MaanEet FF: Once Upon A Time... Chapter14-Page125 - Page 53

Originally posted by: ansah

that is just so awesome..really loved it

and the kiss was so cute...poor geet all

so shy...me loving it and the fights are

so adorable...do keep writing...

Originally posted by: nehara

wow.. i loved it.... awesome.....

so they are gonna get engaged soon.....so cool...

and preet is so sweet... i loved him...

and he's ryt.. maan and geet fight like kids... and it's fun....

pls update the next part soon...

cnt wait to read it... 😃

Originally posted by: Jes75

Hey Jassi ... i think i'm falling in love wid PREET 😉😆 such a cute kid ....chacha and chachi fighting over him .....totally loved the whole epi....😊

Originally posted by: dimpzz

hey JASSI!
awesome update!
really luved it
n gud tat NT is a nyc female in this except for d money part ofcourse
n they hav a kid!
hehehe........awwwwwww....preet is adorable!
n luv maan-preet 's realtion
it wz sooo sweet
n i luved it when geet kissed him on d cheek n he kissed her bak!
awwwwiiee!!!
it wz cho chweeeet!
n maan stealthily looking at geet when she enters d khuaran mansion!
OMG!maan!i luv him!
hez d bst
n d whole kitchen wala part!it wz fab!
i really luved each n every part of d update!
n even when he asks her will u marry me?
she says everything he imagined her to say except d part he wanted to hear!
hehehehe.......FAB update sweety!
it wz lyk 1 of d bst updates!

luv
Navpreet

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

omg loved da updat e

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update like today

it was amazing

Originally posted by: namita25

nice update as always...
so Maan finally convinced Geet to be his fake fiance....
liked the new side of Maan .......loved his interaction with Preet....really excited for the next part.....

Originally posted by: Maania

👏It was awsome and fun reading😊
😊

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Liked both the updates

Liked the way Maan always lossed himself wem he saw Geet

Mis touch me not n dhust was fab

Liked their pillow fght

Geet was too possesive abt Guru😆😆

Maan always does sumthg wat he shuldnt

Liked Geet's care for Maan

Their fght for bed was sho cute

Maan is jus too adorable yaar

Well the score arent equal Maan had kissed her wen he placed her on bed so Maan is aage😆😆😆

Liked the way Maan already knew wat wuld be Geet's expression n words wen he wuld purpose her

Geet was fab Maan was making her do all thgs in name of Dadi

Man he uses his brains a lot

Liked their lovey dovey acting in frnt of Dadi

Geet's contarct Maan can never follow it he jus cant resist her

Liked Preet a lottttttttt

He is jus sho sho cute

His talks wit Geet was fab

Maan was getting jealous

Maan needs a a doc he culd be so childish nevr thought that

Next week engagement oye hoye

Liked Dev n NT they arent that bad

Maan's view on gals really needs to change

He can never stop seducing Geet for sure

Preet bechara Chacha Chachi ke beech mein phas gaya😆😆😆

Maan is in hell big trouble

Dadi is for sure gonna take Geet's side only

Wuld love to c how Geet n Dadi pisses of Maan😆😆😆

Sorry for late comment

Originally posted by: Chotii

awwwwwwww Jas - as u already know - New favvvv part omgggg new fav fav fav fav FAV part!!!

Preet is sooooo cuuuuuuute! i love that u included such an Adorable character in ur ff!!! I lovvvvved his entry - the way maan dotes on him, the relationship maan-preet - hey thats maneet too! lol but anyways yh, they have sucha sweet relationship!!! and the fact that he already loves geet awwwww!!!
also, u know the bit where preet's helping geet clear the table + then maan saw that geet gave him an ice-cream and kiss on the cheek - i thought maan's reaction was simply hilarious!! he was actually possessive??? omg! that cracked me up. for a moment i thought, hmmm maybe maan will be his mischeivious self, and clear up the plates, go into the kitchen and ask geet for his reward for helping, as in an icecream and a kiss on the cheek too, causing little preet to giggle again!! buttttttt omg, the fact that it got maan plotting how to take back his preet was just tooo funny!! LOVED the entiiiiiiire part!!!

Maan's So Hot! - complimenting her on the sari, being awake when she kissed him lol

and Geet.. awww love her as well!

and Preet, he's an additonal lovable character!!!
AWESOME PART! (new fav ;)

keep it up sweety loved it soo much!

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Originally posted by: Starry_night

What a lovely and funny update! Lolz. Geet kissed him on his cheek and their little romance on the sofa was really cute....lolz. Oh, so Maan planned to make Geet act his mangetar........giving Dadi ka bahana and all......smart......lolz. Lolz at Geet's rules......they have already broken them so many times.....lolz......and Maan wanted to see her in a sari......this guy......kinda sweet actually. Maan 's family is sort of good......and Preet is such a cute kiddo......really lovable! Lolz.....Maan and Geet are such kids....fighting over Preet......even Preet could not help but call them kids......Maan's so good at teasing and annoying Geet......such a flirt! Lolz.....Oooo...Geet called Dadi for help.....guess Maan's gonna be in trouble now.....lolz.....all in all a wonderful update! Do continue soon.