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Posted: 14 years ago
😆part5
very smiling smiling update😃👏
for the first time in her life Alpana is feeling bore and low 😊 just because dhir was not with him, (indication of developing love and togetherness😃) aur toh aur like all bahus she started feeling of having a full family,maa papa ,alpu aur dhir sab saath saath,,😃 MS always catches her lost in dreams of her pati parmeshwar, pr fir bhi naak per gussa ,ki aaya kyun nahin,😡 but somewhere in her heart she is still confused,😕
udhar delhi mein rudhir key toh haal hi behaal hain😛😆,kya kare ,wifey ki jo yaad aur zarurat aan padi hai,but like alpu,he is also confuse😕rudhir's photo was cute,alpu ka toh jaise uss photo pe dl hee aagaya ho😃
rudhir's latenight surprise visit made alpu a bit if relaxed and happy too,rudhir too was feeling good😊
jab MS aur rudhir ne alpana ka wait kartey kartey ek saath hi bulaya,toh dhir ki shakal toh dekhne layak hogi
ALPU!!!!!!!!!!!!!hehehe
delhi mei ghar mein ghuste hi alpana was truely shocked as if kisi bachelor key ghar aayi ho😆and like a typical wife she scolded her husband😃 aur woh complement ke taur per coffe,heheheh boredom mitaane ka tareeka,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
he was missing her ,wowow
he was actually missing her😃 mujhe toh ye gaana yaad aa raha hai- KAHIN PYAAR NA HO JAAYE ,KAHUN PYAAR NA HO JAAYE,,,,,,,,,,,,,fir bhi pyaar toh hona hi hai hai😳😉



Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
part - 6
very good update once again👏
i think here in this update nikki was needed to make alpana's feelings to realise herself that she surely started loving rudhir but she still unknown to those feelings the way she acted to rudhir in front of nikki forgetting that her friend is still sitting there and watching and listening the duo's conversation and when the guests come to their house how he has taken care that she is not used to go and serve the eatables to the guest so he himself has taken care for that👏👏👏
and the night when she was thinking about rudhir as to why he was so late when ho told the reason she just becomes shocked that he has given lift to someone that too a girl which is a friend of him😆😆😆
and now the miss ulti khopdi again started thinking ulta pulta😆 ,,,,,, now our dear rudhir is bound to get tensed that what has happened to this ulti khopdi 😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 7
very nice update😃
alpana k oolti khopdi ko lagta hai ki infection ho gaya hai,shak ka bhi aur complex bhi,,
BAD for Rudhir and bad for alpu too 😭 dono hi ab alag alag ho gaye hain ek hi ghar mein,,,,,,, apney apney egos ki wajah se,lekin ho bhi wahi raha hai jo woh chhaahte they, non-interference ++
but the whole party sequences was hilarious and interesting😆 😆😆 padh key Lata Mangeshkar ka yeh gaan yaad aaraha tha,, AAIYE meherbaan,,baithiye jaanejaaan,, heheheh
and when she reveals to Rudhir about her jealousy from Mishty, he's quite amazed as well as happy😃 and when she confesses her love ,,,😃
as if rudhir key saath saath mein bhi happy happy 😆 ki finaaly Romeo meets juliet
her darling wife was out of senses but she has alse made Dhir out of sense,,and he also loves her 😃😃 yipppeee
Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 8
Really a big surprise and a treat to us😃
Alpana is still confused between reality and her imagination aur udhar pyaa mein doobe hue unke husband unkey liye birthdayy ki surprise party mein busy hai ,, just a way to tell her that all her imagination is actuaaly true and they both love ech other😃 Alpana is still wondering what is wrong and right ,,,😕
party night sequence was awesome as Alpana became emotional as well as happy ki Dhir love her,
and I love the way he says "I truly love you yaar'..trust me!!" i heheheh ,uskey baad dono ki nok jhonk ,was too sweet and funny ,alpana ki childish and stupidity and Dhir's way of teasing ,caresssing her was so cute and romanic too😳
Dhir's take on her birthday cake wa funny and sweet making her more blushing😳😆
So now in short the whole fic was awesome,award winning story with a different concept👏👏
⭐️⭐️kaash yeh fic realiuty mein RK key serial ki story hoti 😆
Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
see see maine ye pura fic finally padh hi liya ...phew😆😆😆
ab bachta hai i love you too much to loose you usko bhi jaldi khatam karne ki koshish karungi😊😊😊
bbbyyyeee
shreya😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Perfect ending
Rudhir n Alpana r lovely characters
enjoyed every part in this fic
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

