A talk in the dark - ArSh one shot - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome os
loved it
beautfully written
plz do write more
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Great one shot Neetsz!!

Gaawd I love Cheetos!!

Lol!!

I like how u said the line about the dark!!

It was great!!

Love ya!!

Jinszuu!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: pretuna

@CZ--

😲😲😲 there is blue LAYS. 😲😲
mujhe bhi do. dun b so selfish. 😆😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Simply too good is all I can say, a different way to see the ray of hope. As always you rock Lizi!!

thankyou for commenting pranz di :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
lmao. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣. i think two packets r enough....for now. 😆
btw, i suggest u continue to one shot. it has strong potential of continuance, but not to the lvl of like ten or more parts. like a mini fic. it wud b nice. 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightmystery

wonderful

superb writing
continue soon

thankyou for commenting! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Afrin13

nice OS.............I really liked Shilpa here................so strong and optimistic and didnt lose hope after all that happened to her.............that is what it should be...........and Finally I can see our Arman here...................loved him also..................😊

do write more....................

Afrin

thanks afrin! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
neetz what a wonderful os!!!!
you just blew me off!!
hayye i loved it
please neetz write more pleashhhhh
love ya
maleeha
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: cute.arsh

that was beautifully written
👏👏
👏

thanks yaar! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovedd itt ! it was amazing....but it was sad to know bout Shilpas pastt..kinda used to Armaans so its like ehh watever haha...but i still feel bad for him...anywayss....i found it veryyy beautifull ! ahha i dislike cheetos =P haha
anywayss.....you should writee moree ! =D
but first update Tum Mile ...dying for it ! haha i just love your writingg =]

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