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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#301

is NRI fiction ke bare me kuch kahna chahti thi...aur voh yeh ki...tum ne is fiction me do carch ko sab se jyada role diya...obvious hai...!!! par mere liye toh ek hi carch sab se jyada imp tha...!!! aur sach kahun na toh RUDHIR ke carch me RAJ ko imagine karna main kabhi nahi bhul sakti...in fact ADIL ka bhi carch par...!!! par ek baat hai SUMI...tum raj ke carch ko jo bhi look deti ho...voh baht hi khaash hota hai...aur jaisa bhi banati ho...voh dil ko chuta hai...

mere liye yeh fiction kabhi END hua hi nahi...mujhe hamesha yaad rahega...RUDHIR😳

thanx

god bless u

love

*naam bhul gayi...* ab last scene dubara padhne ke baad aur raj ki voh pic dekhne ke baad apna naam yaad hi nahi aa raha hai yaar...😆

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#302

Hey Sumi, i didn't like your surprise...............

I mean i didn't want this fic to be over very soon 😕 😕 😕 but i think it's the perfect ending of a fic of such sweet concept. 😳 😳 😳

You know one thing, it's always easy to write a painful, action packed and true life story rather than these sweet and gentle one which always give a sweet blow of air. 😍 😍 😍 Jaise The Marriage was for me, only sweetness. 😊 😊 😊

Last part was really nice, i liked Alpana's behavior and u described that very well.😛 😛 😛 It was obvious actually that when she would realize that what has she said to RD she will be embarrassed. 😉 😉 😉

She was waiting for him but he didn't react like anything happened between them,😆 😆 😆 vaise it was not easy to accept that but she accepted and became normal a bit. 😉 😉 😉

Loved the way RD made her go to the party with him and nice pics and saree too.👏 👏 👏 The best part was the surprise she got in form of all her favorites and the cake on which "I Love You" was written. 😍 😍 😍

The last part was magical and beautiful, i loved that the most. 😍 😍 😍

A sweet ending to a sweet fic, carry on such beautiful gifts to us. 🤗 🤗 🤗

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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Priya

@pinky901

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#303

ummmmmmmh its finished

but me happy ki its end oon a veryyyyyyyy romantic end...

very well written part

lik the dar confusion n isecurities of alpana n the way dhir acted in frnt of ashna is so grt.......he is sucha brilliant actor yaaar i mn acting her koi kar leta hai but biwi ke sammne itni oscrd winning perfomance wobe 1st tak main its only in rajeevvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv istyle..i mn dhir...in fictions though...so

well dhir is vry cute wen he jus said its nothing ,..u jus drown off n u had said nothing to me n the way alpana face get off n she realise ki she actually iagining thg is so nice n thenher birthday day..his husband wishh her..hmm well kya sai tarika hai surprise out karke bhi out nai kiya..its veryyyyyyyy nice idea ek surprise out karke he told her to act like 1 who is getting suprise but on the other hand he actually giv her surprise of her life..omg.. actually imagine her surprise face..

well sab kuch is very grt...

u rocked the ending dere

their romance is sizzling...

pls write another love story type pls soon n yeah droplet ko jaldi jaldi romantic track pe leo..hehehe....

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#304

I cannot belive that NRI has come to and end....and this is because you write so beautifully that the story feels endless. The charactes in your FF being a part of our lives..be it Rudhir and Alpna or Adil and Ashna or Ayan and Asmi. But it has to be said that this is the most perfect end to the story.

Coming to the update..it was 'masti bhara'.

Ashna is worried about how she had behaved in the night and is afraid of how Rudhir will act now that she has confessed her love for him.

But Rudhir puts on his best innocent face and pretends that nothing has happened in the night. This confuses Ashna and she feels disappointed because now she thinks that Rushir does not know that she loves him. She does not even want to celebrate her birthday.

But Rudhir gives her a big surprise...she is compeltely mesmerised by the style in which he has confessed his love...she is left speechless. And seeing her so shocked...Rudhir wants to tease her even more, They are both lost in love and the birthday celebrations are long forgotten for now they have their entire life to celebrate for.

Thanks for sharing this story with us...and I look forward to reading many more of your stories. You are a VERY talented writer...never stop writing.

Take care dear.

Nisha

Edited by dazzling_glory - 14 years ago

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The Tilde Girl

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Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#305

i love rajeev!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!☺️ i love rudhir!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

this tym to i liked female character of ur fic.. u proved me wrong.. 😆😆

loved reading it.. it was awazing sweetie.. thank god tune galati se link di otherwise main ye miss kar deti.. 😃

waise me pure fic me woh thoda bachpana dhundti rahi par mila nahi.. tu yuhi kuch b kehti h re.. 😆😆

very well written.. gud story.. 👏

mene ek line v skip nai ki..😳 it was addicting..😳 😆
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it was simple yet beautiful.. thats all i want to say.. 😃

i love rajeev!! 😳😆

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#306

Superb...too beautiful part ! very nice fic sweety!

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maanmishti

@maanmishti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#307

nice and cute ff......thanx for giving us such fab story.......want more of droplets now😆

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: oliveya
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMGGGGGGGGGGG
awesome ....woooomgg I LOVED UR whole story .....wooo omggggg

sumaiya ............outstanding .....writter.......all the best for ur rocking next update 👍🏼

Thanks for the appreciation dear....am glad u read and liked the story. Thanks for being a part of this fic...😃

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria
hi
the up is really superb Thanks ria...😳

alpana is really confused and nervous when she woke up the next day

uske dil mein bas yehi fikar haai ke kahin usne naashe ke haalat mein rudhir ko kuch baata toh dia yehi sochte sochte becchare pure din beeth jaate haai lekin jab rudhir aata haai aur usse kaheta that she did or say nothing that night

rudhir ke baat sunke alpana feels low

next day alpana ke birthday haai aur rudhir uske liye kitne aacche party arrange karta haai

sab usse ke fav cheezo se Hmm....he basically wanted to surprise her!! 😳

aur is din ko rudhir alpana se aapne dil mein chuppe alpana ke liye pyaar ka izhaar bhi karta haai Yeah...finally!! 😆

i loved this fic from the beginning today when i heard that it is its last part

i felt really bad but as we all know every good thing has to end Aww....am actually glad to knw that u thought it was a gud fic...and well it was always supposed to be a short one...😊

so is this one

anyways plz cont with another interesting fic like this and pm me Will surely PM u whenever I write sumthing....thanks for reading and liking this fic....😳

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: spvd
hey sweety..........awesome one dear......................loved it........Thanks Deepa...😃😃...........will miss this fic........Aww....😳.............Rudhir and Alpana.................cute and lovely pair.......Am so glad that u think so...😃😛..........this part was so cute dear...................Rudhir very successfully confused Alpana and later cleared it in a very lovely way.......Am happy that it didnt disappoint u.....and that it was a gud enough fic for u..😉😃.........ciao soon in Droplets.......Yeah....thats gonna run much much longer...😆....but thanks a lot for being a part of this fic....hope u continue to like my work as always!! 😃............

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