😲 That's a literal surprise 4 me 😲😲😲 ' was not expecting end soon😛😛😛 'so SOON😲😲😲 Hehe...I knw end kisine expect nahi kiya tha...despite my saying that its a veryyy short story...😳😳'but as they say all GOOD things come to end..aaj yakeen bhi ho gaya' 😆 Haha...tab to saare fics mujhe jaldi khatam karna chahiye...taaki wo ACHHI ho..😉😆😆 a lovely end to lovely FF will miss my Rudhir 😳😳 ahem ahem dhir 😉😉 'bt rudhir souds more good to me'😳😳😳 no worry now will be able to concentrate 100% on ADIL'😳😳😳Hehe...thanks dear!! Yeah...even I find Rudhir to sound better...lekin dono ko short name dena tha mujhe...😆😆...and yup...total concentration is quite essential for Adil na...he is one complicated guy!!😆😆

As 4 this ending part, it was awesome👏👏👏 'Thank you dear!! 😃& u said rudhir is nave & innocent' but still itna acha confess karta hai' I am in love with him'☺️Aww...glad to knw that just 8 parts were enough to make u fall for him...😆😆...

Beginning was unusual...coz I was expecting rudhir to be there 😉😉😉 ' but u sent him office 😆😆😆 Glad to have done sumthing that was not expected..😉😆'but how sweet & caring husband lime juice😃😃😃 Yup...my heroes are all very sweet n caring..😆😳' & alpana ab realize karne se kya fayda 😛😛😛 u revealed everything to Rudhir nashe mein... 😆😆😆 & I didn't knew Rudhir ko jhooth bolna bhi aata hai😈' ek baar ke liye mujhe bhi laga 'ki yeh sab dream tha 😆😆😆'must say a good actor' 😉😉😉Haha...ye to badhiya hai...he cud even deceive YOU!! 😃😃😆😆

Hai hai bday party..so sweet of rudhir' when is my bday 😛😛😛 ..damn nikal gaya Gosh...ye comment kab ka tha...and I missed replying!! ...Coz tumhare next bday to ane ko hai...😆😆😆...Rudhir ko bulau kya? 😆😆😳mujhe bhi aisa bday gift chaiye 😳😳😳 'from same man ofcourse😉😉😉 ' Hehe...addition achha tha...from same man...😆😆...of course we dont need anyone else...😉😆😆must say Rudhir looking 2gud on biwi's bday' 😍 I love that pic of his...☺️& alpana my god kitne nakhre kar rahi hai 😆😆😆 surprise lene mein & when its from rudhir tab toh aur zyada excited hona chaiye'😳😳😳 Hehe...bechari pareshan thi na...kahen ka bday when u r a confused soul in love!! 😆😆😆😉bechari ko yakeen nahi ho raha he actually confessed' & rudhir not fair😈 biwi ko aise tang karte hai😈'uski leg pulling nahi karte 😈 ' & the he says use sharam aa rahi hai 😆😆 ( I believe that he wud bhi blushing ) 😍 & Rudhir u are too much biwi wants to kill u 😆😆 & u were laughing .😕😕Haha...hopelessly in love...so much that he doesnt mind getting killed by the wife...😆😆😉😳😳

I am with rudhir'alpaa ko pehle din mana kara chaiye tha 😍 ki use shadi nahi karni'ab kehne se kya fayda'😕😕Hehe...tab to tumhara bada fayda hota...nahi?😆😆

Rudhir dot know abt alpu'but I surely love u more than cake 😳😳😳 Hehe..hero ke samne cake/ice-cream...everything is valueless...😳😳😆😆' as 4 answer to the question rudhir asked darr lag raha main gira dunga.😳😳😳 .. 200% trust rudhir from my side' 😳😳Aww...Alpana ko bhi keh do...tumhe uske husband pe kitna bharosa hai...😆😆...and then watch out for her reaction...😆😆😉

Pheww 😛😛 ' last part mein bhi long comment kar diya😆😆😆 'kya kare adaat se majboor😆😆 ' so the end to NRI..so bye bye rudhir😃😃 'will miss u '😍Hehe...last part me hi to long comment chahiye tha mujhe...as I need to knw...how was the entire thing...😆😆

