A talk in the dark - ArSh one shot

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Neeta

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Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: KaSh_luv
Woah..amazing os! luved it!
luved da hug in da end..cute!

thanks for commenting 😃

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applepie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

neetz loved ur OS it was awesome keep it up dear

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Neeta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: -poornima-

neetz loved ur OS it was awesome keep it up dear

thanks poornima :)

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Harry

@harry9186

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

WOOAAH! That was wicked man! Or should i say woman! LOL I love it! Who knew such a simple conversation could be so very interesting? Hehe I loved that Hug that Armaan and Shilpa had :) Why couldn't you be the writer of DMG? <3

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Neeta

@U-No-Poo

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: kshanikaa
Go yaar CZ...go change the storyline of DMG, we'll get to watch some real mature stuff on tv....and not to forget, with brilliant kash in it... 😃

thankyou so much! I wish I could change the storyline of DMG, unfortunately CVs don't even enough brains to find good writers 😉 😆

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Neeta

@U-No-Poo

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN
awesome os
loved it

beautfully written

plz do write more

thanks 4 da pm

thanks :) will PM you 😃

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Amna Malik

@amna malik

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Ohhh it's beautiful. R u gonna continue it? Or maybe write more ArSh one shots?

I loved the 'Do u need a hug' part. So cute..

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Roz

@PyaarSe

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

AHHHH! this is too awesome Neetz. sigh..makes me think of the what-ifs. beautifully written..love the background you chose for their conversation. love the somber feeling the entire scene had with specks of light glowing in and out. awesome and subtle.