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Oliveya Aniston

@Illumination

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#291

OMGG awESOME .............Sumaiya ..Rock........
i am looking forward for ur next update

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#292

Hi Sumaiya

So finally u updated this fiction.😃.I was waiting for it since Friday but your net connection made it impossible for u to update..anyways firstly I 'll say that I am not happy that this fiction is ending coz I really loved it but nothing can b more perfect than this ending😊👏👏👏

Rajeev's picture surely gave me a heart attack..I haven't seen it b4 and he is indeed looking like a heart throb..😍☺️..He has this effect on me..☺️ i just can't help it..😆😆

Now coming to this part Rudhir really played his part well ..he surely fooled Alpana with his ohh- so-innocent act!!!!!!!!!..😉😆😆

Alpana was fuming inside but she didn't know how to get that frustration out of her system..Rudhir's version of that nite was too simple from wat she remembered and she had to believe him coz she was the one who was drunk😆😆

She was feeling low on her birthday too coz she wished that her dream was real and she had actually confessed her love to her Dheer and he had held her close to him..

Rudhir gave her a very sweet surprise,something that every wife dream of..his way of expressing his love was too cute..😍 Alpana was left speechless when she heard those magical words..she thought she is dreaming and she didn't want to wake up..

This line was soo cute

'Rudhir: (laughing) Alpu'why r u staring like this? Mujhe sharam aa rahi hai' 😆😆

he is indeed too naughty..he deserved those punches from her 😆

Rudhir eas teasing his Alpu way too much and he was enjoying her fake anger..Rudhir and Alpana both were so lost in each other that they forgot all abt that birthday cake..😳😉 aise time mein cake kisko yaad rehta hai😆😆

u wrote the romantic scene in a very perfect way..👏👏 Rudhir and Alpana were

only interested in each other and their love..😳

Perefect ending yaar!!! I am becoming big fan of yours..U write so perfectly👏👏👏

I am more and more in love with Rudhir and Adil too..I can even remember well I haven't forgotten Ayaan still so u see your characters have this much effet on me..😆😆

Rudhir and Alpana were so very convinced of their future..they didn't need any1 in their life.it was perefctly fine with them..But everything changed when they got married..They had mapped their life well and falling in love was out of question but life never works according to our will.they fell in love so quickly and became really interested in each other😆😆

Never stop writing..it will b a waste of your talent.😊

being a acchi bacchi u'll update droplets soon na!!😆😆

I hope u r not bored with my stupid reply😆😆😆😆

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Oliveya Aniston

@Illumination

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#293

Sumaiya ........
awesome update ..........i really enjoy after read the whole story ........
wooooooooooo ...amazing story line.....ur are simplt great story writer ....../.......continue ........i am waiting for next rocking update.....
luv..oliveya

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#294

i loved the part..............sumi di.............

but i hate u for ending the fic................

it was truly mesmerizing.............

sayonara.............. "not really"......bcoz kabhi alvida na kehna............

phir milenge "droplets"........chalte chalte

luv

vidushi.

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#295

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏wow awesome, mind blowing, superb ff dear and thank you for all parts and pm going to miss your this ff ..waiting for another one ..Great Ending well written .👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#296

this was superb..........

Loved Rudhir n Alpana.........

Thanx for writing such a sweet fic......

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#297

😲 That's a literal surprise 4 me 😲😲😲 … was not expecting end soon😛😛😛 …so SOON😲😲😲 …but as they say all GOOD things come to end..aaj yakeen bhi ho gaya… 😆😆😆😆a lovely end to lovely FF will miss my Rudhir 😳😳 ahem ahem dhir 😉😉 …bt rudhir souds more good to me…😳😳😳 no worry now will be able to concentrate 100% on ADIL…😳😳😳

As 4 this ending part, it was awesome👏👏👏 …& u said rudhir is nave & innocent… but still itna acha confess karta hai… I am in love with him…☺️

Beginning was unusual...coz I was expecting rudhir to be there 😉😉😉 … but u sent him office 😆😆😆 …but how sweet & caring husband limejuice😃😃😃 … & alpana ab realize karne se kya fayda 😛😛😛 u revealed everything to Rudhir nashe mein... 😆😆😆 & I didn't knew Rudhir ko jhooth bolna bhi aata hai😈… ek baar ke liye mujhe bhi laga …ki yeh sab dream tha 😆😆😆…must say a good actor… 😉😉😉

Hai hai bday party..so sweet of rudhir… when is my bday 😛😛😛 ..damn nikal gaya mujhe bhi aisa bday gift chaiye 😳😳😳 …from same man ofcourse😉😉😉 … must say Rudhir looking 2gud on biwi's bday… 😍 & alpana my god kitne nakhre kar rahi hai 😆😆😆 surprise lene mein & when its from rudhir tab toh aur zyada excited hona chaiye…😳😳😳 bechari ko yakeen nahi ho raha he actually confessed… & rudhir not fair😈 biwi ko aise tang karte hai😈…uski leg pulling nahi karte 😈 … & the he says use sharam aa rahi hai 😆😆 ( I believe that he wud bhi blushing ) 😍 & Rudhir u are too much biwi wants to kill u 😆😆 & u were laughing .😕😕