Continue soon 😛😛 'oops 😆😆 I mean start a new 1 😉😉 whenever u free'we will always be really interested 😛😛😛 ' do RK fics simultaneous padhne mein apna maza hai' 😳😳😳 I admit..apne maze hai...lekin main to thik se Droplets bhi continue nahi kar paa rahi hu...achha hua ek aur shuru nahi kiya tha...😆😆


Thanks for the lovely comment Puriji...loved replying to it...though am super late!! 😆😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chinmayi

👏hello darling, wat must i say, i'm speechless as d part was simply awwweeesssuuummm😳.Hehe...thanks Chinu...🤗...waise to iss baar kaafi w8 karwaya but no prbs as it compensated for d amazing & long part wich u wrote. I was w8ing thruout d weekend 4 d UD, so finally last nite read it but dint hav tym 2 comment so abhi 1st thg doing ths aftr getting bak frm clg..Ohh...hamesha hi w8 karwati hu main...bad girl Sumi..😳...but Chinu is a gud girl...always reads fast and makes it a point to comment...😃😃...thanks!! 😳..i simply luved RUDHIR, thruout d fic & even Alpana was a very sweet character(though confused always :P )Hehe...gr8 to knw u loved Rudhir...and well...Ashna ko dekhne ke baad Alpana ko 'confused' kehna shayad sahi nahi hai...😆😆...hai na?😉😆😆...well abhi aur shabd ni hai , over all d fic was awesum & i wud love it if u continue writing more of such short ff's.Hmm...I knw u like short fics...jo kabhi kabhi aap revise kar sako..😆😆...well when I get a lil less occupied...I hope to start a short fic simultaneously...like this one..😳..keep up d gr8 gud wrk sweety...& nw will be luking forward for DROPLETS UD 😊🤗👍🏼 Thanks dear...for the lovely comment and for sticking to the fic all throughout...😳😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

pahle ud ki baat karte hai...pir is fiction ke bare me baat karenge...as u wish jee...😳

