Marriage 2- Writer's note on pg. 3 - Page 3

Part2- innocent love

Well I like it.. cute one…raj is all in love with naina.. ans that's so cute he don't even know her name… well in real life I don't think it can happen but sure in fic can.. so I love it and saree selection is also really cute.. the best part was "thoda bhav to khana tha" and yes "itna caha damad jo mil raha hai "..

Originally posted by: pinka28

Ohk hey mahak.. (I know you are vritika but I like mahak more)

I was the silent reader of marriage. And then in between you stopped updating all of your fics.. so I juts forgot where did I last read it.. and that also I saw I had never commented on it'

So I am replying exclusively as I am reading this again'

And about prologue .. first thing I got to know that apni suhana is married..i did had I any idea'and belated congratulation with belated happy anniversary'

And now come to your prologue

It's beautiful and interesting ' RAJ AND NAINA both are apple of their family eye.. and they have to be as they are RN.. and yes I love that pic.. one thing I want to tell you when I read that prologue I read navin's daughter name.. well you would not believe it but it's my next fic lead name too. And it's not like I took it from marriage's prologue' this name strike me in morning before even I decided to read Marriage again'

I was about to read your writer note at end but thought its better first I read whole of your fic as if I read it I will feel I had read the whole fic.. and u didn't want to spoil my excitement to read this

Part3- mulakate

Well two meeting and both are really cute.. Rn are behaving like as they have now words to say aur their dic is steeled away.. he he.. both don't even know each other name and when naina got to know his name .. she has already decided she will call him "veer".. what a future planer waoo…

best was when shalu pulled naina's leg while saying "if you want we can go away to give you privacy" and mansi was like cherry on cake "its going to be your kids and you will have to spent time"

Of god she actually made naina brighter then red.. but whats that raj is so engrossed in her beauty that he forgot to drive and about to met an accident…

Well I am curious whether what will happen next but also happy as first time she called his name.."RAJVEER bacho"

Part4- first touch with swt fight

As they are safe … I was just wondering what will he say for his unfocussed driving.. buit he is smart … and shaku and mansi are really good.. giving full time to them to understand each other…

Well the best was of course their first touch.. it was sensational.. for me just a simple touch can be as romantic as kissing… and the way you portrayed it was marvelous.. and yes raj have to do something otherwise haw can he full fill his name .. so he held her hand and she was too shy … oh cute and nupur scene with him is amazing and also their first fake anger.. well she cute feeling jealous just out of some jokes and he is really sporting to get along with nupur tease… but he have to pay what he did so.. lest see what he will do for manaofying her

Part5- fake anger

Well this upd goes for fake anger.. first naina was angry with him and he was so cute he did all his effort to ptao her and also imagined himself with her at hill station.. good yaar… and then wao alekh fake anger…well that's was also very cute…

And yes song selection was marvelous.. both songs .. first one is my fav because its on JUHI.. she was my first fav heroin... I guess because of her smile…her smile is just so vibrant that whenever I used to see her I couldn't be able to stop myself from smiling… after her my fav actress name kept on move from to other.. but yes rk is always the first and most probably last male lead for me who engrossed me ever..i guess it also because of his best smile….

Part6- special day

Well finally the special day of their life is came.. and yes bride dress is really good.. but somehow I don't like tux for raj.. when it come to marriage or this type occasion I would love to buy Indian style even for groom.. but I like that's saree so much.. nupur would surely look awesome if she has ever got the chance to wear it . . .

again song is really good. And yes I like the way mansi asked naina to look at raj.. so swt ..and applaud to you for that … and alekh and nupur pair is looking awesome and yes theirs dance too… well hope alekh will able to say his heart to nupur and yes I like its ending scene where naina's hair entangled with raj button and he was just smiling and enjoying her so close to him…