MaanEet FF: Once Upon A Time... Chapter14-Page125

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#511

Liked both the updates

Liked the way Maan always lossed himself wem he saw Geet

Mis touch me not n dhust was fab

Liked their pillow fght

Geet was too possesive abt Guru😆😆

Maan always does sumthg wat he shuldnt

Liked Geet's care for Maan

Their fght for bed was sho cute

Maan is jus too adorable yaar

Well the score arent equal Maan had kissed her wen he placed her on bed so Maan is aage😆😆😆

Liked the way Maan already knew wat wuld be Geet's expression n words wen he wuld purpose her

Geet was fab Maan was making her do all thgs in name of Dadi

Man he uses his brains a lot

Liked their lovey dovey acting in frnt of Dadi

Geet's contarct Maan can never follow it he jus cant resist her

Liked Preet a lottttttttt

He is jus sho sho cute

His talks wit Geet was fab

Maan was getting jealous

Maan needs a a doc he culd be so childish nevr thought that

Next week engagement oye hoye

Liked Dev n NT they arent that bad

Maan's view on gals really needs to change

He can never stop seducing Geet for sure

Preet bechara Chacha Chachi ke beech mein phas gaya😆😆😆

Maan is in hell big trouble

Dadi is for sure gonna take Geet's side only

Wuld love to c how Geet n Dadi pisses of Maan😆😆😆

Sorry for late comment

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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#512

Wonderfullll update.

Continue soon.

Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

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Saz

@Chotii

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#513

awwwwwwww Jas - as u already know - New favvvv part omgggg new fav fav fav fav FAV part!!!

Preet is sooooo cuuuuuuute! i love that u included such an Adorable character in ur ff!!! I lovvvvved his entry - the way maan dotes on him, the relationship maan-preet - hey thats maneet too! lol but anyways yh, they have sucha sweet relationship!!! and the fact that he already loves geet awwwww!!!
also, u know the bit where preet's helping geet clear the table + then maan saw that geet gave him an ice-cream and kiss on the cheek - i thought maan's reaction was simply hilarious!! he was actually possessive??? omg! that cracked me up. for a moment i thought, hmmm maybe maan will be his mischeivious self, and clear up the plates, go into the kitchen and ask geet for his reward for helping, as in an icecream and a kiss on the cheek too, causing little preet to giggle again!! buttttttt omg, the fact that it got maan plotting how to take back his preet was just tooo funny!! LOVED the entiiiiiiire part!!!

Maan's So Hot! - complimenting her on the sari, being awake when she kissed him lol

and Geet.. awww love her as well!

and Preet, he's an additonal lovable character!!!
AWESOME PART! (new fav ;)

keep it up sweety loved it soo much!

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#514

What a lovely and funny update! Lolz. Geet kissed him on his cheek and their little romance on the sofa was really cute....lolz. Oh, so Maan planned to make Geet act his mangetar........giving Dadi ka bahana and all......smart......lolz. Lolz at Geet's rules......they have already broken them so many times.....lolz......and Maan wanted to see her in a sari......this guy......kinda sweet actually. Maan 's family is sort of good......and Preet is such a cute kiddo......really lovable! Lolz.....Maan and Geet are such kids....fighting over Preet......even Preet could not help but call them kids......Maan's so good at teasing and annoying Geet......such a flirt! Lolz.....Oooo...Geet called Dadi for help.....guess Maan's gonna be in trouble now.....lolz.....all in all a wonderful update! Do continue soon.

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Ayesha_MSK

@Ayesha_MSK

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Posted: 14 years ago

#515

Oh Maan..why prove yourself to be a hypocrite? 😉

One he advises poor, impressionable Preet to stay away from girls and then two, he can't control himself whenever Geet is remotely close to him... 😆😆😆

I really like this FF so far, especially how Geet has retained her childishness till date...
Her chewing gum all the time and frequently blowing bubbles is truly a very endearing image of her 😊

I need to read more! 😃
Thanks for the PMs and continue asap ⭐️

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Jassi

@--jassi--

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: Mina H
HEEYYYY great update... but plzzzz make a super dupper long update... plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz... and all of ur updates are just sooo well written, i just love the way u describe geet and maan's nature and awwwwwwwwww maan does make geets heart go dhak dhak!! :P nways plz count sooonnnnn, like i mean reali reali reali sooonnnn! :D

Okay Mina Dear!!

Super long update next time!!

Thanks for ur wonderful comments!

I think u shold continue soooooon tooo!!!!

Ur update was shorter than mine!

-Jassi

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Jassi

@--jassi--

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: nithi07
heyyyy wonderful update..... next time can u make it little longer 😉 😆 thanks for the pm ......

Thanks!!! I'll make it longer next time! :-) -Jassi

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Jassi

@--jassi--

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: jainypatel
awesome update dear and thnx for the pm🤗

Thanks! -Jassi

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Jassi

@--jassi--

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#519

Originally posted by: chubzy
Wow tat was d cutest update!loved to read thanx 4 pm.update soon

Aww! Thanks sooo much! -Jassi

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Jassi

@--jassi--

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#520

Originally posted by: ayeshaaa.
heyyyaa! sorry! I m very busy with school! ;((

FINALLLY YOU UPDATEDD! YAYY!

AMAZING AMAZING UPDT!

haha! first, the morning kiss on maan's cheekk! BAD MAAN! HE WAS awake when she kissed him!! hahaah! and then Geet was ON TOP OF MAAN! & he kissed her on her cheek! aww! love how he was holding her by her waist & wrist..

TouchmeNOT! hahah! I love when he says that to Geet..

LOVEE howw he asked Geet to marry him! I love how he askeddd out of nowhere..hahaha! soosoo cutee..and geet's reaction WAS JUST LIKE Maan thought! hahahah! wowww!! they soo are made for eachother!

LOVE LOVEEE how she wore a sari & maan kept staring at her..

Geet should wear saris more often! OMG! I m waitin for their engagement & then their WEDDING! AHHH! and then their scenes after marriage..

LOVEEE how Dev was like..where is bhabi? AWW!! and their fights in the kitchen..soo sweet.

I LOVE that kid! he is soo adorable! <333

I LOVE HOW MAAN is like..

I don't make you go Dhak Dhak...hahaah! and how he came close to her..SOO INTENSE! I m loving maan!

WE NEED A PARTY ASAP & Geet should wear a sariii! ;)) haha! and then a guy should asked her for a dance and maan gets jealous and goes to that guy and grabs geet from there and dances with her..haha! ;))

UPDT SOON PLEASE..on thurs? or try to do it tomm if you have that much hw!

KEEEEEP IT UP!