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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

Oh Maan..why prove yourself to be a hypocrite? 😉

One he advises poor, impressionable Preet to stay away from girls and then two, he can't control himself whenever Geet is remotely close to him... 😆😆😆

I really like this FF so far, especially how Geet has retained her childishness till date...
Her chewing gum all the time and frequently blowing bubbles is truly a very endearing image of her 😊

I need to read more! 😃
Thanks for the PMs and continue asap ⭐️

Thanks Ayesha!! I'll try to update ASAP!! -Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Again you made my 'Dil Khush' lol Basically, when I say that I mean my herat is jumping

Preet's inspiration was the Awesomeeee CutiePie character of Preet in KDMHMD!
I just loved Sushant Rajput in KDMHMD!!
lol Maan+Preet=MaanEet!! Hahha...Good observation!
I'm soo happy u liked it!
You know 3 others said that this was there fav part and everytime I read that I'm like
"Awwwwww!"
But, whenever you say so I'm like
"Double Awwwww!"
lol! I knwo I make no sense!
I actually just mean that I feel greta when my Di tells me that it's her fave part!!
It's different from when others say so!
I'm planning on writing a loonnng update because 2 ppl requested
Saz, Do you knwo if there's gonna be a another season of Dus Ka Dum??
And when!!
I don't have Sony but me and my sis would watch it on the computer!
I watched many episodes of it! Salman is wonderful in it!
SOooooo Damn Lovable!
Okay, I need to reply to every1 elses comments now!
and then start update
soo bye 4 now!
-Jassi
(Your CandyCoated Munchkin---who's not as sweet as she seems to be! lol)



triple awww!!! my Candycoated Munchkin! am pinchin ur cheeks from here! lol
I swear to God, I swear by Salman lol that... I imagined a kid version of Preet from KDM.. during this chaptr!! I had suchaaa feeling the idea came from him! altho I never watched the show properly, my family did so I always knew what was happening by strolling by when the epi's were on lol - I loved watching Preet cos he was sooo adorable! the cutest, cheekiest lovely bro in any show! Sushant really added to the cuteness of the character, I agree!

As for DKD, well Salman's doing the new season of Big Boss atm na.. so its gonna be a whiiiile methinks! + Sony will have to approach him bout it too!

YAYYYY!!! I would like to also request a super long part too!! hehe, altho I have to admit, ur such an awesome ff writer - u always update with lengthy parts which are always a treat to read, but us hungry readers will always want more so am looking forward to a super long part!! YAY!

Love,
tera dil khush karne waali Di! 😆
xxxxxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Chotii



triple awww!!! my Candycoated Munchkin! am pinchin ur cheeks from here! lol
I swear to God, I swear by Salman lol that... I imagined a kid version of Preet from KDM.. during this chaptr!! I had suchaaa feeling the idea came from him! altho I never watched the show properly, my family did so I always knew what was happening by strolling by when the epi's were on lol - I loved watching Preet cos he was sooo adorable! the cutest, cheekiest lovely bro in any show! Sushant really added to the cuteness of the character, I agree!

As for DKD, well Salman's doing the new season of Big Boss atm na.. so its gonna be a whiiiile methinks! + Sony will have to approach him bout it too!

YAYYYY!!! I would like to also request a super long part too!! hehe, altho I have to admit, ur such an awesome ff writer - u always update with lengthy parts which are always a treat to read, but us hungry readers will always want more so am looking forward to a super long part!! YAY!

Love,
tera dil khush karne waali Di! 😆
xxxxxxx

OMG!
Really...you knew it was Preet!
My sister read this comment and is sooo happy
cause she's a die-hard fan of him in KDM and Zara Nachke Dikha!
Hey, what Big Boss about?
Haven't ever watched it, just heard of it a lot!
So, u also wnat super long part!
Now I better make sure the next part is super long!
But, then u guys gotta wait till Friday or Saturday
-CandyCoated Little Munchkin
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Okay Mina Dear!!
Super long update next time!!
Thanks for ur wonderful comments!
I think u shold continue soooooon tooo!!!!
Ur update was shorter than mine!
-Jassi

LOL are we going to have a competation on who updates longer... HUH, if we are.. then i would like you too win😳 AHAHAHAA lmao nways plz reali do make a suppppppppeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrr long update, and yes i will also try to make a long update😃 lov ya🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey i just read ur ff nd i just luved its sooooooooooooo amazing amazing luved it could u plzzzzzzzzz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey jus t came across ur ff !! read all 10 parts ...u a fab writter cn u add me 2 ur pm list ...nd cn u add me 2 ur buddy list 2 ...i tried but im facing sme problems
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Thanks sooooo much PunjabiSis!!
Enjoyed reading ur comments!!
Awwww!!
You seriously think it was 1 of the best updates!
I'm sitting here with a 10000000 Watt smile on my face!
lolzzz
Thanks really much!
You comments are like an energy drink for me!
lol! I know i sound stupid!
-Jassi


ur welcome punjabi sis! :P
yea....i seriously think itz 1 of d best updates!
lol....imagining ur 10000000 watt smile.....m also having a 10000000 watt smile on my face! :D
n my comments r lyk a energy drink to u haan?! :P
hehehe........lol i will try to give u more of d drink nxt time! :P
hehehe
n no u don't sound stupid....atleast not to me! coz even i end up talking like tat o ppl!
:P :P
newayz update soooooooooooooooooooooon!
m gnna keep pestering u till u don't update!

