrote it for me..I dont have words to express my feelings.😊 so a big hug to u..🤗🤗🤗
Thanks a lot Suhana n yes u r right that it must be ended with a good note now.😊 😊 😊
A big hug to u too dear. 🤗🤗🤗

Update was really gud..Raj and Naina spent some beautiful moments during their honeymoon..These pictures were really beautiful..
thanks once again 😍 😍 😍

Raj n Naina have 2 beautiful children..their names were really cute..😛😊

Raj is so happy to b with Naina..she has made his life beautiful..😊
She is a lovely wife and now perfect mom n bahoo 😉 😉 😉

Naina really shocked him with her romantic gestures..both of them were lost in ecstasy of love..Their love is increasing with each passing day😃
Their love has no boundations na 😳 😳 😳

The morning scene was cute and romantic....☺️😉 they both were so late but yet they didn't stopped romancing..
Raj bhi na kitna naughty hai kabhi maanta hi nahi 😆 😆 😆

Abhi and Mansi were teasing them and they were so embarrassed.😆

The last part was really sweet..😊
Abhi k pass aaj kal vaise bhi kya kaam hai. 😆 😆 😆

Both Raj and Naina were made for each other couple..they loved each other immensely..😊 their relationship was based on mutual respect and trust.
Well said n this makes a relationship really successful

Their marriage was arranged by their family but for them it was no less than love marriage.they both were made for each other..
Yes kahin se bhi koi dekh k nahi keh sakta hai ki their marriage is arranged 😍 😍 😍

their families were equally supportive..Every1 was really sweet.

b it Alekh or Nupur or Mansi and Abhi all of them were always supporting Raj and Naina.😊
They made their bonding stronger, all of them helped them and make them realize if ur family is with u u have everything in ur life.

I hope u write many mores stories Vertika..U r a brilliant writer.👏👏👏

Bye😊
I can't say anything right now Suhana because still three fics r going on but if i will get time i will surely write a fic on my lovely RN. 😊 😊 😊
Between thanks a lot for all ur love, trust n patience for the fic dear 😍 😍 😍

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was fantastic
plz continue your other fics too

Originally posted by: arpita25

Ab is part k liye comment kar rahi hoon poori fic k liye kabhi baad me karoongi. 😊
it's ok dear 😊 😊 😊

Sooooooo cute n romantic yaar. 😳 I mean start bhi bahut accha tha Naina le k gayi Raj ko ghumaane k liye n Raj ko jana hi pada. 😆
thanks n Raj jab itne door le kar aaya hi hai to us ko ghumana bhi chahiye na Naina ko. 😉 😉 😉

Mansi as usual back to teasings na. 😉
Agar Mansi aise na kare to maza kaise aayega scene me 😆 😆 😆

But after seven years bhi Raj ka pyaar jara bhi kam nahi hua hai Naina k liye. 😳 I loved the dialogue he said to Aman
Pyaar kam nahi hota hai agar sacche dil se kiya jaaye to 😳 😳 😳

n after that night scene was extremly hot. 😳 Naina ne accha shock diya hai us ko. 😳
Raj ne bhi aisa expect nahi kiya tha na ki itna accha surprise milega us ko 😉 😉 😉

Their morning convo was sweet n cute. 😛 Raj ko bus ab pyaar hi yaad hai naina se n tum ne finish bhi bahut acche jagah kiya hai is ko. 😉
Thanks a lot sweety for liking my effort 😊 😊 😊

welldone darling. 👏