mere xpectetion se jyada khubshurat thi yeh ud...sachhiii Aww...thanks!!😳😳 Next tym se expectations kam high rakhna...aisa hi lagega phir..😆😆
Rudhir is ud ki jaan hai...!!! in fact hum yeh kah sakte hain ki is fiction ki jaan hai...samne rudhir ho toh main alpana ko kyoun dekhun...aur us ke bare me kyoun koi baat karun...ha ha ha...Hehe...sahi hai...mujhe dekho...main bhi heroine ko nahi dekhti...and am glad to knw that u feel Rudhir was the attraction of the fic...as thats wat I have always wanted...😳😆...
main khud morning scene ko le kar xcited thi...ke kya hoga...kaise hoga...!!! par tum ne sare xcitement par nimbu pani pher diya...ha ha ha...Haha...wohi to achha hua na...u got a shock/surprise!! 😆😆😉
khair point ki baat yeh hai ke rudhir ko alpana ke peene se koi prob nahi hai...khaash kar ke agar voh aise reactions deti ho...toh rudhir khushi khushi nimbu pani banane ko taiyar hai...us ka hangover utarne ke liye...Exactly...bas reactions aise hone chahiye...😆😆
yeh achha kiya tum ne rudhir ko office bhej diya...!!! bichari alpana kitni pareshan thi...!!! par ek tarah se dekha jaye toh tohrudhir ko kaise face karegi is ke liye bhi nervous thi...ha ha ha...Hmm...Rudhir ke chale jane se uski tension and confusion aur badh gayi...which I think resulted wonderfully for Rudhir later on...😆😆😳😉
jab ki according to rudhir...voh sab kuch alpana ka dream tha...ha ha ha...Haha...Jhootha!! 😆😆 (but kamaal ka😉😳😆)
pura din alpana ko pareshan kar ke rakha us ne...!!! main bhi soch rahi thi ke yeh sumi ke dimag less dimag me akhir chal kya raha hai...!!! phir samne aayi voh baat toh pata chala ke... 'haila...sumi ke dimag less dimag me toh kitne cute aur romantic ideas uchal rahe hain yaar...'Aww...chalo dimagless dimag ne kuch to achha socha...😆😆...am glad u found it all cute n romantic...waise romantic ka pata nahi (u knw I am no gud in that genre😆)...but mujhe last ke do parts cute lage!!😆😆
rudhir ne kitna achha drama kiya...jab alpana party ke liye mana karr rahi thi toh...!!! surprise party bal kar le gaya...in fact dekha jaye toh party toh surprise hi thi...!!!Hehe...yeah!! Surprise kharab nahi hua..😉😆😆 par jab rudhir ne alpana ko kaha ke voh bhi acting kare surprise hone ka...tab bada maza aaya...!!! sab kuch kiya karaya janab ka tha...par react aise karr arhe the...jaise padosh se aaye hain...Lolz...I loved this line of yours...😆...and yeah..as I said...kamaal ka jhootha insaan hai ye...😆😆😳😳
khair...voh confession n last ka pura scene...sirf romantic nahi tha...itna achha tha ke pure fiction ka yeh sab se jyada beautiful part tha...
alpana bhi yakeen nahi kar payi...ab agar koi is tarah se confess kare... toh alpna jaise kam dimagwali ladki kaise samjhegi...!!! lekin confess karte waqt bhi voh alpana ko chedna bandh nahi karr raha tha...!!! ab yeh sab kuch jarur alpana ko dream lag raha hoga...Hehe...ek to bechari pehle se confused hai...upar se Rudhir aur bhi confuse kar raha tha...sab milake bechari super confused soul ban gayi...quite like Ashna...😆😆😉😆😆
n jab rudhir ne kaha ke use sharam aa rahi hai...ha ha ha...main baht hass rahi thi...in fact tab mujhe raj kafi cute lag raha tha...Hehe...mujhe bhi. I wish Rajeev ko sach me aisa koi funny scene karte hue hum screen pe dekhe...😳😆
vaise rudhir sahi tha ke alpana ko pahle hi mana kar dena chahiye tha...ab bhugto...!!! vaise... zindagi bhar ka sath hai...in fact 7 janam aur...toh alpana...ko rudhir aur bhi jyada pareshan karne wala hai...ha ha ha...Hehe...tum to bechari ko aur darra dogi..😆😆...but then she got lucky having Rudhir in her lyf...abhi bhugatna to parega hi..😆😉😉
jab alpana ko rudhir bol raha tha ke ab toh darr nahi lag raha hai ke main gira dunga...!!! toh voh scene bhi baht achha tha yaar...matlab... beautiful...!!! sach kahun na...voh pura party ka scene hi itna achha tha 😆jaise...matlab...ek cuteness...thoda romance...kuch mushkurahatain faili hui...ek ajeeb sa mahual tha yaar...!!! sab kuch feel hua...Ohh...thanks a lot dear!! Main likhte waqt jaisa feel kar rahi thi...seems like tumhe bhi waisa hi kuch feel hua..😃😃...am glaad to knw that u loved it all...😛😛😃😳
ab dukh ho raha hai kyoun ki ab toh cont soon bhi nahi kah sakti...😭Aww...hehe...koi baat nahi...maine pakana bandh to nahi kiya...ye nahi to kuch aur sahi..😉😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

is NRI fiction ke bare me kuch kahna chahti thi...aur voh yeh ki...tum ne is fiction me do carch ko sab se jyada role diya...obvious hai...!!!Yeah...in fact side characters bas naam ke liye tha...as the leads needed their parents for the marriage to happen...😆 😆😆 par mere liye toh ek hi carch sab se jyada imp tha...!!!Understandable..😉 aur sach kahun na toh RUDHIR ke carch me RAJ ko imagine karna main kabhi nahi bhul sakti...in fact ADIL ka bhi carch par...!!! par ek baat hai SUMI...tum raj ke carch ko jo bhi look deti ho...voh baht hi khaash hota hai...aur jaisa bhi banati ho...voh dil ko chuta hai...Aww...thats a huge compliment for me...from one of my fav writers...whose characters compel me to fall in love wid them...😆😆 (Raj wale characters😆😳😉)...am glllaaaddd to knw that u feel so...😳😳 thanks Pri..!! 😃😳

mere liye yeh fiction kabhi END hua hi nahi...mujhe hamesha yaad rahega...RUDHIR😳Ohh...thats really nice to knw...😳...waise mujhe Rudhir zyada yaad nahi rehta...aksar Puri reminds me of this fic of mine..😆...however its gr8 to knw that u liked the character of Rudhir...😃
thanx pleasure is always mine..😉😳
god bless u
love
*naam bhul gayi...* ab last scene dubara padhne ke baad aur raj ki voh pic dekhne ke baad apna naam yaad hi nahi aa raha hai yaar...😆Haha..tumhara naam SHERNI hai...angrezi me LIONESS kehte hai hum tumhe...😆😆...yaad aya? 😆😉😳😆😆

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