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Posted: 14 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: abi2010
🤣🤣 Very funny ......... l like ur writing style SAZ............ 🤗

Thanks Dear!!

By the way, my name is Jassi

Saz is my friend

lol

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Posted: 14 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: shrezzj
i just read all the parts and i love it!!!!!!!!! please add me to your pm list!!!!!
and update soon to! even though i shouldnt be talking....since i dont update a lot hahahaha 😃 😆

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Jassi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: namita25
awww...my angel......you are fantabulous👏👏
loved every bit of your update......I was so lost reading it.....could visualize the scenes...😍
the pillow fight secne was awesome........😆
waiting for your next update......😃

love
Namita

Thanks Namita!!!

I'm happy u liked it!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
awesome, amazing part.loved it.
specially pillow fight.
continue soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: ansah

gawd that was so hilarious.....🤣

so loved it....really cute..😳

and geet watching 'Drashti Hui Sabse Parai' 😆

that was all so cute and gurmeet getting wet...

really awesome...loved it...

keep writing 👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: nithi07
luved d update... thanks for the pm..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: Chotii
In response to Chap 8
pehle to.. jassi menu maaf karde!! - got here late to comment!! i wrote the comment saved it cos couldnt post and well.. oye hoye kuriye..!! wot an AWESOME update!! Ek dum vadiya!! Love love Loved it!
So it was a new amazing part! At first I thought aww it was real cuuute the way Maan cared for Geet - and of course he was still the hotty that he is with that temper! lol but damn all that cuteness sure turned super hot! - as I said earlier.. things gonna "heat up" in Shimla?? and my o my, u turned the heat Right up!! woahh, not only the maneet 'kiss' moment, but even after that actually - with maan's flexing muscles overpowering all other senses, it took a moment to come back to the rest of the fiction - all i could picture was that hotty in his vest lol FABBBBULOUSY written! so from cute to hot to super damn hilarious courtesy Ranjit + Bunty Grewal!! but sadda munda maan comedy vich kam nay!! - he confiscated geets gum?? LMAO!!!! i lovvvvvvved that! i thought it was a genius little addition in the part!! girl, you've written this damn well!

And finally the end of it - *shock.. shock.. and more shock..* MAAN ACTUALLY aritculated his feelings.. OUT LOUD??? - did he just tel her that his mind doesnt function due to.. er.. Geet?? wow!! + not even once did he take a moment and think to himself.. "crap did i just let her know/?" lol cannottt wait to read the next update which you've already posted woooooooo! - maneet still in shimla due to landslide?? HADIPPPAAAAAAAA!!!

Jassi ji.. (i am...) *shmiiiiiiiile(-ing)* LOL yay! yay! yay!! rocking update and freakin fab precap!!! ok gonna read the other one in abit and gonna reply to ur other replies as well!!! mwah! xxxxxxxxxxx
Loving it!!xx

Awww!! You don't need to ask for forgiveness! I Maafed you! lol Thank you soooo much Sazji I'm also *shmile(ing)! Yay!!! I'm soooo happy u commented finally! Dil Khush Kar Diya! -Literally! LOL! Even I was getting distracted while writing the part about man in vest!
hhahaa...Maan drives everyone crazy!

Thanks again for commenting!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: Chotii

Awwwwwww Jas!!! 🤗 u loved my OS? and voted for it too??? no way! awwwwwww! u have no idea how high pitched my squealing is right now! 😆 Ur sooo sweeet i'm actually smiling So much right now! aww thanx bubba!! thats sooo sweeeeeeeet of you to say!!! thank u thank u thank u thank uuu jas!! woops, I never really thought to mention it before I guess.. but with our Sallu+Veer+Maneet chats, I couldnt help throw that in there 😆 and about starting an ff or ss.. u know what, even this MG OS was outta the blue. I've never felt so compelled to write something before - Maneet made me do it + then with veer as an inspiration, my mind went mad and I just did it lol if I write something again I promise to let you know First! Pakka!

Now.. to Sallu 😉 😆
LMAO @ that cheedi singh + makhi dialogues + + + Salman's laugh in the movie hehehe!!! it was sucha funny brilliant role!!! I was cracking up throughout as well! and omggg MAAANS BHANGRA!!! so it wasnt just me who found it funny!!! - u know what, hes a great dancer but his bhangra sure makes me laugh - ESP the one in the dhabba, it was abit hmmm.. just.. butttt soooo cute nevertheless - his expressions make up for his movement 😳
and to be honest with you, I'm not so big on the film 'Garv' or 'London Dreams' although I say that, I still watched them sooo many times i'm so weird, I know. Sallu was absolutely mindblowing in them both of course and they were roles totally different to eachother - how Awesome is he?!! but still... compared to his role in garv, I prefer him LD and films like Dulhan Hum Le Jayenge, Pyar Kiya to darna kya (omg.. love him in that and the film so much too!), Chori Chori chupke chupke and defo Hello Brother - cos he's Super cute + funny in that! and ooo Partner!! LOve that film!!! like.. omg.. i cant even begin to tell u how much 😆
and OMG Jas u made me relive that moment in Veer! I have to say, after a long time I think Salman played a 'character' if you know what I mean. I think after Tere Naam, This has to be one of the most powerful bit of acting he has done, and that scene that u mentioned highlights it perfectly. Uff, he is amazing in that part! Love it tooo!!! + I have to say that in the entire film, he continously stole my heart.. he even made me blush. It was an immensely freakin breathtaking performance there is No doubt in that. One of my favvvvvourite movie's of his Any day!! I'll stop the sallu talk quickly before i start quoting his dialogues which where hell mindblowing!!!!

Jas gonna have sum foood and then i'll come back to enjoy ur ff and oops reply to ur other comment!! + read the update - i wanna read it so bad! lol Love you!xxxxxxxxxx

Wow!!

I just noticed how crazy we are!!

I mean lonnngggg convos over Sallu!

lol

u noe i also lovvedd him in Partner!!

I just love that movie too!

It was soooo funny!!

You know when i was like 2-3 years old

-and u were probably way older

lol

I watched Hum Saath Saath Hain!

and then, me, my cuzzin, and my sis

watched that movie once everyday!!!

like seriously!!

We used to like Salman-Sonali Bendre soo much!!

And then eventually when I was six years old

we started to slowly not watch it

and then we just stopped

and then this year it came on ATN and we watched it

and we're like

"OMG!! This movie has no frickin story!"

lol

but, we still love it cause it's a fun movie

but, then it gets stupid in the end!

and we couldn't help but notice how girl Salman is in the movie!!!

Always just shying away!

But we still liked Salman-Sonali Bendre pair

better than the other 2!

Okay!!!!!

I really need to stop with the Sallu talk!

lol

-Jassi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: nehara
oh man... i loved this update...
it was just awesome!!!

i mean... just love their fights....

and the precap sounds interesting.....

cnt wait to read it...

pls update soon... 😃

Thanks you very much!!

-Jassi