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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Sumaiya hello Dii...๐Ÿ˜›

So finally u updated this fiction.๐Ÿ˜ƒ.I was waiting for it since Friday but your net connection made it impossible for u to update..Hmm...its a disaster...๐Ÿคข...and am sorry to keep u w8ing....๐Ÿ˜• but yeah finally managed to UD the last part!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ anyways firstly I 'll say that I am not happy that this fiction is ending coz I really loved it but nothing can b more perfect than this ending๐Ÿ‘Ohh...thats a relief for me to hear that....coz when I had started the fiction I had no literal idea abt the ending....just few blur thoughts in the mind....so it was actually tough when I suddenly found myself at the end of the fic...๐Ÿ˜†...I wrote just abt anything....but am sooo glad u liked it. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Rajeev's picture surely gave me a heart attack..I haven't seen it b4 and he is indeed looking like a heart throb..๐Ÿ˜โ˜บ๏ธ..He has this effect on me..โ˜บ๏ธ i just can't help it..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†U dont need to help it Dii....sumtyms we must let the effect be on us....๐Ÿ˜‰...and wid Rajeev its surely not possible to resist the charms!! ๐Ÿ˜ Not our fault at all...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Now coming to this part Rudhir really played his part well ..he surely fooled Alpana with his ohh- so-innocent act!!!!!!!!!..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Hmm...gud actor...biwi se itni safai se jhooth bol leta hai...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Alpana was fuming inside but she didn't know how to get that frustration out of her system..Rudhir's version of that nite was too simple from wat she remembered and she had to believe him coz she was the one who was drunk๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Hehe...Rudhir was actually quite convincing when he said that "u were the one who was drunk not me"....ab Rudhir aisa bolega to bechari aage kya bolegi...๐Ÿ˜†
She was feeling low on her birthday too coz she wished that her dream was real and she had actually confessed her love to her Dheer and he had held her close to him..Yeah....coz all that being an imagination meant everything was bak to square one and she was again frustrated!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Rudhir gave her a very sweet surprise,something that every wife dream of..his way of expressing his love was too cute..๐Ÿ˜ Thanks Dii....glad u thought so...๐Ÿ˜ณAlpana was left speechless when she heard those magical words..she thought she is dreaming and she didn't want to wake up..
This line was soo cute
'Rudhir: (laughing) Alpu'why r u staring like this? Mujhe sharam aa rahi hai' ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Oh...u liked the line...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ glad to knw dat!!
he is indeed too naughty..he deserved those punches from her ๐Ÿ˜†Hmm...she spent every second in utter frustration and sadness....๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
Rudhir was teasing his Alpu way too much and he was enjoying her fake anger..Rudhir and Alpana both were so lost in each other that they forgot all abt that birthday cake..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰ aise time mein cake kisko yaad rehta hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Hehe...lekin mujhe yaad tha...thats why I let them continue wid the romance while I ran away wid the cake...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
u wrote the romantic scene in a very perfect way..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Rudhir and Alpana were
only interested in each other and their love..๐Ÿ˜ณ Phew....glad u thought it was gud...otherwise I literally cant justice wid such scenes...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†
Perefect ending yaar!!! I am becoming big fan of yours..U write so perfectly๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Oh gosh...thats such a huge compliment Dii...thank you!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ And well I do not write perfectly at all...but its all ur appreciation and love that makes it seem so perfect!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I am more and more in love with Rudhir and Adil too..I can even remember well I haven't forgotten Ayaan still so u see your characters have this much effet on me..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Ohh....am glad u didnt forget Ayaan still..and am even happier to knw both Rudhir n Adil made a niche in ur heart...๐Ÿ˜ณ I wud always love it if all the characters seem worthy enough to u....that wud be the biggest achievement for me...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Rudhir and Alpana were so very convinced of their future..they didn't need any1 in their life.it was perefctly fine with them..But everything changed when they got married..They had mapped their life well and falling in love was out of question but life never works according to our will.they fell in love so quickly and became really interested in each other๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Yeah thats the main aspect of the story....as we always have this tendency to draw an outline of our lyf...and despite knwing the fact that destiny has its own games to play, we tend to think that lyf cant at least get out of this circle!! Rudhir and Alpana knew they cant decide the future by every moment but they thought they cud at least have sum of their terms in that future!! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
Never stop writing..it will b a waste of your talent.๐Ÿ˜ŠAww...as long as u are there....I hope I never stop writing....inshallah that will never happen!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
being a acchi bacchi u'll update droplets soon na!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Hehe....I dont UD Droplets that regularly now...I knw....but will always try my best Dii..๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I hope u r not bored with my stupid reply๐Ÿ˜† Now pls dont say that....u knw I always love to reply to ur comments...and its a pleasure to read ur comments....in fact hum to dusre fics me bhi aapki comments padh lete hai if we get tym...๐Ÿ˜†...so pls never underestimate ur lovely talent of encouraging by saying so...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

And of course...if u cum across my reply u'll understand....how much I liked ur comment....isliye itnaaaa kuch likha...๐Ÿ˜†...thanks for being a part of this fic Dii...and thanks for always appreciating my work and boosting me...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

i loved the part..............sumi di.............Thanks Sweetie...๐Ÿ˜ƒ


but i hate u for ending the fic................Awww....pata hai...I exactly thought these words to cum from u....donno why....but I just felt...Vidu shayad last part dekh ke aisa hi kuch likhegi...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ...however this was always supposed to be a short fic dear...in fact it ran longer than I expected...๐Ÿ˜†

it was truly mesmerizing.............Am glad u thought so dear...๐Ÿ˜›

sayonara.............. "not really"......bcoz kabhi alvida na kehna............

phir milenge "droplets"........chalte chalte Aww....thats a sweet one...๐Ÿ˜ณ...and surely u'll see much more of Droplets....thats a much long fic...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ

luv
vidushi. Thanks for commenting dear....and being a part of this fic. ๐Ÿ˜›

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘wow awesome, mind blowing, superb ff dear and thank you for all parts and pm going to miss your this ff ..waiting for another one ..Great Ending well written .๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘




Thanks dear....am glad u thought it was a well written one....๐Ÿ˜ณ And I must thank you for reading each part and commenting on them...๐Ÿ˜ƒ thank you for being a constant part of the fic....๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

this was superb..........