luv
Navpreet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jassi Sweet Heart.............Im Extremly Sorry for the Delay............A Very Big Sorry.........PLs Forgive me..........
OMG OMG OMG both the Parts are
Awesome........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏........Fabulous........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..........Marvelous......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏........Amazing...........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..............
Loved them soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Chapter 9
Loved it sooooooooooooooo much when Geet said❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
"What do you mean what's wrong with me!? I'm catching up on my favourite show, that has Gurmeet Chaudhary! Because of this trip, I missed two episodes." 😃😃😃
I too really Missed Geet and IF for two long days because of my Trip.........What a coincidence....😃.......Thanq so much for adding that line.....🤗.......Thats really how I felt............
Loved Maaneet's Pillow Fight.......😆😆😆😆.......Thats so Sweet of U to add such a Cute thing...........
OMG I did't expect Geet would Slap Maan twice....😲😲😲😲...Poor Maan........
Loved it soooooooooooooo much when Geet Innocently shouted at Maan saying he made Gurmeet Wet...🤣🤣🤣🤣.....
Loved it so much when Maan shared his feelings abt his Family to Geet.......❤️❤️❤️.......
Yaar how can Geet even think that Nayantara would be Maan's Sis.....🤣🤣🤣...
Oh No why did U make Maan get Hurt...........But thats so Sweet of Geet she dressed his wound...😳😳😳..
Yaar Geet is really too much she can offer Maan to Sleep on bed and she can go and sleep on the couch........Poor Maan.........Can't she think that Maan is Hurt........But Maan is really Sweet though he fought with her for the bed later he made her sleep on the bed........
wow so finally Maan has started realising that he is falling in Love with Geet........
Loved these lines soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
"How dare you call my Gurmeet Chaudhary time waste!?"
"Geet...What would you do if I kissed you?"
"Why are you being such a moron!? Poor Gurmeet! You made him wet!"
'Poor Gurmeet! You made him wet?? What is wrong with her!? All she cares about is this Gurmeet dude!'
"I still can't believe you thought that Naintara was my sister!"
Chapter 10
Loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much when Geet kissed Maan on his Cheek.....How Sweet.......
Very Funny Maan Kissed her Twice(once during night and once in the morning) and now after kissing her he is telling "We're equal now."..........Not at all.......Poor Geet she does'nt know.............
Yaar Daadi will never leave Maan....She knows all the ways how to get things done by him.......Poor Maan........ Aakhir Daadi hi Jeetgayi.......
Loved the way how Maan Guessed abt Geet's reactions after listening to what he said.....
Maan is Correct this Geet everthing except what Maan wants to hear....
Yaar how could Geet even think of suggesting Sasha's name......
Loved Maan-Preet bonding sooooooooo much..........Loved Maan being Posessive for Preet....
Loved the way Preet felt comfortable with Geet.......
OMG what all Maan is teaching Preet........He is a very Bad Chachu......
Loved Maaneet's scenes soooooooooooooo much........
They really fought like Kids.......OMG Geet started calling Daadi to complain abt Maan.....
Loved these lines soooooooooooo much
"Geet, I was awake when you kissed me."
"Geet, I know I'm irresistable, but control sweetheart!"
'She'll probably widen her eyes and blow a huge bubble from her stupid gum!'
'Wow!! She says everything I thought she would except for the only answer I would have liked!'
"We're equal now."
"I know you were! But, for your imformation Maan Singh Khurana makes and follows his own rules!"
"I don't care...I just wanted to tell you to stay away from my Preet! He loves me more! Got it?"
"Don't worry I won't steal him from you"
Thanq so much for the PM.......
Thanq so much for the Lovely FF
Im Eagerly......Greedily waiting for the next part.......
Pls Pls Pls Update Sooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

OMG!
Really...you knew it was Preet!
My sister read this comment and is sooo happy
cause she's a die-hard fan of him in KDM and Zara Nachke Dikha!
Hey, what Big Boss about?
Haven't ever watched it, just heard of it a lot!
So, u also wnat super long part!
Now I better make sure the next part is super long!
But, then u guys gotta wait till Friday or Saturday
-CandyCoated Little Munchkin


omg meee tooo i'm a huuuuuuuuuge fan of ZNKD since season 1 lol
Big Boss - have u ever watched Big Brother??
^^ a reality show with a bunch of indian celebs living together in a house doing random tasks.. i dont actually watch it myself - am not interested lol have seen salman snippets only!
Cant wait for the update..! hope its done by friday ;)

Happy writing sweety!xxx

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mina H

LOL are we going to have a competation on who updates longer... HUH, if we are.. then i would like you too win😳 AHAHAHAA lmao nways plz reali do make a suppppppppeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrr long update, and yes i will also try to make a long update😃 lov ya🤗

'I will also try to make a long update'
No!!! You won't try! You will!
And yes there is a competition and you better win!
lol
-Jassi

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