A talk in the dark - ArSh one shot - Page 2

nice OS.............I really liked Shilpa here................so strong and optimistic and didnt lose hope after all that happened to her.............that is what it should be...........and Finally I can see our Arman here...................loved him also..................😊

do write more....................

Afrin

Originally posted by: -KaShti-

WoW...!!!

amazing...i so love your writing....this one was good too...😛

Originally posted by: KaShbaby_Riya

freaking amazing, as always! :)

Originally posted by: bary

OMG neetz,thats fabulous,seeing the name i thought it would be sad one but man it is like a needed one,but yeah replacing marriage with parental issue in DMG,it would be like perfect scene,alas its DMG we r talking about

'Do you need a hug?', asked Armaan. Shilpa looked at him and her face broke into a wide smile, 'I think you're the one who needs a hug'
i adored this line,so natural,really wish ArSh track happens damn it has lot of feature

'Nope, I need a pack of cheetos, and maybe some coffee. Cafe?', he replied with the first genuine smile.

'And I need a hot, steaming cup of tea. So yep, I'm all for it',
its so simple but a great observation armaan dont like tea n shilpa is all for tea
also funny thing is both the past n present i have one person in mind,as all the flash backs are unforgettable
nice OS,could be mended in DMG way
swetha

Originally posted by: mysticwater24

Its so nice Neetz......the conversation was touching........aww both Armaan and Shilpa opened up to each other ......a start of a new beginning for both.......lovely OS ⭐️ 👍🏼