I am with rudhir…alpaa ko pehle din mana kara chaiye tha 😍 ki use shadi nahi karni…ab kehne se kya fayda…😕😕

Rudhir dot know abt alpu…but I surely love u more than cake 😳😳😳 … as 4 answer to the question rudhir asked darr lag raha main gira dunga.😳😳😳 .. 200% trust rudhir from my side… 😳😳

Pheww 😛😛 … last part mein bhi long comment kar diya😆😆😆 …kya kare adaat se majboor😆😆 … so the end to NRI..so bye bye rudhir😃😃 …will miss u …😍

Continue soon 😛😛 …oops 😆😆 I mean start a new 1 😉😉 whenever u free…we will always be really interested 😛😛😛 … do RK fics simultaneous padhne mein apna maza hai… 😳😳😳

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Oliveya Aniston

@Illumination

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#298

i loved wooooo omggg! amazing sumaiya

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C3_IF

@C3_IF

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#299

👏hello darling, wat must i say, i'm speechless as d part was simply awwwweeeeesssssuuummmm👏👍🏼☺️😳.....waise to iss baar kaafi w8 karwaya but no prbs as it compensated for d amazing & long part wich u wrote. I was w8ing thruout d weekend 4 d UD, so finally last nite read it but dint hav tym 2 comment so abhi 1st thg doing ths aftr getting bak frm clg....i simply luved RUDHIR, thruout d fic & even Alpana was a very sweet character(though confused always :P )....well abhi aur shabd ni hai , over all d fic was awesum & i wud love it if u continue writing more of such short ff's...keep up d gr8 gud wrk sweety...& nw will be luking forward for DROPLETS UD 😊🤗👍🏼

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#300

pahle ud ki baat karte hai...pir is fiction ke bare me baat karenge...

mere xpectetion se jyada khubshurat thi yeh ud...sachhiiiii

Rudhir is ud ki jaan hai...!!! in fact hum yeh kah sakte hain ki is fiction ki jaan hai...samne rudhir ho toh main alpana ko kyoun dekhun...aur us ke bare me kyoun koi baat karun...ha ha ha...

main khud morning scene ko le kar xcited thi...ke kya hoga...kaise hoga...!!! par tum ne sare xcitement par nimbu pani pher diya...ha ha ha...

khair point ki baat yeh hai ke rudhir ko alpana ke peene se koi prob nahi hai...khaash kar ke agar voh aise reactions deti ho...toh rudhir khushi khushi nimbu pani banane ko taiyar hai...us ka hangover utarne ke liye...

yeh achha kiya tum ne rudhir ko office bhej diya...!!! bichari alpana kitni pareshan thi...!!! par ek tarah se dekha jaye toh tohrudhir ko kaise face karegi is ke liye bhi nervous thi...ha ha ha...

jab ki according to rudhir...voh sab kuch alpana ka dream tha...ha ha ha...

pura din alpana ko pareshan kar ke rakha us ne...!!! main bhi soch rahi thi ke yeh sumi ke dimag less dimag me akhir chal kya raha hai...!!! phir samne aayi voh baat toh pata chala ke... 'haila...sumi ke dimag less dimag me toh kitne cute aur romantic ideas uchal rahe hain yaar...'

rudhir ne kitna achha drama kiya...jab alpana party ke liye mana karr rahi thi toh...!!! surprise party bal kar le gaya...in fact dekha jaye toh party toh surprise hi thi...!!! par jab rudhir ne alpana ko kaha ke voh bhi acting kare surprise hone ka...tab bada maza aaya...!!! sab kuch kiya karaya janab ka tha...par react aise karr arhe the...jaise padosh se aaye hain...

khair...voh confession n last ka pura scene...sirf romantic nahi tha...itna achha tha ke pure fiction ka yeh sab se jyada beautiful part tha...

alpana bhi yakeen nahi kar payi...ab agar koi is tarah se confess kare... toh alpna jaise kam dimagwali ladki kaise samjhegi...!!! lekin confess karte waqt bhi voh alpana ko chedna bandh nahi karr raha tha...!!! ab yeh sab kuch jarur alpana ko dream lag raha hoga...

n jab rudhir ne kaha ke use sharam aa rahi hai...ha ha ha...main baht hass rahi thi...in fact tab mujhe raj kafi cute lag raha tha...

vaise rudhir sahi tha ke alpana ko pahle hi mana kar dena chahiye tha...ab bhugto...!!! vaise... zindagi bhar ka sath hai...in fact 7 janam aur...toh alpana...ko rudhir aur bhi jyada pareshan karne wala hai...ha ha ha...

jab alpana ko rudhir bol raha tha ke ab toh darr nahi lag raha hai ke main gira dunga...!!! toh voh scene bhi baht achha tha yaar...matlab... beautiful...!!! sach kahun na...voh pura party ka scene hi itna achha tha jaise...matlab...ek cuteness...thoda romance...kuch mushkurahatain faili hui...ek ajeeb sa mahual tha yaar...!!! sab kuch feel hua...

ab dukh ho raha hai kyoun ki ab toh cont soon bhi nahi kah sakti...😭

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