Loved Rudhir n Alpana.........

Thanx for writing such a sweet fic......



Thanks Golu...for reading, commenting and liking the whole fic...๐Ÿ˜ƒ And its gr8 to knw u loved Rudhir n Alpana...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...my pleasure that I cud write the fic and share it wid u all....thanks for being a part dear!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ami tor onek proshongsha korsi !!!!!๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› r korbo na !! mukh betha hoye gese !!๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› onek kichu likhte iccha kortese but likhbo na !! ki bolte chai bujhe ne !! na bujhle call dish !! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnimnashin

Ami tor onek proshongsha korsi !!!!!๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› r korbo na !! mukh betha hoye gese !!๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› onek kichu likhte iccha kortese but likhbo na !! ki bolte chai bujhe ne !! na bujhle call dish !! ๐Ÿ˜‰



Haha...tui to always e olosh...in fact amra sobai...likhte valo lage na...๐Ÿ˜† but dont worry ami shob bujhi...ami bujhbo na to ke bujhbe bol?๐Ÿ˜† Thanks for reading yaar!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part -1

Wow another rk fic aisa mujhe kehna chahiye tha lekin uss time nahi keh paai kyonki main uss time if per aati hi nahi thi bas member hi thi

Chalo apni kahaani khatam karke ab me update per aati hun

Jitney bhi iske pehle fics padhe unn me se different concept laga iss ka title bhi different hai ' not really interested lekin mujhe bada interesting laga

Pehle to alpana aur uske papa ka convo jisme wo kehte hain Bring it on matlab?? Main tujhe kisi jung me thodi bhej raha hu???

Mujhe bhi aisa hi lagaa tha ki jung ladne jaa rahi hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Phir aate hain rudhir yaani apne rk per uske bhi apne parents ke saath shaadi ko lekar ifs and buts chal rahe the

Uske baad dono ka parallel conversations jo shaadi ki buraaiyon ko describe kar rahe the๐Ÿ˜† aur last me dono ki same line wo bhi same moment per๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Aur last me jab wo irritatedly bola magar sahi bola ki ye to nahi ho sakta na ki main duniya ki har achhi ladki se shaadi karta phiru'.

the first part was fantastic ab jab shuruaat aisi hui hai to pata nahi aa g eke updates kaise honge๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
part-2
finally rudhir and alpana are meeting in the restaurent with their parents๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ the scoldin part to rudhir is really did funny coz a 25 year old guy is being scolded by his dad like a 6yr old kid๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
and when they are told to know each other personally they really told to ech other aap iss shaadi se mana kar di jiye๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข because they both simply" not really interested"๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ but when they talked ech other regarding there thoughts and views they just simply agree to each other๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š which is unknown to them๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
when they again rejecting the proposals then their father made them understand the need of the marriage and they agreed for the alliance but agreed to the terms that they both will not interfer in each other's life they will lead the same life before their marraige๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
part - 3
cute and sweet update as i think because unknowingly they both are adjusting themselves according to each other's need and requirement when alpana thought that he is adjusting because of her on the other hand rudhir just can't see alpana in tension and does not thought for once to help her out and he actually did not realise that he has adjusted for her and compromised for his important office work๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ and when she felt really embarrased that he has to do some adjustments because of her then rudhir was there to put her in ease and told her that atleast he can do this much for her๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
and when they are returning from the party both of them gets drenched in the rain after that alpana started sneezing the way rudhir has taken care of her does not think for once that he is adjusting with her๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
and their life goes on without realising that thay both are adjusting and compromising the things with eachother๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part-4
update was as usual ,sweet,cute,hilarious and awesome.I am still laughing hard๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ
jab dhir ne alpana ko ek sunder si ladki se joker bana diya,woh bhi red nahin,blue nose wali aur woh joker pe kheenchtaan,,๐Ÿ˜† aur rudhir ka woh ultimate take on alpu tumhari ek screw na'.dhili hai'.in fact I think its missing'.isiliye to tum kabse khadi ho kar mujhse agree kiye jaa rahi ho'.instead of defending urself'๐Ÿ˜†
Dhir has started developing feelings for her ,jab usne kaha main to zindagi bhar nahi chhorunga tumhe''๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜Š
dhir was kinda blushing๐Ÿ˜ณ
Alpana was really angry on dhir for elaborating the reason to refuse honeymoon,or rather I shud say refusing the honeymoon,kahin na kahin woh chhati hogi ki woh saath saath honeymoon jaye๐Ÿ˜‰
but the good thing was ,it affected both,,๐Ÿ˜† jo unke pyaar ki gaadi ko aage badane key liye zaroori bhi tha๐Ÿ˜ƒ
woh pudding wala seen toh kamaal tha,, dhir 's face was like a cute little annoyed child.balloon ki tarah foola hua๐Ÿ˜†
and the moonlight scene part was really very beautiful,two angels with each other๐Ÿ˜ƒand te strange feeling for togetherness๐Ÿ˜Š
was all awesome


Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago

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